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 4/6/2009 9:18 PM
 
 Modified By Stephanie [is lovin' life]  on 7/21/2009 7:46:24 PM

Hey hey!!! I'm Stephanie, and this is my new fan fiction "Try a Little Tenderness"!!!! I must warn you, I get a little slacking on posting, but I usually make up for it :-) Here's the prologue!!! Oh, and comments give me warm fuzzies!!!

The perfect guy.
He holds the door open for you. He calls you in the morning so you can be the first thing he hears in the morning. He plays with your hair instead of watching the chick flick you insisted on watching. He buys you presents on non-anniversary days just to surprise you. He sits and listens to you when you rant about your day. He has charmed your mom, and impressed your dad. He occasionally ditches his friends just to spend more time with you. He leaves you little voicemails in the middle of the night, telling you how much he loves you.
Yeah, the perfect guy. Definitely do NOT have him.
My guy is a nice guy, don't get me wrong. I love him to death. He's the best thing that's happened to me since I found a friendship with my best friend, Joe, and his two brothers Kevin and Nick. Actually, that's how I met my guy, my Daniel. Daniel is one of Joe's best friends. In fact, Joe told Daniel to ask me out, since he thought I was really cute and all. It's just....Daniel...is a GUY. You think of anything stereotypical about a guy, and you've got Daniel. Sports obsessed? Yep. Hates chick flicks? Definitely. Forgets our anniversary and my birthday? Rarely....but only because I remind him every day starting at least 10 days before the occasion.
But...I love him. He's amazing, and makes me incredibly happy. There's really no one, I repeat NO ONE, in the world that could make me, Lissie, happier. Absolutely no one.....


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I rock, I'm cool, you're not, Kevin drools. I won, beat that, I'm way better looking than Joe's dorky hat. Oh, what what? Yeah. What what? I won! ~My awesome rap in Cupcake & Skittles
Love is patient...Love is not self-seeking. 1 Corinth. 13:4,5
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 4/6/2009 9:30 PM
 

i love love love this so far!

Can't wait for the first chapter!!!

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 4/6/2009 9:39 PM
 

I adore so far!!

Cant wait for the rest :D


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 4/6/2009 10:00 PM
 
oooohhhh i likey! and im thinking there's somone!

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 4/6/2009 10:54 PM
 

Absolutely no one but NICK!

Can't wait, Des. It's already interesting.

~Arem~


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 4/6/2009 11:09 PM
 

Soooo excited for this!

I need to go finish reading the finale to PYWT also. But seriously excited for this =]

-Bekah <3


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 4/6/2009 11:49 PM
 

oooooh this is gonna be good i can tell

and heh yeah i'm with bekah

i gotta go finish reading PYWT as well, i'm not that far into it so...yeah

definitley excited for this though Steph!!!

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 4/7/2009 3:29 AM
 

Yay!!! I'm glad you all are excited about the story! Here's chapter one! Enjoy!

"LIIIIIIISSSSSSIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!"
Ugh, I thought. This can NOT be happening. I thought my parents changed the locks on the doors and windows....
"Lissie! Lissie! Lissie!!!"
"Go away, Joe! It's Saturday! I want to sleep!" I yelled into my pillow.
He sat down onto my bed and started bouncing up and down. "Come. On. Lissie!"
I groaned. "Joe...you may have the ability to stay up for 20 hours, sleep for 3 hours, and be ready to go for the next 20 hours, but I do not have that ability."
"You went to bed three hours ago?" his voice was suddenly confused.
I glanced up at the clock. 12:17pm. "Well...more like 9 hours ago."
"Then you should be ready to go! That's three times as much sleep as I usually get."
I threw the covers off me. "Glad to know you can do math, Joe," I mumbled as I walked into the bathroom.
"You look hot!" he called, still on my bed. I looked in my mirror. My hair was placed in all different directions, I had slight drool crust on the left side of my mouth, and small circles under my eyes. Joe's face appeared behind me.
"I betcha Danny boy would just LOVE to see the morning you," he said with a smirk, his left hand reaching into his back pocket.
"Joe," I said with a wanring tone. "You take a picture of me and send it to Daniel, you will face eternal wrath from me."
"Oooo, I'm scared," he replied
"Try me," I dared him, glaring at him with acid eyes
He put his hands up in surrender. "Alright, alright. I won't take your picture."
"Thank you."
Just then, Kevin ran in, snapped a picture, and ran out. It happened so fast, it took me a few moments to fully understand what had happened. Joe was on the ground laughing his butt off, and Kevin was nowhere in sight. Which was probably a good thing, since he would be dead. I shoved Joe out of the bathroom and locked the door, knowing that they probably would barge in on me.
I took my shower, letting the hot water wake me the proper way. I shampooed and conditioned. With the scent of lilac in the air from my body wash, I stepped out and finished drying off. I wrapped my towel tightly around me as I walked out of my bathroom. Joe was sitting on my bed, a goofy grin on his face.
"Out," I said, pointing to the door
"Awe, Liss. You're no fun," he whined, standing up
My mouth gaped as I stared at him. "Joseph Adam Jonas, I am appauled."
"Hey, what can I say," he said, walking over to me. "I'm a guy!"
He pecked my cheek and ran out. Such a dork, I thought as I locked the door. I pulled on a tank top and demin shorts. Not wanting to deal with my hair, I put it up into a messy bun. I unlocked my door and walked downstairs.
Awaiting me were Joe and Kevin at the bottom of the stairs. Nick was sitting on the couch. The smell of bacon, eggs, and french toast was coming from the kitchen. I looked at Joe and Kevin.
"You didn't cook, did you?" I asked suspiciously.
"Oh Lissie," Kevin said. "It hurts that you think that we can't handle a few appliances."
"Well, in the words that Joe used earlier, 'I can't help it. You're a guy!'"
I walked cautiously into the kitchen. Everything seemed to be all in one piece. No smell of anything burnt, just the food that was setting on the table. Joe and Kevin appeared at my sides and lead me to the table, setting me in a chair. Joe and Kevin both placed massive amounts of food on my plate.
"Woah woah, guys guys! Ease up, I'm not a teenage boy!" I said, stopping Joe from putting the tenth bacon strip on my plate.
I started eating the food. "Aren't you guys gonna eat?"
Kevin shook his head. "We already had breakfast."
"Pft, speak for yourself, bro. It's lunchtime!" Joe exclaimed, piling half his plate with eggs.
Kevin rolled his eyes. "You're such a pig, Joe."
DING DONG
"I got it!" Nick yelled
"Fansss!" I said with a mouth full of french toast
I heard the door open and close, and some muffled voices. Then Daniel appeared at the archway into the kitchen.
"Hey babe!" I exclaimed, getting up and leaping into Daniel's arms
"Hey Lissiebear," he replied, kissing my cheek.
As we pulled apart, he looked at me and laughed.
"What?" I asked
He leaned in a licked off something sticky, most likely syrup, from the side of my mouth. I blushed with embarrassment. He smiled and kissed me quickly on the lips.
"Brunch I was not invited to?" Daniel asked, looking around my shoulder
"Hey, I had no idea they were doing this. Otherwise, I would've called," I explained. "Would you like some anyway?"
"You don't have to ask me twice!" he replied, grabbing a plate and loading it up with everything.
Daniel sat across from Joe. As he sat down, Joe and him did the guy handshake that every guy on the planet seems to know. He nodded over to Kevin with a "Hey Kev". After that, he was lost in his food, scarfing it down like your average teenage boy.
I looked around the kitchen. Joe and Daniel, best friends since kindergarden, hoovering up their lunch. Kevin, casually leaning against the counter, shaking his head at Joe. And Nick, standing next to Kevin, taking the occasional sips from his water bottle.
Yep. These were my boys.

~Stephanie aka Des


♥I don't have time to maintain these regrets when I think about the way He loves us ♥
JBelles: a family of Jonas Brothers fans who love and support each other
I rock, I'm cool, you're not, Kevin drools. I won, beat that, I'm way better looking than Joe's dorky hat. Oh, what what? Yeah. What what? I won! ~My awesome rap in Cupcake & Skittles
Love is patient...Love is not self-seeking. 1 Corinth. 13:4,5
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 4/7/2009 3:42 AM
 

FIRST COMMENT YAY!!

awwwwwwwwwwwwwww that was too cute

totally boys

haha i can so picture Joe and Kevin scheming together like that

and pigging out on food too...boys eat A LOT haha

loved it Des!!!

can't wait for more

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 4/7/2009 3:55 AM
 

this is awesome Dessy.
seriously it is.
and i can so see Kevin and Joe doing something like that...
the whole scheming to take a picture part.
although the whole cooking her breakfast part was really sweet.
absolutely love this so far.
post more when you can chica please.


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