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 1/3/2008 10:28 AM
 
 Modified By libsterr. <3  on 1/3/2008 10:33:00 AM

Okay, so this is kind of a ff i'll be doing until my auditions for "justify" are over... so as you may know, the title idea is from two jonas brothers song, sos, and take a breath. In S.O.S. they say hugs are overrated, in Take a Breath, they say air isn't overrated, so that's that.

Chapter 1

I tried to breath. Truth is, all of this was insanely overwhelming. Nick ran over to me, yelling "Libby!" All I could do was gasp. I looked up at him. "help-" I tried saying, but it was useless. Everything went black, and I tried to figure out what had happened.

Okay, let me explain a little about myself. My name's Libby. I am somewhere around 5'4 and 5'6 heightwise. I have shoulder- length, honey- blonde hair, and I have one blue eye and one greenish- blue eye. I was pretty popular. Nick Jonas was my best friend. I was friends with all the Jonas', actually, but especially Nick. I had always had a crush on Nick, but he seemed so oblivious to that. Back to the story.

Nick picked me up and carried me to the hospital, which was luckily, very close by. I was worried about myself, but sincerely, more worried about Nick. He looked frightened and I didn't want him to be frightened. I can't bear seeing the face that I love worried. I thought. "Libby, everything's going to be alright," he whispered. I nodded, but then I passed out, yet again.

"No!" Nick yelled. I struggled to figure out what was going on. "I can't leave her!" He's so sweet. "Nick-- it- it-ok," I tried to reassure him. He smiled at me and hugged me, i treied to hug him back, but it was too painful. He smiled at me again and left the hospital. Now I was worried.

What'd ya think?! Okay, so i want comments, and i want 'em fast!! more as soon as possible!!

~Libby~


& you're as cute as a bunny.
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 1/3/2008 10:35 AM
 

you have to leave it at THAT?!

suspensful!

PMS!

xoxo

Lindsey


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 1/3/2008 10:37 AM
 

The Lovely Lindsey Jonas wrote

you have to leave it at THAT?!

suspensful!

PMS!

xoxo

Lindsey

lol yeah i do! cuz there is like so much i'm doing right now!! this ff, auditions for another ff, joint ff... so on, so forth... thanks!!


& you're as cute as a bunny.
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 1/3/2008 10:55 AM
 

libby!!

this is really good!!

pms!


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 1/3/2008 11:45 AM
 

BaM.ItS.EmILy. wrote

libby!!

this is really good!!

pms!

thanks Em, yeah i will i just want one more comment...


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 1/3/2008 11:49 AM
 

Does this comment count?

xoxo

Lindsey


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 1/3/2008 11:58 AM
 

PMS!!!! it's really good


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 1/3/2008 12:02 PM
 

LOVE it!

pms!! <3


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 1/3/2008 12:04 PM
 

The Lovely Lindsey Jonas wrote

Does this comment count?

xoxo

Lindsey

no, but the last two do, new chapter soon.


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 1/3/2008 12:16 PM
 

ok, new chapter, i really appreciate the comments, so keep 'em coming!!

Chapter 2

I tried to scream but I couldn't. There were nurses moving around me, as well as a doctor or two. I wanted Nick back. I hated hospitals. A doctor came toward me with a needle. "You need an injection," he told me. I hated injections, shots, anything involving a sharp needle in a hospital. He stuck the needle in me for what seemed like forever. It hurt a lot. He took it out and smiled at me. I closed my eyes and drifted off into a deep, deep sleep. And the day's events flashed through my mind.

Nick. Nick was there. As was Joe. And Kevin. They were all there. We were going to go see a movie after one of their concerts. We were singing along to "Take a Breath" and a drunk driver hit us. He hit us hard. My side of the car. I was the only one on that side. The only one bleeding. I remembered screaming. I remembered crying. I remembered Joe and Kevin running off for help, Nick still at my side. And then he took me to the hospital. And here I was. Sleeping, worrying, sobbing softly.

The Jonas' and my parents came. Nick wasn't with them. I asked Joe where he was. "He said it was too painful seeing you hurt," he said. I nodded. Nick is so sweet. My parents asked me how I was and I nodded. Then a nurse came and ushered them out. And I was alone, me, my thoughts, and two nurses. I wanted Nick.

Ok, i promise the next chapter won't be nearly as depressing!!! so keep commenting, and i'll keep posting!!

~Libby~


& you're as cute as a bunny.
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