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 2/19/2009 4:54 PM
 

Prologue:
Many struggle with difficulties in their life, others more than usual. 19 year old Maura and 21 year old Amy Dale have had their share of difficulties and would give anything to forget them. Their parents have divorced and their mom has remarried to Mike. Because of this, the girls are now packing up to move from the dangerous town in New York they call home, to a sunny, welcoming neighborhood in Los Angeles. Sounds nice, right? Not for Amy and Maura- nothing could make up for the horrible memories they've had of not only their arguing parents, but also their ex boyfriends. Amy's love life involves not just broken hearts, but also broken bones. Her boyfriend never cared about her well-being, just her existence for late nights that ended painfully for Amy. Maura's love life was more aching mentally than physically. Being the pretty girl, every guy had to get a chance with her. Maura loved the attention, but she didn't realize what it really came down to in the end. The next day, she'd hear gossip from all the other girls, claiming the guys only liked her for her looks. When she finds out it's true, she cracks under pressure- she's no longer the pretty girl. Moving to L.A. means new beginnings and a "start all over". But when they find out they're moving across the street from the Jonas Brothers... they could care less. They want nothing to do with those boys- they could just be another one of their exes.
Will Amy and Maura find love in the boys? After all, With Love, Comes Trust.


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 2/19/2009 5:18 PM
 
 Modified By ojdgrl  on 2/19/2009 4:23:15 PM

Here it is! Our story: For some reason, the link isn't working... I'll fix it!
We would love some comments!
We already have Chapter 1 done, so if we get enough comments and bumps, we'll post it!
-Maura


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 2/20/2009 4:02 PM
 

BUMP!
Anyone like it???
-Maura


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 2/21/2009 4:40 PM
 

Uh oh...
No one's reading...
This isn't good...
BUMP!
-Maura


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 2/22/2009 12:17 AM
 

B.U.M.P

Anyone reading at all??

Please Read and Review, This story is going to be really good please read and review

Please

Amy


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 2/22/2009 5:08 PM
 

Chapter 1
Amy's Pov
I was laying in my bed as my cell phone rang for what seemed like the hundredth time. I looked at the caller-id it was my ex-boyfriend Rick. I sighed as I set the phone onto the table next to my bed. I rolled onto my back and started to think of moving out here.
~Flashback~
Maura and I both were woken up around 8:45 in the morning. So we could have enough time to get ready for our flight to LA. Mike our mom's new husband and our step dad and left a few days before us with all of our things. We stayed at a hotel since we had no furniture to sleep on. Before we could go to the airport we had to give the keys to the real-estate agent for our house. While mom was dealing with that Maura and I were handing out when Rick who for about 2 weeks was and still is my ex-boyfriend, came over. "Amy,can we talk?" Rick asked "What?" I snapped pissed off he was even here talking to me. "I'm sorry for what i did you don't have to move" Rick said as we stepped away from Maura and Mom. "IT has nothing to do with you and what you did, My mom got remarried I have no choice now goodbye" I said walking away. "Don't you walk away from me" Rick raised his voice grabbing my arm and pulling me forcefully back. "Let go of me now" I said glaring at him as I pulled my arm away from his grip. "Don't talk to me that way!" RIck yelled but loud enough for me to hear, before he slapped my across the face. "You don't tell me what to do, your not the boss or me now get out of my sight because you acting like this I'm glad I'm leaving your sorry butt" I yelled at him and walked back over to where Maura was saying goodbye to our real dad Paul before Rick could hurt me anymore."I'm going to miss you girls" Dad said pulling me into a hug as well. "You girls can always come and visit me, whenever you'd like to. And if for whatever reason things don't work out you girls can come live me with me if you choose" Dad said as he hugged us and gave us a kiss. "Ok, girls let's go" Mom called out getting into rental car we had. "Bye Daddy" Maura said hugging Dad tightly. "Bye Sweetie" Dad smiled. "Bye Daddy I'll call you once we get settled to let you know we got there ok" I said as tears started to swell up in my eyes. Maura and I hugged Dad one last time before we got into the car and drove off, leaving everything we have ever known behind. The plane ride to LA was boring, and long. Maura and I both slept most of the plane ride.
~End of Flashback~

While I was thinking of everything I slowly fell asleep

~Later that Morning~
I had woken up around 10 am in the morning and walked down stairs. I was still tired since I hardly got any sleep last night considering my ex boyfriend Rick kept texting and calling me all night.
"Morning," my little sister Maura said as I came down.
I groaned in response and sat down at the table next to her as mom set a plate of pancakes in front of me. Today was our first full day in L.A. Sunny L.A. made a huge difference for Maura and me considering we came from an ally-like street in the bad part of NYC.
"You okay sweetheart?" My mom Sara asked me.
"Yeah," I mumbled as I began to eat.
"Well you girls have fun today, Mike and I have to finalize some things about the house" Mom said.
"Okay, Maura and I will probably go to the mall today. Is that okay?" I asked.
"But before we do that, I wanna unpack a little more," Maura added.
"Of course you do," I sighed. Maura was always a perfectionist. She had to get it all done first before anything else. make it neat and orderly- that drives me crazy!
"Sure," Mom nodded and smiled. Before she rushed out of the house, Mom quickly added, "Oh and girls? Try to make some friends here. We're in L.A. to forget our old lives and start over. Try okay? For my sake?"
"Whatever Mom," Maura groaned and rolled her eyes.
After breakfast Maura and I got dressed. I wore skinny jeans and a fitted tank top. I threw on flip flops and headed downstairs to put on some music while we were unpacking. Maura came down and had on shorts and a cami- she never got rid of her pretty girl clothes. Showing off her legs made her feel great, but then it went all downhill if a guy smiled and winked once he saw her in something like that.
"You sure everything is okay?" Maura asked me. Maura may be younger than me, but we were close and there were no secrets between us. I trust her more than anyone.
"No," I sighed as we walked out to the trunk of my Jeep. I pulled it open and began taking the first few boxes out to bring them inside.
"Is it Rick again?" Maura asked, annoyed and frustrated.
I didn't bother answering her because she was right. I went inside with the first box.
I heard Maura groan angrily and she yelled, "Do you know how much I wanna kill that guy?!"
"Kill what guy?" I heard someone ask outside. I threw the box on the couch and ran back to my Jeep. Hearing a guy's voice got me worried after everything that's happened. L.A. is not much safer than New York.
Three boys were walking up our driveway in tight-fitting jeans and t-shirts. They wore sunglasses and their long dark hair reminded me of Rick. Two of them had curly hair, and the other guy who seemed to have his eyes on Maura, had straight hair. Maura had a box in her hand and a confused expression on her face.
"So you girls must be our new neighbors," the older guy said while looking at me.
"Yeah," I said hesitantly. "I'm Amy and this is my sister Maura." I pointed to her and the straight-haired guy smiled.
"Maura, do you want me to take those for you?" Joe asked, giving her a flirty look.
Maura seemed uneasy, but the younger guy said, "Stop Joe, you're scaring her." He and the older guy laughed, while "Joe" gave them a glare. I heard Maura snicker to herself.
"I'm Kevin and this is Nick," the older guy said and pointed to the younger one.
"Nice to meet you guys," I said. The guys looked a little confused, like we should have already known who they were.
"Where did you girls move from?" Nick asked.
"New York City," Maura replied.
"Nice," Joe said and smiled.
I rolled my eyes. "Not really.... We have to start unpacking. It was nice to meet you guys." I smiled at them.
"Well, do you girls want a tour of L.A.? We know our way around and I'm sure you'd like some help with those boxes?"Joe asked.
"You're never gonna give up are you?" Maura asked. Nick and Kevin chuckled as Joe stood there innocently. "Here," Maura said, handing- or should I say shoving- the box to Joe. "Take this and put it in the living room."
Joe smiled and said, "Of course."

 

There's Chapter 1 Please Read & Review

Amy(Ames)


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 2/22/2009 7:14 PM
 

I love this story! Sorry you don't have any more commenters yet but I bet people are reading, can't wait for the next chapter  

 

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 2/23/2009 4:13 PM
 

OMG Twizzlers! Thanks so much!
I'm listening to "Love Is On Its way" by JB, and I totally agree with them! 
Hold on another day cuz love is on its way. 
You'll find it's gonna be okay cuz love is on its way.
It's alright, you'll find a birghter day cuz love is on its way!
I love that song- they sound great! The CD comes out tomorrow! :)
Hopefully, I'll be able to post Chapter 2 in a little bit.
While you're waiting, get more readers! :)
-Maura


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 2/27/2009 4:27 PM
 

BUMP for JB's 3D Movie coming out today!!!!
I emailed the chapter to Amy- so it may be up soon!!!
Seeing the movie tonight- so pumped!
-Maura


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 3/1/2009 1:45 PM
 
Chapter 2
 
Maura’s POV
 
            Once I accepted Joe’s offer of helping me with the boxes, Kevin and Nick became involved, too. Amy was a little hesitant at first, but I gave her a knowing look, so she accepted. Once the guys went in with the boxes, Amy pulled me aside.
            “Maura, what are you doing? We don’t even know these guys, and you’re just gonna let them into our house?”
            I rolled my eyes. “Amy, they seem like nice guys-.”
            “That’s exactly what you said about your last three exes!” Amy interrupted.
            I gave her an angry look about the subject. She just crossed her arms over her chest. “Amy, they seem different… I don’t know just- It’s not like we were actually gonna go to the mall with them, were we?”
            Amy shifted her body and looked at the ground. “Well, I-.”
            Before I could interrupt her, Joe ran back out from the house. “Anything else ladies?” He smiled at me, but Amy just rolled her eyes and took out a box to bring inside. “Did I say something?” Joe asked, sounding confused.
            “No,” I sighed. “It’s nothing.” I opened up the back door of the Jeep to get my personal belongings. I pulled out my bag and swung it over my shoulder and took the special box marked “Maura’s Room”. Without even waiting for Joe’s offer, I said, “You can get the other box with my name on it.” I heard Joe laugh which made me let out a small chuckle.
            As we walked up the steps to the door, Amy came out with Kevin right beside her. “Havin’ fun Joe?” Kevin asked as we walked by. Amy looked up, but I ignored her smile at me and “accidentally” bumped her shoulder. Getting on the subject about my exes, really got to me and I didn’t want to take it from Amy.
            Joe didn’t respond once he saw my action. I began heading upstairs and told Joe to follow me into my room. We put the boxes on my bed and I turned back around to head out, but Joe appeared in front of the door. I knocked into him, my face mere inches from his. The scent of his cologne inhaled through my nostrils, making them burn.
            “Maura,” Joe began. I felt his breath against my forehead and I took a step back, my nerves overwhelming me for what would happen next.
            “Joe, we have to-.”
            “Why did you bump into Amy?”
            I sighed in relief, all the horrible thoughts released from my brain. Avoiding Joe0s concerned gaze, I began straightening my room in whichever way possible. Out of the corner of my eye, I saw Joe take a step forward.
            “It’s nothing,” I stated nervously.
            “That’s what you told me earlier before you bumped into Amy.” I looked up at Joe, all the hurt coming back to me. I wanted to tell him, but it didn’t feel right. It’s not like I have to.
            “Look Joe, this is between Amy and me- not you. So if you could just stay out of it-.”
            “But I don’t want to,” Joe whispered. “I want to help you. Maura, I can see the hurt in your eyes and-.”
     “Joe, don’t you get it?!” I exclaimed. “This doesn’t involve you! I don’t want your pity! You’re probably just like every other guy I met and I don’t want to go through that again. I should’ve never let you help us! Just leave me alone!” I stormed out of my room, pushing Joe out of the way. I could feel the tears threatening to fall and I didn’t want anyone to see me looking like this. I was going so strong, but now…
I ran out of the house, ignoring Amy’s worried calls. I just had to get away from here

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