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 2/5/2008 6:28 PM
 

Hey i was bored last night and wrote a oneshot.. here it is... i dont own the jonas brothers or taylor swift's song 'Tied Together with a Smile'

So you can imagine 'he' as whichever jb you choose   and imagine 'she' as yoursel;f or whoever.

She looks in the mirror. She judges herself. She looks at her perfectly wavy brown hair and wishes she had straight blond hair. Her peircing blue eyes are beautiful but no she wants green eyes. Just like the girls in the magazines. He looks at her like shes a godess. But no, she thinks shes ugly. Thats not true.... I know you...
Seems the only one who doesnt see your beauty,
Is the face in the mirror looking back at you
You walk around here thinking your not pretty
But thats not true...
I know you...
 
He tells her she is beautiful and she just laughs it off and walks on by. That night she lay in her bed and cried. Not pretty enough. Not skinny enough. She thinks nothing about herself is good enough but he thinks shes everything.
 
Hold on baby your loosing it
The water's high you're jumping into it
And letting go...
and no one knows
That you cry but you dont tell anyone
That you might not be the golden one
And your tied together with a smile
But your coming undone...
 
All she says she wants is to be loved. He's ready to give her his everything but no he's just a friend. She goes for the jerk who doesnt care. He brushes her off and hurts her. Her friend is there for her but she just wants to be alone.
 
I guess It's true that love is all you wanted
Cause you're giving it away like it's extra change
Hoping it will end up in his pocket
But he leaves you out like a penny in the rain
Oh, cause its not his price to pay.
Not his price to pay...
 
That night he was all she needed but she couldn't admit it. She cries at her mistakes. He believes shes perfect. She tells him shes not.
 
Hold on baby your loosing it
The water's high you're jumping into it
And letting go...
and no one knows
That you cry but you dont tell anyone
That you might not be the golden one
And your tied together with a smile
But your coming undone...
 
He tells her to hold on and everything will be fine. She thinks shes losing everything. She says goodbye and takes off without him.
 
Your tied together with a smile
But you're coming undone...
oh.
Goodbye baby.
Goodbye baby,
With a smile, baby, baby
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 2/5/2008 6:32 PM
 

i reallyy like ur writing style.  veryy good! i love it! && good song choice.



Nick: "I'll respond to your text messages, baby."
Joe: "My name is inreque iglasius."
Kevin: "My name is mufasa im the king of the land- im gunna smack you with the back of my hand."
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 2/5/2008 6:38 PM
 

Beautiful story. =]
It reminded me of Joe for some reason.
I love the song by the way.
KEEP WRITING =]

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 2/6/2008 2:16 PM
 

Taylor♥NickJ wrote

Beautiful story. =]
It reminded me of Joe for some reason.
I love the song by the way.
KEEP WRITING =]

once i read it and tried to place a jb in there it reminded me of joe too... i was thinking about making this more than a oneshot but im just going to write some more one shots so stay posted or what ev ppl say

 

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 2/6/2008 2:41 PM
 

I liked it!! it was really good!!

-courtney


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