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 5/9/2009 4:40 PM
 
 Modified By amanda   on 7/21/2009 8:22:04 PM

Since Trusting Fate is wrapping up, I decided to go ahead and post the prologue for my new fic. I have some great ideas for it...so... yeah.

Comments make me happy.

…prologue…

“Nat, he’s a wreck without you” Joe said sincerely as he stood in the threshold of her bedroom. “I don’t think I have ever seen him like this before.”

“Really Joe?” Natalie replied coldly. How dare Joe show up at her house unexpectedly, well she knew he was in town, but still, and how dare he start to tell her about him. “Does it look like I’m doing all that great here? Because, I’ll clue you in, I’m not.” She motioned around her room to its lack of cleanliness. Joe was completely surprised; Natalie was one of the cleanest people he knew. It wasn’t that she was a neat freak, it was more like, she organized things, for fun.

Once he looked around her room, Joe turned his gaze towards her appearance. The Natalie that Joe knew cared about what she looked like. But the girl standing in front of him had a pair of sweatpants and an oversized t-shirt on. Her hair was not straightened and it was thrown up lazily on top of her head.

“If you are both so miserable, why don’t you stop being so stubborn and fix it” Joe said frustrated at the situation.

“Because it’s not that simple” Natalie fired back. “You don’t even know what happened, so why don’t you stay out of it.”

“You’re right, I don’t know what happened” Joe conceded. “But that’s because neither of you will tell me anything. Hell, this is the first time you have spoken to me since you left. And Nick, well he just leaves the room every time your name is mentioned.”

“I don’t….I don’t want to talk about it” Natalie said as she sat down on her bed. She pulled her legs up to her chest while her back rested on the headboard of her bed.

“You can talk to me” Joe said softly as he sat down on the end of the bed. “I’m your kangaroo remember?” This earned a smile from Natalie and Joe took that as an okay to move closer. He scooted up the bed, until his back was resting against the headboard and his leg was resting against hers. “So tell me Nat Bat…what happened?” Natalie cracked a smile once again before resting her cheek on her knee in silence.

“He hurt me” she replied softly, after a few moments. “He promised he wouldn’t hurt me, and he did. Just like everybody else. Your best friend is supposed to be the one person that NEVER hurts you.”

 

**If you couldn't tell.... This is the kind of prologue that is a scene from somewhere in the middle of the fic. So.... it's not really supposed to make sense. hahaha

 

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 5/9/2009 4:42 PM
 

something tells me that young nicholas did something very stupid. because natalie is right...your best friend is totally NOT supposed to hurt you.

i totally cannot wait for more of this amanda. like, im super excited. :) yay!


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 5/9/2009 4:54 PM
 

oohh this sounds good!
i wonder what happened?
maybe since summers about to start i'll actually have time to keep up with this for real??! haha

PS: when trusting fate is finished...would it be possible for you to PM/email/message me all the chapters? i dont know where i left off and even if i did...i probably wouldnt know what was going on anymore. i'm such a bad reader *is ashamed*

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 5/9/2009 4:58 PM
 

oh yeah i can't wait to read more of this and find out what all went down between Nick and Natalie

i agree with katie....Nick is totally reaking of douchebaggery haha

can't wait for more amanda!

Loves this!

 


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 5/9/2009 5:12 PM
 

Loved it! 
But what happened between them?? 
I gotta know!

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 5/10/2009 2:00 AM
 

Woah.

I think I need more details before I make any further judgments about this fan fiction.

So the first chapter would be greatly appreciated :-)

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 5/10/2009 8:41 AM
 

Oh my gosh Amanda, I'm so excited for this, that was an amazing prologue!

What did Nick do??? Best Friends shouldn't hurt you, but sometimes they do, c'est la vie

Can't wait for more xD

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 5/10/2009 5:06 PM
 

First of all...I love the name Natalie *end pointless comment*

Ssssooooo.....i agree with pretty everyone....Nick is pretty much sounding like a buttface right now. Best friend? Yea...not if you hurt her! Gah!

Well...you certainly have me intrigued. So...i can't wait for more!

And P.S.....I love Joe. *end obvious comment*


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 5/11/2009 5:39 AM
 

Oo la laa! I want to know what happenss! Can't wait until you post moree! (:

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 5/12/2009 10:25 PM
 

bump

i'm gonna try to get a few chapters of this written before i post.. that way i will be like... ahead of it.

so... gimme a day or so.

Then the first chapter will be up.

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