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 7/1/2009 2:38 PM
 
 Modified By Lily[[I love getting lost into the music]]  on 7/12/2009 2:20:01 PM

Chapter 1.

Lily POV

 “Thanks Edwin, See you in December” I said as I stepped out of the car. I looked up at Junior Academy Boarding School.  

“Be good girls. Your stuff are already on their way to your dorms. Bye” He said before he got back into the car and drove away. I looked at my younger sister, Annie. I laughed as I saw her hair. She had the bright idea of having the ends of her brown hair dyed a dark red.
“What are you laughing at Lily?” She said as she looked at me smiling. I rolled my eyes.
“Ready for another year at this place?”
“No But what choice do we have? Come on lets go” She said as she started walking towards the West Tower. Annie and I have been going to Junior Academy Boarding School for many years now. Our parents are never around, so Annie and I have basically raised ourselves. My mom is a big time editor of a huge fashion magizine in Europe so she is constantly there. While my dad is sports agent all over the world, so we are never to sure where he is. So its been the same routine every year. Summer comes and we go to which ever parent wants us at time is for about a week and then we come home to a big empty house. End of summer comes and we are back at this school till December, winter break and the back to school in January. This past year was no different. This year though, is my senior year and honestly I cant wait to get out of this place. This nice cool breeze of the AC hit my face. I saw a lot of familiar faces but none that I liked. I saw Caroline and her cousin Samantha. They were surrounded by a group of girls who were probably soaking up the stories of how they went to paris and made out with all the models. Samantha and Caroline are what you would call then Queens of the school.
“My floor” Annie said smiling as she stepped off the elevator. She waved bye and turned away just as the elevator doors closed. To be honest, Annie and I weren’t into making sure people who we were or how much we had. Yea, we were rich, but we didn’t flaunt it like Samantha or Caroline. I stepped off the elevator as it reached my floor and headed towards the all too familiar hallway. I opened the door to my new room and saw all my things already there along with a girl standing on the balcony. I walked in and placed my purse down and walked towards the balcony.
“Oh. Hello” She said as she turned around. She extended her hand and I took it.
“Hi, Im Lily” I said smiling.
“Jordyn. So how long have you been here?” She asked.

“eh forever” I said as I chuckled. She smiled weakly.
“So you’re here in your final year? Why?” I asked as I walked back inside and started opening one of my bags and putting things away. She followed me inside and closed the French doors and sat down on her bed nervously.
“Yea. Its complicated” Was all she said.
“The rooms here are actually bigger than most boarding schools” she said as she looked around.

“Yea I guess, but what would you expect from a school that has a whole bunch of Celebrity or rich kids. Everything has to be perfect” I said using air quotes on perfect.
“Not a fan of being rich?”
“eh its not that its just, ugh, being around all these people that think money is everything. Its annoying.” I tried explaining.

We were silent for a bit. The only noise was the sound of me putting my things away.
“Hey Jordyn, lets get dressed. We have to be down in Clarks Hall for the welcome back meeting” I said as I grabbed my uniform and went into the bathroom to get dressed. The uniform is a black and white plaid skirt with a white button up shirt with a black tie. I walked out of the bathroom in uniform and put my knee high black boots on. Jordyn put some black flats on and then we both went down to the hall together. I liked this girl, she seemed nice which was good since we would be living together for the next year. 


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 7/1/2009 2:58 PM
 

Loved the first chapter I can't wait til chapter 2 PMS

Amy


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 7/1/2009 3:58 PM
 

loved it!!this school sounds interesting. can't wait for the next chapter! bump!


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 7/1/2009 5:56 PM
 

 Thank you so much! I was so worried about this chapter. 
Bump =D


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 7/2/2009 2:02 AM
 

I have the next chapter! Thank You! Thank You! Please no pictures! Haha not really you ca take all the pictures you want! (Haha!) I'm going to Shut-Up and Post It!

Annie’s Pov:
The elevator stopped at my floor so I said 104. I walked in and to my surprise I heard the shower running.  I found my 2 suitcases and 2 boxes on a bed in the corner near a window. I began to unpack my things. It took me 4 seconds to shove everything in a drawer with its friends, then I decided to work on my cork board which was blank. I glued a piece of cloth with the superman logo on half the board and a batman one on the other side then I dumped my bag of pins and pictures on to my bed. The shower turned off and out walked…
Becky! I jumped up from my bed. And hugged her giving her a startle.
“Annie!” She cried realizing it was me. “I love what you did with your hair.” I said.
“And your is… somewhat tame.” I told her.
“Haha.” She sarcastically stated.
“You know I’m kidding it looks great.” I said.
“Help me with my board? I got the chupa chup lollies, sour gummy worms, and water.” I said nodding  at my box that was slightly sticking out from under my bed. We sat eating and drinking while laughing at pictures from last year and reminiscing the memories. We lost all track of time and almost forgot orientation. SO I hurried and showered then changed into a short black and blue plaid skirt (not a slut skirt but it was short), a short  sleeved white button down, a blue tie, white knee highs with 3 blue stripes near the top and converse. Then we walked down to orientation.
There were only 4 seats left in the Junior section so we had a choice between guys or some stalker boy from last year who wouldn’t leave me alone. So we sat between two guys. Becky knew the one she sat by from last year and I think she had a crush on him. Max I think his name was.
“Hey Becky right?” He began she nodded shyly and I ignored the rest.
I turned and saw a cute curly mop sitting next to me. From what I could tell he had brown eyes. He turned and smiled. I could feel heat rush up my cheeks from embarrassment.
“Hi I’m Nick.” He said extending his hand.
“Annie.” I said shaking it. “First year?” I asked.
“Yeah. You?” He answered.
“Nope been coming since 6th grade.” I said proudly.
“Do you think…” He began but was cut off by the announcements.
After Dr. Steve the deacon had finished talking I turned back to Nick. “So what were…”  I began but noticed he was gone my smile fell. And Becky grabbed my hand to pull me to the table to retrieve my schedule.
“You okay?” She asked.
“Yeah,” I said plastering a fake smile on my face. I felt a tug at my heart as we walked off. 

2 C's (Comment and Critisize) Please!

--Annie--

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 7/2/2009 2:20 AM
 
 Modified By Jordyn  on 7/2/2009 12:21:23 AM

 Lily! I loved how you described everything and put in just enough character interaction!

Annie: Love the dialogue but this is the opposite of your other story cuz it needs more description lol

It's great so far girls! PMS

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 7/2/2009 2:26 AM
 

Jordyn wrote

 Lily! I loved how you described everything and put in just enough character interaction!

Annie: Love the dialogue but this is the opposite of your other story cuz it needs more description lol

It's great so far girls! PMS

Oh Thank you so much! 


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 7/2/2009 12:11 PM
 

Annie; that chapter was really good
well done (:

Lovin' this (:
It's amazing!


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 7/2/2009 12:52 PM
 

Thank you for comments/Bumps! 

Becky- thank you i was tired when I worte it and thinking it would suck so thankyou!

Jordyn- Thank you for the 2 C's it will help me improve my next chapter! And thanks for not being afriad to state your opion!I will try to add more description along with keeping the diologe!

Thanks Agian!
--Annie--

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 7/6/2009 10:01 AM
 

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