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OK i wrote this.... and i love to right....so please tell me what you think
Separated but Never Apart. Annie’s eyes searched the airport. Nothing. Maybe she was too late. Maybe he left without saying goodbye. Maybe it was easier for him. She felt alone and small in the huge airport. She kept on looking. She looked at all the passing people why was she so scared? She knew this day was coming. She felt the tears begin to come to the surface of her eyes. She tried to hold them back but they fell one by one onto the tiled floor and splattered. Just like her dreams. She wiped back the tears and tired looking around some more. She finally spotted someone looking just as hard as her. Her heart leaped. She tried calling his name but she couldn’t. Finally he called hers. “Annie!” He came running towards her. She ran to him. Arms spread wide open. They embraced each other for a long time. He ran his hands down her hair as she buried her head in his chest. The tears socked his shirt. She could feel he rest his head on top of hers. She held on tight never wanting to let go. She could hear him sniff trying to fight the tears. “Three thousand miles isn’t that far.” He tried to tell her. She could bear it is. “It is when your on the other side of it.” Annie said. “I know.” he replied. She looked up with tears in her eyes only to see he had just as many. “I love you.” he said pulling her back into him. “I love you too.” Annie said. He leaned down and kissed her. He tuned his head. He had to go. “Please don’t go.” Annie begged. “I know, I have too just remember we will be separated but we, us,” He motioned back and forth between him and her. “We will never be apart.” Annie’s eyes still had tears in them. “I love you.” She said hugging him one last time. “ I love you too.” He said kissing her on top oh her head and then turning to leave. He ran off into the crowds of people. “Bye, Joe.” Annie said to herself as she too got lost in the crowd of people.
-Annie Scotts
Woah, that was really sad, but really good. Awe I loved it. Your an incredible writer. You should make that a one-shot and post it! (:
Thank you soo much, you don't know how much that encourages me!!!!!
ejonas78 (Annie)
Hey dearie! Thats an awesome piece!
The more i read, the more i kind of wished i was Annie. Just for the hug and kiss though :P
Cause they'll be apart :(((( SO SAD!
Yeahs. You're a good author --- If you see my essays or anything. Think you'll laugh your GUTS OUT. yes. its THAT BAD.
Thank you soo much for commenting
actually i would love to read your essays or whatever you wrote!!!!!!
thanks
Annie- ejonas78
Annie ! thats is super duper AHmazing! please write moree ! :)
that's really good :)
i loved it :)
omj srsly that is just THE most touching one-shot. I loved how just one short moment could be described in such detail and you could really feel the sadness exuding from each word.
Thank you guys all soooooo much :)
annie- ejonas78
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