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 7/5/2009 1:23 PM
 
 Modified By Aisling {wants to join Joe in the creative corner}  on 2/28/2010 5:51:04 PM

Okie doke I've decided to start a new fic I hope you all like it :D

Prologue

Let me know what you think

<3aisling

The darkness pressed upon her eyelids, the only light emanating from the old street lights. She mentally cursed herself for declining the lift home. Sure Brad was weird but he didn’t scare her and she knew she’d be safe with him. She cringed at the excuse she gave him “I need some fresh air”. How much more fresh air did she need? She worked in a garden centre for crying out loud, constantly outdoors. She was so lost in thought that she subconsciously took the shortcut home. It was fine during the day, but during the night was a totally different story. No street lights illuminated this alley and Serena took in a deep breath as she rounded the corner. She was suddenly very aware of her surroundings. She was aware that she was too deep in the alley for anyone to hear her. She was also aware of three heartbeats in the shadows. She sped up, but panicked when she heard their footsteps begin to quicken also.

“What’s the matter doll face? We just want to...talk” one voice piped up, while the others laughed menacingly. It was obvious that talking was not on their list of priorities. Serena screamed on the inside and flipped her phone dialling her dad.

“Awh hunny, why’d you do that?” a voice like velvet said right by her ear. She felt his warm ragged breath on her neck, and his hand on her waist. She watched as he snapped her phone in two. He muffled her scream before it could leave her throat, her heart pounding erratically and following an entirely new beat of its own. Her eyes were wide and terrified as she took in the two other men now taking steps closer to her, their eyes on the glorious prize.

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 7/5/2009 1:34 PM
 

Whoa.

Aisling.

DUDE. That was intense! Serena's in a bunch of trouble now, huh? That prologue was awesome! Suspenseful. I want to see what happens to Serena and how the lovely Jonas Brothers come to play in this. :)

Oh, and I'm totally going to be an awesome comment-er. And bump-er. YAY!

pms, girlfriend.


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 7/5/2009 1:39 PM
 

that prolouge was amazing Aisling.
seriously suspenseful.
I want to know what happens next.
and as Jay said, how the Jonas boys tie into this.
love it so far.
post more soon chica please.


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 7/5/2009 1:57 PM
 
whoa ais this is the first fic i've read by you.
its amazing
whoa. (:
i love your writing style :D
uh oh...
i don't think the prize is good.
well not for serena. :/
o.o

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 7/5/2009 2:21 PM
 

Jay: Thanks for reading hun. Yay I'm glad you liked it :D The Jonas Brothers come in very soon, don't worry about that

Crystal: Thanks Crystal, like i told Jay the guys will come in very soon.

Aimee: Awh thanks hun, nope the prize doesn't seem very good at all does it? :/ Glad you like it

The first chapter should be posted tomorrow, if I can get a few more comments, but Ill be posting very soon, depending on how crazy it is at home tomorrow. Love you girls

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 7/5/2009 3:47 PM
 

OMG Apples!

that was sooooo good!

i hope Serena is ok!

hmmmm i wonder who the 3 people are

Love it!


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 7/5/2009 4:05 PM
 

That was Amazing Ais! I'm a big fan of your storys! Anyways just had to let you know that!

--Annie--

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 7/5/2009 4:58 PM
 

Hello there Aisling. Well I must say, that prologue was awesome!! I'm really excited for you to post more of this. I hope you have some fluff planned throughout the story because you know how much everyone loves that. Especially me. Hahaha ;P

Love you!


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 7/5/2009 5:23 PM
 

Peanut Butter: Thanks hun, glad you liked it. You'll just have to wait and see if she's ok...

Annie: Wow, thanks hun. more soon

Kellie: Psh of course there's fluff! i love fluff, so course im gonna write it :D Love you too darlin

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 7/5/2009 5:31 PM
 

Aisling {wants to join Joe in the creative corner} wrote

Peanut Butter: Thanks hun, glad you liked it. You'll just have to wait and see if she's ok...

darn it for waiting lol

hmmmm i feel a spamming session coming soon.... xD


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