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 6/29/2008 12:06 AM
 

okay this wasn't exactly the best chapter but i still hope you like it. i'll post more of this soon probably.

 

Chapter: twelve (Nick’s Point of View)

It had been a little over a half an hour since my brothers and I began looking for something to wear for the Disney Dance tomorrow. I had chosen my outfit. It was really similar to the outfit I wore on the Best Of Both Worlds tour. It was a red shirt and white tie, and my pants and jacket were black. I wasn’t as in to dressy shoes like Kevin, so I picked out a pair of red converse shoes. I looked over at Kevin and Joe. Joe had picked out a white shirt and purple tie. He was still deciding between two different purple jackets and didn’t know what pants to wear yet. He didn’t find any shoes yet either. Kevin had started by picking out his shoes. They were black dress shoes that were similar to the ones he wore to the AMA’s. The shirt he had picked out was a dark blue color and he paired it with a black tie. He was now looking at which pants and jacket to wear. I sat down in one of the chairs that were leaning against the right side wall. Ralph opened the door and came back in the room. He had been gone for about five minutes. He was probably just taking a bathroom break or something.

(Emily’s Point of View)

Me, Kelsey, and Sam had been looking for what we were wearing to the dance for about a half an hour now. I had already found out what I was wearing. I found the perfect red dress. It came down to a little above my knees. It had some glitter on it. Enough it make it sparkle, but not too much. I found a pair of black heels to wear. They weren’t very high but they were really nice. For the accessories, I picked out some diamond earrings. My ears are pierced twice so I had a really small pair for my second holes and a pair that were a bit larger for my other ones. I also got a necklace that was a silver chain and had diamonds in the shape of a circle. Just about everything that was in the room was beautiful and I couldn’t even imagine how much some of it must cost, but hey, I wasn’t paying for it. Since I had everything I was wearing picked out, I went over and sat down in a chair that was leaning against the left side wall. To think, Nick Jonas and his brothers were on the other side of it. I looked over at Kelsey and Sam. Kelsey was still looking for shoes to go with the dress she picked. It was a lime green colored strapless dress that came down to her knees. It had a design sewn into it with a darker green thread and some parts of it were filled in with glitter. I didn’t particularly like it, but it was kind of pretty. She had picked out a pair of diamond earrings similar to mine, except they were much bigger. Sam was looking over at the jewelry when I saw her. She had chosen a blue dress and gold high heels. Her dress was the longest out of the three of ours and it came down to a little below her knees. The straps on it were really thin and crossed over on the back making an X. I thought that her dress was prettier than Kelsey’s. Sam was now searching for a gold necklace to match the gold hoop earrings she chose.

After a few minutes of watching them choose, I got really bored. I took out my phone and pressed ’new text message’. I typed in Laurie’s number and began typing the message.

Hey Laurie. I picked out my dress and stuff. I found the perfect one, its red (: I’ll send you a pic tomorrow when I have it on before I go to the dance!

I clicked send and sat my phone down on my lap. About a minute later it buzzed with a new message. I flipped it open and read what Laurie said.

Awesome :D I can’t wait to see it!

I shut my phone without replying and set in on the ground by the chair. Then I took my iPod nano out of my purse and put the head phones in my ears as I waited for the other two girls to finish.


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 6/29/2008 12:35 AM
 

Amazing chapter Emily!!

Psh... not good?? Please!!!

It's so ironic how they are both sitting against the wall!! I mean, there's only a wall between them, and they have no clue how close they really are!! It would be even worst if they DIRECTLY across from each other!! OMJ!!

For some reason, I feel like suddenly appearing in the fanfic with a bulldozer and crashing through the wall. =P

haha kidding.... but wouldn't that be interesting??

Loved the chapter!!! Can't wait for the next one!!!

 


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 6/29/2008 3:17 AM
 

haha mel. I love the chapter! I can't wait until they meet! PMN! oh and thx 4 the part in the auditions 4 the new Joe FF!


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 6/29/2008 10:06 AM
 

I loved this!

cant w8 fo them to meet!

Post more soon


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 6/29/2008 12:38 PM
 

Ahh i can't wait for the next chapter!! You are such an amazing writer no lie :D

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 6/30/2008 12:48 AM
 

thank you so much everyone:D im gonna work on the next chapter when i get a chance. i'll post it as soon as i can. im still thinking about what im going to write in it.


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 6/30/2008 1:59 AM
 

OMJ I love this story soooo much. I just can't wait for more. I love how they are leaning against the same wall and don't know it.

~Aubrey♥


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 6/30/2008 5:52 AM
 

wow this is really good reading :)

like it's intense...i'm reading and i'm like OMJ what's gonna happen next?


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 6/30/2008 7:56 AM
 

OHhh I need to know what happens next please post pleaseeee

 

Read my ff THUNDER please nobody is

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 6/30/2008 1:45 PM
 

 

 Chapter: thirteen (Emily's Point of View)

“I’m done!” Sam shouted to Ben happily.

“Me too!” Kelsey chimed in.

“I’ve been done.” I said still sitting in my chair.

“Well then I guess it’s time to go back to the hotel.” Ben said to us. “Gather up your stuff and wait here for a second.” He said as he walked out the door and shut it.

 

 

 (Nick's Point of View) 

Joe, Kevin, and I had just finished picking out our outfits. Well Joe and Kevin just finished while I had been done for a while and was just sitting in my chair against the wall.

“Can we go yet?” Joe asked Ralph who was leaning against the wall next to the door.

“Not yet. We can soon, don’t worry.” He answered. Just then the door opened and a man about Joe’s height with really light brown hair walked in.

“Hey, Ben.” Ralph said to him. “You leaving?”

“Yeah. We’re heading back to the hotel now. I‘ll knock on your door once we‘re headed out.” Ben said with a British accent in his voice.

“Okay, thanks.” Ralph said back to him. Ben walked out the door and shut it.

 

 

 (Emily's Point of View)

Ben opened the door and came back in the room.

“You girls all got your stuff?” he asked us.

“Yeah.” we all three said. I bent down and picked up the bag that Ben had given us to put our stuff in and my purse. I got up from my chair and followed Ben, Sam, and Kelsey out the door. Ben knocked on a door that we passed and we stepped outside.

“Oh wait!” I said realizing I had forgotten something. “I left my phone in there. I’ll be right back!”

“Okay hurry.” Ben said as I ran back inside.

 

 

 (Nick's Point of View)

There was a knock at the door.

“Aren’t you gonna get that?” Kevin asked Ralph who was standing next to the door still.

“No not yet.” he said. Kevin and Joe gave him a puzzled look. I figured it had to do with that Ben guy coming in here. Ralph waited about a minute and then opened the door. There wasn’t anyone there though.

“It was getting a little warm in here.” He said as he opened it.

“Yeah it was.” Joe said. I agreed. I don’t know why he left the door shut the whole time anyways. It’s not like there were any crazy fans here. It was his office.

 

 

 (Emily's Point of View)

Where’d I leave my phone? I thought to myself. I looked around. Oh yeah the chair. I ran over to the chair and accidentally kicked it into the wall and it made a thud. Whoops. I bent down and picked up my phone that I left sitting next to the chair. They better not leave without me. I ran out of the room, dodging a potted plant and the door that Ben had knocked on, that was now open. I got outside and got in the limo.

“Got it.” I said as I sat down on the leather seat.

“Alright. To the hotel!” Ben said happily.

 

 

 (Nick's Point of View)

I was still sitting in the chair. I looked down at my hands. I was getting bored. Then out of no where I heard a ‘thud’ that came from directly behind me. I turned around but all I saw was the wall. Oh well I thought.

“Okay gather up your clothes, boys. We can go now.” Ralph said finally. My stuff was already ready. I picked it up off of the ground and set it on my lap. Then I heard loud footsteps. I looked up just as a girl ran past the door, just avoiding colliding with it. All I could see of her was her dark brown hair and tall, thin figure running out of the building. I got up from my chair and looked out the door. The last I saw of her was her back as she got into a long black limo.

“Wow.” I said out loud. I wonder who that was. I wish I would’ve seen her face. Oh well.

“Ready, Freddy?” Joe asked me and put a hand on my shoulder. I gave him a weird look.

“Yep.” I said trying to ignore his attempt at being funny.

“Let’s go guys.” Kevin said.

“I’ll see you boys tomorrow.” Ralph said smiling.

“See ya!” Joe shouted as he walked out the door. Me and Kevin waved and followed Joe out. We got in the car and headed home. It was almost the day, I thought. Almost.

 


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