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hey :) i just wanted you guys' opinion on these two songs i wrote. You look at me like it's all my fault, Talk to me like I'm the one who walked. Your the one who left me for her, I thought you cared but I'm not so sure. There's so much you could have done, I wanna know why did you run. With my heart and tear it apart, I won't fall in your trap again. It's hard to dissolve all of my feelings, I'm fed up of all the reminiscing. I've been doing these past days, You chose her, let us fade away. There's so much you could have done, I wanna know why did you run. With my heart and tear it apart, I won't fall in your trap again. I thought I needed you again, We're better off as friends. You have no one else to blame, With all your pathetic games. [and heres the second one]
hey :) i just wanted you guys' opinion on these two songs i wrote.
You look at me like it's all my fault, Talk to me like I'm the one who walked. Your the one who left me for her, I thought you cared but I'm not so sure. There's so much you could have done, I wanna know why did you run. With my heart and tear it apart, I won't fall in your trap again.
It's hard to dissolve all of my feelings, I'm fed up of all the reminiscing. I've been doing these past days, You chose her, let us fade away.
There's so much you could have done, I wanna know why did you run. With my heart and tear it apart, I won't fall in your trap again.
I thought I needed you again, We're better off as friends. You have no one else to blame, With all your pathetic games.
[and heres the second one]
I can hear my heart beating fast, Lost for words right now, can't get out. Of what your about to say to me, You let them win can't you see. Their selfish and only think of themselves. They really don't care about anybody else. You listen too much to what they say. Hold my breath, hope they'll go away. To leave us alone, what do they want to show. There's nothing left but broken pieces again. Time goes by slower than you think, Breathing slows, my eyes afraid to blink. Why do you have to let them tear us apart? don't know if i'll make it alone in the dark Their selfish and only think of themselves They really don't care about anybody else. You listen too much to what they say. Hold my breath, hope they'll go away. To leave us alone, what do they want to show. There's nothing left but broken pieces again. opinions please :)
I can hear my heart beating fast, Lost for words right now, can't get out. Of what your about to say to me, You let them win can't you see.
Their selfish and only think of themselves. They really don't care about anybody else. You listen too much to what they say. Hold my breath, hope they'll go away. To leave us alone, what do they want to show. There's nothing left but broken pieces again.
Time goes by slower than you think, Breathing slows, my eyes afraid to blink. Why do you have to let them tear us apart? don't know if i'll make it alone in the dark Their selfish and only think of themselves They really don't care about anybody else. You listen too much to what they say. Hold my breath, hope they'll go away. To leave us alone, what do they want to show. There's nothing left but broken pieces again. opinions please :)
Awwww i think they were reallyy good your an amazing song writer =]
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ps. haha typing in bold is fun hehe
aw, thank you so much :]
aww those are really good!!!
Those are really good! I liked the second one best (; !
thankyou so much <3 i like the second one best too :]
Amber. That was astonishing. So much meaning. Just, amazing(:
they're really good, well done! :D
wow, thank you all so much. your opinions mean a lot to me :] thankyou! :D
woahhh, their really good! you have talenttt ;D
