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 2/4/2009 3:00 PM
 
 Modified By Mandy ♥[Be a rebel with me. :)]  on 1/31/2010 12:55:14 AM

EDIT: Any new readers or old readers, please go read the NEW prologue and chapters a few pages in. Character name changed. Thanks!

So Taking Chances is ending so I thought I'd start a new one. Let me know what you think!

Prologue


She pushed open the white door and light immediately flooded half of the room. She contemplated flicking the light switch on but quickly decided against it. She dropped her bags on the floor, her purse quickly following, before she slowly toed her shoes off. She reached down and turned her cell phone off before walking over to her comfy queen-sized bed. She crawled in and pulled the black and white comforter over her body burying herself in it. She heard a knock on the door before it was slowly opened, light once again flooding the dark space.

“Court, are you okay?”

“Leave me alone,” she quietly mumbled from under the covers.

“Courtney I just want to make---”

“Please Mandy just leave me alone.” She didn’t wait for a response before she rolled over, her back facing her best friend. As soon as she turned she was greeted with his face. Kevin had taken the picture of them when they weren’t paying attention and had slipped it into her purse. They had been curled up on the couch in some hotel suite when Joe had dropped a handful of popcorn on her. It turned into a popcorn fight and she had immediately framed the picture.

She reached out for the frame and trailed a finger over his image before grabbing it and throwing it behind her. She heard the frame break into a hundred pieces and finally let a tear make its way down her cheek, allowing herself to crumble.


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 2/4/2009 3:11 PM
 
This is really good =D
i can't wait for the first chapter
ladedeladedah...
if you need anyone for Nicholas let me know ;D
i better scurry off to work now..
Post Soon.

 


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 2/4/2009 3:16 PM
 
i love this!
haha a popcorn war!!
=D plz plz continue!

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 2/4/2009 4:21 PM
 

I cant wait to read it mands! i'm so exicted!


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 2/4/2009 5:49 PM
 

Mands!!! Wow, that prologue was really really good! I can't wait to find out what happened! :D

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 2/5/2009 1:33 AM
 

Thanks guys!  Your comments make me smile.  :)

I don't have any of the story written yet sadly, I have a few chapters mapped out.  I mapped out most of it then decided I didn't like it so now I'm redoing it.  But I PROMISE after I do my homework tomorrow I'm going to try to write the first chapter.


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 2/5/2009 3:02 PM
 

Bump!


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 2/5/2009 3:12 PM
 

Absolutely amazingly sad! And depressing! I hope it gets better. Post more soon!

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 2/5/2009 5:25 PM
 

Bump!


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 2/5/2009 5:49 PM
 

this sounds like it will be reallly good! cant wait to read it!


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