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 6/25/2008 9:42 PM
 

Okay so this is a joint fan fiction by me and Luna. I wrote the first chapter. Comments are cool:D Tell us what you think!

 

Chapter One;

It was a warm, sunny afternoon. Any kid would want to be outside having fun, enjoying the nice weather, playing games with their friends. Any kid but me, that is. I guess this is where I introduce myself. Hi I’m Alina Nicole Richards. You can just call me Alina. I’m the type of girl that keeps to herself. My parents say I have a very active imagination, and I guess they’re right. I see the world different than other people. To me, everything is not what it seems. Let’s just say I over think a lot of things, make them more complicated than they are meant to be. That might be why I don’t exactly fit in with the other girls. All most of them care about is what they’re wearing to their date tomorrow or if their hair looks good. That’s why its hard for me. I could care less about my hair style and it’s not like I’m planning for a date. Heck, I’ve never even had a real boyfriend. So while the other girls are going shopping and doing their makeup, I sit here and write. Well, type actually.

I lifted the top of my laptop and waited for the screen to light up. Once it did I moved the cursor over to the start menu. The list came up and I clicked on the third choice from the top. Up popped a small screen. I clicked the maximize button, and it covered my screen. This was my virtual diary. The place where I kept all of my innermost thoughts. I never let anyone see it, ever. Not that I had anyone to show besides my parents, but they wouldn’t understand how I felt. This is where I kept all of my poems, my songs, my thoughts. No one would understand but me.

I typed in the date, June 25, 2008, and began spilling my thoughts.

Dear Diary,

I just don’t get it. No one understands me. I’m alone in this world. No one to talk to, no one to tell how I feel, no one to love. The movies and fairytales, they’re all lies. All ending with happiness. But how often does that really happen? So far it doesn’t look like it’s going to happen for me. I just want one person to learn how I feel, and to actually understand. No one does though. No one cares about the people that don’t do anything for the world. The ones that aren’t famous, the ones with no friends, the ones like me.


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 6/25/2008 10:29 PM
 

bummmp

comment please(:


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 6/25/2008 11:49 PM
 

Whoa!!

I just read the first chapter, and I'm already hooked!

I feel like I can kinda relate to that girl, because I don't always fit in, and I'm not a huge girly girl.

Loved it!!

Can't wait to read more!!


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 6/26/2008 3:02 AM
 

bumppp


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 6/26/2008 4:40 AM
 

i loveee this already:D

post more asap!


LoveBug thanks Emily! :]
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 6/26/2008 11:56 PM
 

bummmp.

more will be coming soon hopefully!


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 6/27/2008 5:58 AM
 

wow Emily...just wow. it's almost like you know me somewhat. cause i can definitely relate to the character of Alina here. on a lot of the things she said.

anyway i love this story so far and i can't wait to read more girlies.

post more soon Luna please...or Emily. whichever one works for me so long as there is more story. =]


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 6/29/2008 5:35 PM
 

I think this thread is in desperate need for some....

BUMPAGE!!!!


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 6/29/2008 5:39 PM
 

oh wow. i feel exactly like Alina right now...and a lot of times...(:

PMS!


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 6/29/2008 10:33 PM
 

okay here's the next chapter by luna:D

Chapter Two;

I walked across the playground, my mind wandering and contemplating everything, from last weeks algebra test, to what was for dinner. When I reached my bench, well not my bench, just one that was one that was under my favorite tree. I opened my laptop and began to write or rather, type.

June 29, 2008

Dear Diary,

Wow. This week I actually got noticed by someone.  I dropped my pencil in history and it rolled far, where I couldn't reach it. Instead of having to ask to go get it, Angelina handed it back to me. Ha, look at me! Getting all excited over somebody handing me my pencil!

L.O.L. (Lots O' Love)

Alina

I wasn't all too concerned about being popular, I like getting to live in my own little world, without having to really worry about anybody else's opinon, though it wouldn't hurt to be noticed every once in a while. I closed my laptop and picked up my book. I was reading Eclipse by Stephanie Meyer. Part of the Twilight Saga. A vampire love story. That was another thing about me. I loved school. That's part of what makes me diffferent. That and the fact that my only real friend is Jasmine. I'm a senior, she's a freshman.  Just then my cell phone rang. My mom.

"Hey ma."

"Sweetie. Dinner's ready."

"Kay mom. I'll be there in a sec."

I clicked my phone shut and grabbed my laptop and book. I hoped mom was making steak for dinner. That sounded good.

 

 

Hope you guys liked it! Loved all the comments! Keep it up!

L.O.L. (Lots O' Love)

Luna


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