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New Post 3/18/2008 10:02 PM
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Choose Me. Love Me. ( a nick ff) [[update 5/15 chapter 22!!!!!]] 
Modified By Kate  on 5/15/2008 2:55:41 PM)

When I had met him, I was only one out of a million. A girl who had gone to his concert, and who came to the meet and greet afterwards. There is nothing extraordinary about me. It would not be a difficult task to find a girl prettier than me, and there are plenty of people with more self-confidence, more poise than I could ever wish for. He could have almost any girl he ever wanted, so what would he want with me?

Yet, something strange--something unexplainable happened when I touched his hand. Something right, and good and wonderful. I gave him my heart when I touched his hand, and I think he gave me his.

At first it surprised me. I looked up at him shocked at the sudden burst of feeling. I had just met him, I'm not even sure if I had told him my name yet, yet something was completed in that split second. I could see by the look of surprise and confusion in his beautiful, smiling eyes that he felt it too.

In that split second of contact I had lived a million lives.

Then it was over. Another girl pushed me out of the way. I didn't even get to tell him my name. As I was pushed backwards I tried to keep my eyes on him, but before long too many people had gotten in between us. Panic washed over me. I needed to see him again. He had kept my heart with him when I left, and as I got pushed out of his life I had taken his. We were connected until the end of time, no matter how far apart we were.

 I have never felt before nor have I felt since anything even remotely close to what I felt in that split second.But if I knew only believed in one thing, it was that no person, no object, no circumstance could ever even think of stopping true love.

 

 

 


 

What do you guys think?? should i keep going? is it worth it?? comment please =]]


"Twenty years from now you will be more disappointed by the things you didn't do than by the ones you did do. So throw off the bowlines. Sail away from the safe harbor. Catch the trade winds in your sails. Explore. Dream. Discover." --- Mark Twain READ----->Choose Me. Love Me.<33
 
New Post 3/18/2008 10:05 PM
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Re: Choose ME. Love ME. ( a nick ff) 

Wow! That was very nicely written! I love the line, In that split second of contact I had lived a million lives. That one really hit me for some reason.

Yeah, I think you should post more! You have a way with words.

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New Post 3/18/2008 10:15 PM
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hey chickie. that was amazing. it blew my mind. i think i might need some duct tape to put it back on. lol. *inside joke with my besties*. and yea. it was so awesome. perfectly perfect. nahh. that couldnt even describe that. but please continue. ily! xoxo!!

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New Post 3/18/2008 10:33 PM
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this is a really good start! you're ability to flow with words is really good! cant wait until you PMS!! :)


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New Post 3/18/2008 10:41 PM
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Re: Choose ME. Love ME. ( a nick ff) 

aww thanks!!!

I'll try and post more tommorrow if i have time.

Either that or I'll make time. lol


"Twenty years from now you will be more disappointed by the things you didn't do than by the ones you did do. So throw off the bowlines. Sail away from the safe harbor. Catch the trade winds in your sails. Explore. Dream. Discover." --- Mark Twain READ----->Choose Me. Love Me.<33
 
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