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i wrote this.....i love to write....so please tell me what you think!!
Time We Had He looked at picture of himself and her. She was happy, he was happy. Time was something they weren’t ever worried about. As fat as they could tell they had their whole lives in front of them. Time should never be wasted. Because no one is promised how long you have. Why did hers have to be so short compared to his. He felt a tear trickle down his cheek. Ending’s can be happy and they can be sad, their story was happy why was there ending so sad. Images flashed around in his head. Images of him rushing through the hospital hallways. Sitting beside her bed. Looking up and see the heart monitor in one strait line. He held the picture between his hands. It was like he was holding a whole other life. A life that he could no longer live, because she no longer lived at all. He laid the picture into a shoe box and slid it under his bunk. He heard her say in his head over and over again. We are never promised tomorrow, Nick. That’s just what he didn’t want to face, tomorrow.
wow this is really good
wow! youre a really good writer!
that honestly made me tear up...ur amazing
Dude your killing me with your writing skills. That was so beautiful. && so well written. Your such a great writer. You could seriously publish a book with all your short stories!
that was amazing :) i loved it.
it was great!
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