Ok so i worte this.........i love to write..........so please tell me what you think!!!!!!!!

Annie Scotts M.- ejonas78

Separated but Never Apart.  
    Annie’s eyes searched the airport. Nothing. Maybe she was too late. Maybe he left without saying goodbye. Maybe it was easier for him. She felt alone and small in the huge airport. She kept on looking. She looked at all the passing people why was she so scared? She knew this day was coming. She felt the tears begin to come to the surface of her eyes. She tried to hold them back but they fell one by one onto the tiled floor and splattered. Just like her dreams. She wiped back the tears and tired looking around some more. She finally spotted someone looking just as hard as her. Her heart leaped. She tried calling his name but she couldn’t. Finally he called hers. “Annie!” He came running towards her. She ran to him. Arms spread wide open. They embraced each other for a long time. He ran his hands down her hair as she buried her head in his chest. The tears socked his shirt. She could feel he rest his head on top of hers. She held on tight never wanting to let go. She could hear him sniff trying to fight the tears. “Three thousand miles isn’t that far.” He tried to tell her. She couldn’t bear it . “It is when your on the other side of it.” Annie said. “I know.” he replied. She looked up with tears in her eyes only to see he had just as many. “I love you.” he said pulling her back into him. “I love you too.” Annie said. He leaned down and kissed her. He tuned his head. He had to go. “Please don’t go.” Annie begged. “I know, I have too just remember we will be separated but we, us,” He motioned back and forth between him and her. “We will never be apart.” Annie’s eyes still had tears in them. “I love you.” She said hugging him one last time. “ I love you too.” He said kissing her on top of her head and then turning to leave. He ran off into the crowds of people. “Bye, Joe.” Annie said to herself as she too got lost in the crowd of people.  
Annie sat hugging her knees on the roof outside her bedroom window starring up at the night sky. She watched as a plane flew over above. She knew it was impossible but she couldn’t help but wonder if he was on it. Was he looking down thinking about her  as she looked up thinking about him. Was all of it possible. Was he really gone? If he really loved her would he leave the whole way across the country. She felt a tear trickle down her cheek and land on her knee on which her head now rested. Her cell phone rang in her pocket. She pulled out her blue razor phone and looked at the caller ID. “Joe.” she whispered to herself. She answered.
    “Hello.”
    “Hey. It’s umm.. Me.”   She heard Joe say in a quiet voice.
    “Yeah, I know.” Annie said tucking a piece of hair behind her ear and wiping a stray tear from her eye that formed when she heard his voice.
    “We landed, we’re in L. A. now.” Joe said, but then a long pause set in. Joe could hear Annie whimpering through the phone. He looked down at his shoes. There really was nothing he could do. “Annie, I’ll be back in a few months.” He tried to comfort her. But any way he put it, him being away sounded bad.  Annie loved hearing his voice. She hated that it was coming from a phone.
    “Joe, it’s not worth it, your gone within a few months you’ll find some L.A. chick and I will be the girl next door back in New Jersey.” She paused as tears fell down her cheeks. “And…you know it too. Don’t tell me that you don’t know that you will forget me.” She couldn’t control it now she was sobbing.
    “No!… no it’s not true.” He could feel the tears in his eyes too. “Annie, don’t say things like that. I told you that we will be separated but never apart .”
    “Joe those things happen in songs…not in real life. Joe I love you never forget that…just I want what is best for you and right now… that’s letting you go.”
    “I love you Annie.” Was all Joe could say.”
    “Love’s a big word Joe only say it if you mean it.” Annie said as she hung up. She didn’t know where she was with Joe, she didn’t even know who she was. She loved Joe and she knew it. She just didn’t want to get hurt by hearing what every boyfriend tells every girlfriend he ever has I love you.

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