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 4/3/2008 3:56 AM
 
 Modified By Angela {is thinking about life...}  on 5/15/2008 12:48:51 AM

 

Yes! The prologue is up! And I made it with... 4 minutes to spare! I hope you guys enjoy this, especially those of you who've been expecting this! (**coughRachelAshlynncough**)

 

Here's a link to the audition thread, so you can see the parts: http://www.jonasbrothersfan.com/Community/Forum/tabid/265/forumid/62/threadid/380537/scope/posts/threadpage/15/Default.aspx

 

Prologue

 
It started in New York City. Men and women were weaving in and out of the crowds in the streets, taxi drivers were honking loudly, and pigeons were flying, casting shadows and silhouettes over the towering skyscrapers illuminated in the sunset. In the distance, the Statue of Liberty stood on Ellis Island, a ferry taking the last of the straggler tourists back to the mainland, and the night life of the city had just begun to start.
           
            But past the traffic congested streets and crowded sidewalks, beneath that concrete, another city was also moving, but starting up for the night. Lights began to cast shadows over dark buildings, and one by one, houses, stores, hotels, office buildings, everything began to appear as if someone had flipped the light switch to ON. It was Nightblood City; the place of prostitutes and criminals, gangs and thieves, robbers and hobos on the run—everyone who was in illegal businesses knew about Nightblood. It was the ultimate underground criminal organization, but it was nothing without the Crimson.
 
            The Crimson… They were the four leaders of Nightblood, holding the most power, the most influence, and the most control. Everything in Nightblood was run by the Crimson, and nothing escaped their vision. They had subjects everywhere, reporting the conditions of the city, the whereabouts of certain people, or even just being the casual observer. Order was a necessity, and anything—or anyone who broke a rule was immediately punished.
 
            And then… there was the Luna Astralis. The Moon Star. Another organization, an assassination guild of women. Marked by the tattoo of a crescent moon turned on its curve suspending a star between its points, these assassins were dangerous, deadly, and as cunning as could be. Well trained in the arts of weaponry, fighting, and skill work, there were three levels.
           
Level one was of the Inceptors. Beginners, only just entering the world of assassins, target, and assignments. Last names were nonexistent; a girl’s first name was her identity, nothing else. Training was an Inceptor’s life, to be prepared when they leveled up and started on assignments.
 
Level two was of the Medii They were the intermediate assassins, doing low paying and low-risk jobs, like capturing criminals or killing minor and shady characters. A Medius had the goal of building up points, so they could earn their titles as Provectii
 
The Provectii were the highest level of assassins. It was at this stage when a Provectus was given a surname, normally one that reflected objects that portrayed certain characteristics similar to the personality of the Provectus. It was here that women began taking high-pay jobs and dangerous assignments, leading to the highest mortality rate in all the groups.  Death was common, and the average age of death was 25 years of age.
 
And then there was the Dominus, the highest possible position in the guild. An exceptionally skilled Provectus veteran would normally take the position, proving her excellence and mastery in the arts of assassination better than the rest.
 

And so there was Nightblood City, and its counterpart Luna Astralis. Two worlds about to be brought a whole lot closer together, all because of one single mission.

 

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Hope you guys liked it! Comments make the authoress smile and the fingers type faster, meaning more updates. <3

 

~Elle


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 4/3/2008 4:07 AM
 

OMG wow....

so well written

and i already love it!!

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 4/3/2008 4:25 PM
 

Hmm. A good start! Cant wait to see chapter one.

And I'll be playing a mean girl? haha. Fun.

Post more soon!


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 4/3/2008 4:46 PM
 
CHA-YES! I loved it! You NEED to post more soon.
I just found the parts, (I'm slow), I'M THE ASASSINATION GUILD LEADER. Cha-ching. I've never played the evil part before. The good part, I won't get killed. Bad part, I don't get paired. Oh well though!
PLEASE, POST MORE SOON.
With love;;
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 4/3/2008 5:57 PM
 

Hooray for minimum days! Now, mayybe I can start typing chapter one! And a bump to this thread for those who haven't gotten a chance to read this yet, like Ashlynn and Rachel!

~Elle


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 4/3/2008 6:08 PM
 

That was very well written.

I wish my writing skills were as good as yours..mine are horrible...but I still write!

ha.

ooh and thanks for the part.I found them at five this morning.ha.I'm a random person who's purpose is unsaid.haha.I think that's how you put it...

anyway.This was AMAZING.

Post more soon-eth.


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 4/3/2008 6:11 PM
 

wow this is really good for a prologue and i cant wait to read more of it

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 4/3/2008 6:24 PM
 

Oh my goodness that was awesome!
I love love loved it. 
I seriously hope you post more soon

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 4/4/2008 12:06 AM
 

 

So... Here is chapter one! This came way earlier than I expected, but... hey, who cares! Hope you guys enjoy this one, and thanks to those of you who reviewed!

Chapter One

 
Jade Watersteel winced as the knife glanced off her right side, nicking the delicate flesh covering her rib cage. Her left hand twitched, subconsciously reaching to grasp the new wound, but she held back the urge, only to narrowly miss another attack, this time to her left shoulder joint. Clutching the blade in her right hand more tightly, she ducked as a kick was delivered her way, and made a slashing movement horizontally across the stomach of her opponent.
 
Ashlynn Icewall muttered a curse under her breath, her left arm clasped tightly at her midsection. Growling, she watched as Jade wiped her blade on her already-ruined jeans, her trained green eyes locked onto Ashlynn’s crouched form.
 
Shifting her weight, she saw Jade prepare to attack again, and blocked it with the flat of her knife just in time, stopping the oncoming edge just inches from the end of her nose. Her silver-blue eyes flashed, and Jade was thrown to the ground when Ashlynn pulled off a wrestling move.
 
“Enough!” a voice sounded. The two girls looked up to see a raven-haired woman of 20 years clothed in a flowing white robes, standing in the entrance of the sparring hall, her face expressionless. “Jade, Ashlynn, come here.”
 
Ashlynn switched the knife from her right hand to her left, and used it to help Jade up. The two girls walked over to the woman, who was watching two other girls fighting farther down the hall. They seemed to be at each others’ throats, kicking and punching anywhere within reach as they glared daggers at each other.
 
“Rachel! Rebekah! Enough!” The two girls were thrown back from each other as a result of a hard blow, and they both cautiously stood as they watched the other. They walked over to where Jade and Ashlynn stood, each standing on either side of the two girls.
 
“What did you call us for, Nat?” Ashlynn asked.
 

The Dominus’s face was blank, but her eyes reflected something deeper and wiser than her years, flashing as she scanned the girls standing before her. “Provectii Jade Watersteel, Ashlynn Icewall, Rachel Goldwind, and Rebekah Fireheart…You have an assignment.”

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So I hope you guys liked it! Comments make my world go 'round. :)

 

~Elle


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 4/4/2008 12:47 AM
 

OMJ

i can't believe i missed this

i'm sorry! i really do appreciate you giving me the part :D thank you so much

i was just really tired yesterday

lifting, practice, practice, lifting practice all this week lol

but i can't wait to read!!! keep going lol


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