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 6/10/2008 2:46 PM
 

You Saved Me

His hand came crashing down on my face and i winced in pain. The tears where now falling from my Eyes. I slid down the door and fell to the floor. Crying, i brought my knees up and hugged them tight. I hid my face in between my knees, hoping this would stop his fist returning to my face. I could feel his presence still in the room.

"Please Help Me Please Help Me" I whispered into my knees, praying that something could stop him from harming me again.

"Your pathetic!" He spat at me, walking out of the room. He slammed the door causing me to jump. Hearing him walk down the stairs, i knew i was safe, for now anyway. I pulled myself up, pain coarsing through my body. I walked over to the mirror to see the damaged he had caused today. It never used to be that bad. We used to be happy. But then one day, he hit me, and then the day after that he did it again and it got worse. He only used to hit me in placed where people couldn't see. But now he doesnt care, aslong as he inflicks pain on me.

I looked at my reflection. Bruises covered my face, blood falling from my eyebrows. A tear fell from my eyes as i started at the mess staring back at me. This was the worse id ever been. I raised my purple tank top to reavel the bruises that now covered my stomach. I sighed heavily, and pulled down my top to cover all the marks. Sometimes i felt like screaming from the top of a building so i could be saved but that would never happen, i wouldnt be saved, i would get beaten more.

I heard a quiet tune coming from under my pillow. I quickly ran to my bedside and cancelled the call. I waited a few minutes, hoping he hadnt heard. The house was quiet. I sighed with relief and looked at my cell to see who had called. Nick. I smiled for the first time in a while. I quickly got up a text message and began to type.

"Wana Meet at Antonio's at 12? Much Love x"

I pulled myself back over to the mirror, i put on some makeup to hide the bruises. I winced everytime i ran over a bruise or a cut. As i finished my makeup, my phone beeped. Smiling i picked up my cell and looked at the message.

"Sure Babe, See you there x"

I shoved my cell in my jeans pocket and took another look in the mirror. Noticing that some of the bruises around my eyes werent covered i picked up my Dior sunglasses and placed them on my face. Walking over to my closet i picked a black long sleeved top and changed quickly. Taking one last look in the mirror to make sure i was completely covered and no bruises where showing. I opened the door quietly hoping he'd gone out.


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 6/10/2008 2:50 PM
 

its good. keep going. : ]

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 6/10/2008 2:55 PM
 

love it alana once again u've created a master peice!


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 6/10/2008 3:03 PM
 

I was right when I said I'd be hooked!!

This is heartbreakingly sad =(

But so very well written!!

Loved loved the prologue already!

Can't wait for more!! =D

xx nat


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 6/10/2008 3:11 PM
 

omg that was crazy, ridiculosly amazing! when she was getting beaten, i seriously felt pain in my heart for her... i'm already hooked on this story so PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE post more soon!

<3 emily

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 6/10/2008 3:40 PM
 

omg... k so that was intense...

and i reelllllllllyyyyy love it! its wickeddddd good

chicka hope u PMS!

<3 Marni

OH PS. Thankz 4 the part


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 6/10/2008 5:24 PM
 

Bumper Love<3


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 6/10/2008 6:55 PM
 

this is good!

cant wait to read more



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 6/10/2008 9:10 PM
 

this is amazing! so intense! i looove it!

PMS<3


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 6/11/2008 2:07 AM
 

Oooohhhh, I woulda been fightin' back.!


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