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 11/7/2009 4:47 PM
 
 Modified By JusttTawnee;;Javi  on 11/16/2009 10:25:22 PM

Yay! I'm so happy. Someone auditioned!
I chose Aisling. Sammie, thanks for also auditioning.
I am actually workign currently on another one-shot,
and you'll be main in that one. It will probably be
posted tomorow afternoon cuz I have a 4-day
weekend! Don't go to school 'til Wednsday,
and even then, I come out early!This is a dream I had.
I just thought the song "I only see you" would be perfect
for it because it strangely goes PERFECTLY with the dream.
So enjoy. Or atleast read. I just learned something really
weird about chicken eggs.You know the pointy side
and the other end? If you put it in between your hands
and press those two sides in, no matter how hard you try,
it WON'T break. I tried it.My mom said, "If you prove me
wrong and are able to break it, I'll give you $100." So I tried
it, and its impossible.Anyway, in this one-shot, The Jonas
Brothers go to regular school. I left this up to you, you
can choose which Jonas it is. I don't name him in the
whole story. Oh yeah, one more thing, Get well soon
Nick Jonas!
I Only See You
One Shot By:Tawnee
Song:"I Only See You"
By:Benton Paul
Here lies Aisling Trinity Morgan 1994-2009 Beloved Daughter, Sister, and Girlfriend. “Forever & Always I will only see you…”-Aisling T. Morgan
Today is the worst day of my life,
The girl I love,
My life,
My all,
Has died,
If only I could’ve been there,
To save her from that car,
But no,
I had to be at a concert,
And now,
I’m at the cementary,
Putting flowers on her grave,
Aisling…
(Song)
In a crowded place,
I see just your face,
And it looks so familiar…
(/Song)
At school,
Its lunch time,
The whole place is really crowded,
And I see her,
Its impossible,
She died,
I run over to her,
She disappears before my eyes,
Was I just hallucinating?,
How I miss you,
Aisling…
(Song)
I can’t get to you,
Though I’m trying to,
There are just too many barriers,
(/Song)
I want to be with you again,
Hug you,
Kiss you,
Tell you that I love you,
I just want everything to be ok,
Just like it used to,
But I can’t,
You’re gone,
And its my fault,
Please forgive me,
Aisling…
(Song)
But I,
Only see you,
In all that I do,
To the rest I am blind,
(/Song)
I remember,
When you told me you loved me,
You said you only saw me,
No one else,
At that time it wasn’t the same,
I liked someone else,
But you stayed by my side,
Soon my feelings changed,
And I fell in love with you,
But now you’re gone,
Aisling…
(Song)
And I,
Don’t want something new,
Other than you,
For the rest of my life,
(/Song)
I’m in class,
And everyone tells me to move on,
But I don’t want to,
I only want you,
Forever,
There’s an empty seat next to me,
The seat you used to sit in,
And I hallucinate again,
You are sitting there,
Smiling at me,
I know I’m seeing things,
So I don’t smile back,
You frown,
You didn’t like to see me sad,
And once again,
You disappear,
Aisling…
(Song)
People talking loud,
I can’t hear the crowd,
You are so much more appealing,
(/Song)
*Flashback*
I’m at the venue with you,
There are so many people,
But I can’t hear them,
All my attention is for you,
So we talk and laugh,
Until its time for me to go on stage,
*End Flashback*
(Song)
I’ll be honest girl,
You’ve become my wolrd,
And I’ll spend my whole life wondering,
(/Song)
You were my all,
My everything,
And you still are,
You told me you loved me,
But I wonder,
Was I your everything?,
Aisling…
(Song)
But I,
Only see you,
In all that I do,
To the rest I am blind,
And I,
Don’t want something new,
Other than you,
For the rest of my life,
(/Song)
You told me you only saw me,
Even in a crowded place,
You said you’d be able to spot me,
And you always did,
I don’t want to move on,
I only want you,
Forever,
Aisling…
(Song)
Promise I’ll always be there for you,
If you could give me a chance,
Promise I’ll never be less than true,
(/Song)
You told me you’d always be there,
You said only death could separate us,
And it did,
I promised the same thing,
And that I’d be honest to you no matter what,
Aisling…
(Song)
But I,
Only see you,
In all that I do,
To the rest I am blind,
(/Song)
So again,
I drive to the cementary,
To put flowers on your grave,
And to do something else,
Join you,
Aisling…
(Song)
And I,
Don’t want something new,
Other than you,
For the rest of my life,
(/Song)
I take a blade out of my pocket,
I look up at the sky and yell,
“I don’t want to move on!”,
As I cut the veins in my left wrist I yell,
“I only want you!”,
I cry and yell one last time,
“Forever Aisling…!”,
Then I lie on top of your grave,
As I slowly slip onto unconsciouness,
Slipping into death,
Bleeding,
I only have enough stength to utter one last sentence,
“I love you Aisling…”,
And then,
I’m gone forever.

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 11/16/2009 10:58 PM
 

Omg....tawneee this made me cry ='[ it reminds me of romeo and juliet..despite the sadness it is really good i love it alot it really made me feel his pain thats how good of a writer you are.


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 11/16/2009 11:01 PM
 
 Modified By JusttTawnee;;Javi  on 11/16/2009 11:02:00 PM
You know, This was a dream I had?
I didn't see his face the first time I dreamed it.
Thee second time, it was Joe and the third
time I dreamed this, It was Nick. But You
can pick which ever. Which Jonas Did you
picture in your head?

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 11/16/2009 11:03 PM
 

wow you dreamed this? but like you saw everything even the part where he cuts his wrist? i pictured nick cuz you know how he's real deep idk why but nick came into my mind which is weird cuz i always picture joe.


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 11/16/2009 11:13 PM
 
 Modified By JusttTawnee;;Javi  on 11/16/2009 11:14:29 PM
♫Lely♥ JB Rays Of Sunshine♥ wrote:

wow you dreamed this? but like you saw everything even the part where he cuts his wrist? i pictured nick cuz you know how he's real deep idk why but nick came into my mind which is weird cuz i always picture joe.

Yes, I saw EVERYTHING.
But, In the dream I wasn't physically there.
It was more like I was watching him.
And then, having the same dream three timess.
AWKWARD.
So I just had to write it down.

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 11/16/2009 11:18 PM
 

wow! having that same dream three times?? that must be a sign of something who knows but its something straight out of a romance


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 11/16/2009 11:23 PM
 

awh. I loved this. soo sweet.

i wish it was a series, not a one shot. :(


Image and video hosting by TinyPic soo um, yeah this amazing work of art above was made by Jessica Marie. :)
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 11/16/2009 11:25 PM
 
Should I?
Make into a series.
Hmmmmm.
I'll think it over.
Nighty-Night Girls.
THanks Karren & Lely.

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 11/16/2009 11:33 PM
 

you should!! it would be soooo awesome


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 11/17/2009 10:07 AM
 
♫Lely♥ JB Rays Of Sunshine♥ wrote:

you should!! it would be soooo awesome

Had a WHOLE night to think it over.
Guess what?
I will make it into a story.
I guess this one-shot will be the prolouge.
I'll hold auditions shortly.
Do you think I should start from when he tries to kill himself?
Or Before that?
Do you guys want to read what happens before she dies?
When she dies?
And after?
I'm goint to make this a Joe FF because I already have two Nick FFs.

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