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A FANFIC ABOUT JOE A LITTLE BIT LONGER------updated 8/07 
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CHAPTER 1

"I woke up on the roof with my brothers"

"There's a whale in the pool with my mothers."echoed through the bus from the bathroom

"And my dad paints the house different colors."

"Where would we be if we couldn't dream."They sang simotaniously in there kinda crazy and spunky voices

"Carlie shut up,"I screamed. They both answered in sync "what".

Carlie and Carlie are the two girls me and Joe have been dating for 7 years.They were best friends that came to our concert in Detroit, and by fate were able to meet us. When we met them we instantly connected like we were destined to be together. And through those 7 years it did seem that it was by shear luck that we met, and I thanked God that we did. Carlie Brianna is Joe's girlfriend and she is the crazier one we call her Bri, and Carlie Shane is my girlfriend, don't get me wrong she is crazy, but just a little more layed back, we call her Car.
"Hey Kev," screamed Bri from the shower, "I was going to get you some coffee but someone turned my alarm off."

We all turned around to see Joe knocked out on the bed in his basketball shorts and tank tops sprawled across the bed.

"How can you sleep in the same bed as him," asked Car.

"O, I don't" replied Bri,"He knocked me onto the floor last night and that is where I sleep."

Nick laughed, spitting milk across the table from his bowl of fruit loops.

"So that was that big bang last night."

"Thanks alot nick," Bri said sarcastically.

"O, you know what I mean," argued Nick.

"So how did you sleep honey," I asked Car.

"As long as it's by you ,good," replied Car.

"EEEWWW," screamed Nick and Bri at the same time.

Me and Car rolled our eyes.

"So Nick, what are you doing today," asked Car while still wrapped up in my arms.

"Actually I have to leave right about.....O my God, now," exclaimed Nick, "I was supposed to pick up Taylor a half an hour ago. Maybe if somebody hadn't turned off Bri's alarm."

Joe didn't even budge.

"Whatever, see ya later."

"Bye Nick," we all yelled as he ran out the door zipping up his pants.

"So, since your boyfriend is dead maybe us three can do something," laughed Car.

"Well, actually me and Joe wanted to take you guys somehwere so we can all talk," said Bri.

"OK, sounds good I'll go start the car. You girls ready?"

"Yup," they exclaimed.

I ran out to the car parked along the side of the bus and yelled Carlie. me and Joe play this game with Car and Bri we yell Carlie and see which one gets there first. Car always seems to win just becasue Bri somehow always manages to fall down while running. She is almost as accident prown as her boyfriend. But this time was different.

Car came running out of the bus with her blonde hair tied back in a pony tail bouncing as she ran, and her aqua tank top and jean skirt fitted to perfection. She jumped right into my arms throwing me backwards and forcing my to hit the car.

"Wait no bang or screaming, where's Bri."

Car nudged me in one of those cute flirty ways.

Bri came slowly walking down the stairs with her head down. Her long brown hair pulled back in a black and white polka dot headband, but stilll managing to hide her face. Her little black halter top sun dress grazing across her tiny figure from the wind.

"What's the matter Bri," Car asked showing some concern and grabbing my hand a little tighter.

"I think something is the matter with Joe. I mean it is 2:00 and he still isn't up, he hasn't even budged."

"Well did you try waking him up," I asked in a kind of sarcastic tone.

"Well no," she said while slowly walking back up the steps of the tour bus.

Car leaned over to kiss me with her bright green eyes and pouty strawberry lip gloss covered lips teasing me, but she suddenly was stopped by a scream.

"O God what did Joe do now."

"No, that wasn't one of Carlie's playful screams."

She ran to the bus faster than i have ever seen her before. I knew something was the matter when she used her real name.
I followed behind her, until I found Bri on her knees panting over Joe, who had somehow been flipped over but still had no't woken up.

"Someone, someone call an ambulance," cried Bri histarically, "He is barley breathing."


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SO tell me what y'all think!!!


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Bhahaha

"Well since your bopyfriend is dead.."

LMAO

Wtf JOSEPH!

BREATHE!

BREATHE MAN BREATHE!

:)

\*mouth to mouth*

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alrighty here is the second chapter

 

 

this is when it gets kinda intense

Chapter 2

Ok this was the hardest chapter for me to write it is 100% true about Bobby. He was my cousin

"So Carlie tell me exactly what happened last night,"said Dr. Das

Dr. Das was a very short man with the heaviest Indian accent I had ever heard.

"Well, Joe and I were laying in bed when ......," there was a short pause as tears started flowing down Bri's face, "Sorry this is really hard, anyways he knocked me off the bed and onto the floor. He leaned over and said,'Not so graceful huh."

Bri's eyes were starting to swell, she was choking up and was having trouble getting everything out, but she managed in a very shaky voice.

"I laughed, but his eyes looked very hazed. I asked if he was OK and he said he had a very bad headache. So I got him some Tylenol and told him to sleep it off he should be fine. He didn't wake up the next morning, but we all ignored it because he never gets up early."

Car was holding Bri in her arms as I held her hand and ran my other hand up and down her shaking spine. The mascara on her face had all been wiped of by now, and her shirt had stains along the sleeves to prove it. She had thrown her hair in a pony tail making it even easier to see how swollen her eyes were. She was shaking barely able to hold herself up. Her free hand barley able to be brought up to cover her face.

"Carlie did Joe fall earlier in the day."

"Actually yea, we were getting out of the car when, as usual, he tripped." Bri pushed up a very unconvincible chuckle.

"He fell backwards and hit the back of his head on the board walk, I asked him if it was OK and he said it didn't hurt, so I thought nothing about it."

"Well Carlie," said the doctor in kind of a sympathetic way," Joe has a blood clot by his brain, it is putting pressure on it. That is what caused him to black out an lose consciousness. He never regained it from last night."

Bri backed into the wall and sank to the floor holding her head in her hands. She could barely breathe and was shaking and crying. The doctor walked way and told us to comfort her.

Bri sat in the corner of the dark empty waiting room sobbing uncontrolabley into her hands. She had good reason to be though. You see Bri's cousin Bobby had just died a year earlier because of a blood clot putting pressure on his brain. He had gotten into a fight at a local bar, and was knocked to the ground hitting his head on the hard parking lot pavement. He came home fine, but later passed out in the shower. He was rushed to the hospital where they were informed he had a blood clot putting pressure on his brain. Bobby was on life support for three days until his organs started to fail, they had to let him go. Bri has never fully recovered from that incident. Mainly because she was a the house he passed out in, but also because he offered to stay with her and watch movies. She told him no, go have a good time with your friends and we can be together tomorrow. For her it never happened, and now the same thing happened again.

"Why O my God, why." cried Bri

"O Carlie I know it is hard, but you have to push through it just like you did with Bobby."

"Yea, but Car this is a little different. You see the reason I didn't want us to do anything was well," There was a long devastating pause.

Bri gasped for air and all in one sentence said, "Joe proposed to me last night and we were going to tell you, so now I might not just lose my boyfriend but my future husband."

Bri broke down and Car grabbed her in her arms and rocked her back in forth. I had no idea what to do or say I was in shock

All of a sudden Nick barged in arm and arm with Taylor

"So what did we miss?"


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LMAO Nick My love

YOu ruin everything :)


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It's pretty good, but this should be posted in the Fanfic Section. 
Hopefully one of the Mods will move it :p


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New Post 7/13/2008 6:36 PM
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Yea I jus joined and din't reaize there was a fan fic section LOL


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Well if you want to read my fanfiction, here it is: 
http://jonasbrothersfan.com/Community/Forum/tabid/265/forumid/62/threadid/600960/scope/posts/Default.aspx
I need more comments anyway ;D


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 LAYLA ANN wrote

Yea I jus joined and din't reaize there was a fan fic section LOL

its okay lol.
i like the story :D
Post More Soon!

 




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Chapter 3

Nobody could reply to nick. All of us just stood in shock studying Bri's face. Every movement she made seemed painful. She looked sick and weak and could barley hold herself against the wall. Her body was just limply sitting on the ground. Her face was beat red from all the crying. That was the only sign of life in her.

We all knew how much Joe liked Bri, but gosh nobody expected this. They always seemed like one of the couples that were just really good friends. You know the ones that are awkward and seem like they need to brake up. That was Joe and Bri but they didn't look so awkward. Nobody ever expected this.

I walked over to nick grabbing him and dragging him out of the waiting room into the cold dark hall way. His eyes were lite up with fear, and you could tell he knew something was very wrong.

"I just got a call from Car to get down her immediately. Where's Joe?"

I stood for a while trying to collect my thoughts so I could tell Nick.

"Well, after you left to pick up Taylor,Joe, Bri, Car, and Iwere going to go out to eat because Bri had some 'Big News'," I could her my own voice cracking and shaking I coughed a little fake cough just to clear my throat. My voice was getting very weak and I didn't know how long it would be before I broke down,"Um well, before we left Bri went to try and wake up Joe, but he didn't wake up."

"What do you mean he didn't wake up."

"I mean he didn't wake up!" anger was taking over my sadness, and Nick could tell.

"Kev, take a breathe, just tell me what happened."

"OK, well we called the ambulance and they rushed to get Joe. They took him here,and well." I couldn't find it in my heart to tell Nick that his brother had a blood clot.

"Well Kev go on."

"Well they found a.....a.....a....blood clot in his brain," I tried to say it as fast as I could to get it over with

"You mean like Bobby," Nick said in a very shaky voice.

A voice came from behind.

"Yes like Bobby." It was Bri she had finally gathered up enough strength to get up. Her face had some color, and Car was playing with her hair trying to put it up in a bun.

I could see the tears swelling up in Nick's eyes. His faced turned bleach white, and he was having trouble breathing. He tried to say something but couldn't get it out.

"What did you say?"

No reply.

"Nick, what did you say?" My voice showed my impatience.

"I said why!!!" Nick screamed and all the doctors turned around and stared.

Bri ran over grabbing Nick hiding her face in his chest and balling. Nick was rubbing her back and whispering something in her ear. She giggled, one of the sweetest sounds I heard all day.

"Nick listen there is something I need to tell you and Taylor." her voice was clear, but you could feel all the fear and sadness she was holding in.

"Do you want me to tell him."

"No Car, I need to."

"Listen Nick I heard Kev tell you there was some big news."

"Yea that may be an understatement," I piped in.

"Well Joe last night he um.......well.......he proposed to me."

Nick's jaw dropped almost hitting the floor.

"I....I....O my gosh."

"That seems to be everyone's reaction," Bri chuckled.

"I need some fresh air, you guys wanna come," Car blurted in to cut the tension. She always has a way with that, knowing what to say and exactly at the right time. It just adds to the reasons I love her.

"Yeah I think we all should," Taylor blurted in.

Taylor was a petite brunette, about the same size as Bri, but with a much younger face. She always wore jeans and a tank top, with this hoodie that nick bought her from Vegas that said 'Go Big Or Go Home'. She had the sweetist personality, and a smile that could be seen for miles. Nick and her had been dating for three years, and they were basically inseparable.

As we were walking outside Car ran up behind me, and jumped on my back. She grabbed onto me, holding tight, and whispered in my ear "I love you." That was the first time in seven years she had told me that, and I felt she truly ment it. She made my heart melt right into her hands. I felt so vulnerable, but it felt good. For the first time ever I felt like she tottaly relied on me. We were both going through a hard time, but in some way I was happy about it. Not because Joe was hurt, but rather I realized just how much I love Car, and if she wasn't here I don't know what I would do.

My thoughts of love and happiness were interrupted by a very familiar voice.

"You coming love birds," Nick said in a very obnoxious way while fingers laced with Taylor's.

Bri walked alone in quietness. her head down, watching every step her feet took. Tears still rolling down her tiny face, falling off the tip of her nose. Her hands in the pockets on her dress, messing around with something in one of them.

"Bri, what are you playing with,"Car asked.

"O, nothing,"Bri said, obviously lying.

Bri could never lie. That was her only flaw. She had everything else going for her, she was cute, smart, sweet, funny, caring, playful, and very talented, but not sneaky at all.

It was dark outside, and Bri sat down on a bench. The light hitting her from the hospital sign. Her hand still in her pocket, her head down, and her legs crossed.

Car jumped off my back, and ran over to Bri. Her eyes filled with happiness as she reached into Bri's pocket.

"Let me see what it is."

Suddenly her eyes filled with sorrow and sadness. She pulled her hand out of Bri's pocket.

"Can I see it?"

Bri nodded her head, but couldn't say anything. The tears reapeared as she pulled out a small shiny object. i couldn't see it, but I knew what it was. It was the ring Joe proposed to her with.

"God that's a small rock," said Car,"You would think these boys could do better."

Bri broke down into laughter turning and holding Car in her arms.

"God I love you Car."

It was a cold night. Who knew it could be cold in Alabama. I walked over to the bench and sat down as close as I could to everyone else to soak up the body heat. Car got up from her spot and sat in my lap. Her bright green eyes met mine, and I felt like I could see right to her heart. It said I love you Kev. She rested her light petite body on me, and wound her legs around mine. Taylor had her head on Nick's chest, and her legs sprawled out along the bench. Bri just sat alone. It was weird, Bri and Joe had always been together. I had never seen her alone without Joe. She looked so small, and weak without her head on Joe's chest or her hand in her favorite resting place, his back pocket. She looked at all of us, and tears started to swell up again.

All of a sudden there was a voice out in the distance. We all turned to face a gigantic hospital, with a huge sign reading "St. Mercy Hospital Of Alabama," and a small elderly lady walking out in a bright white nurses uniform.

"Which one of you is Carlie," she asked in a very high-pitched, but meek voice.

"Me," answred Bri and Car at the same time.

They looked at each other and bursted out laughing.

"I think she wants me Car,"Bri chuckled.

"Well are you Joe's fiance," asked the nurse.

A big smile grew across Bri's face and her eyes twinkled. She reached into her pocket grasping the ring.

"Yes, that is me."

"Well, Joe is able to have visitors, he is not awake, but he might be able to hear you."

"OK, thank you."

"Bri, you want me to go with you?"

"No, Car I have to do this on my own"

Her small body glided over the ground. She didn't even pick up her feet as she walked away. Her head was up as she moved, but her hand moved up her face to wipe away the tears, but then trying to cover it up with fixing her hair. I wanted to run up and grab her in my arms, but I understood. She needed to do this.

"I hope she will be fine," said Taylor.

"Trust me, she needs to do this," said Nick while rubbing her cheek.


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