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New Post 7/17/2008 11:23 PM
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Re: In Her Eyes [a NEW Kevin fanfic by Faye - Chapter 7 up 7/17!] 
Modified By Mel xox  on 7/18/2008 10:47:51 AM)

Awwwwwwww!! Thank you so much for dedicating this chapter to me... or partly to me! That means a lot!!

Now, on to the reason for this post.... the new chapter!!!

Okay, this chapter was absolutely amazing!! Even though it was extremely sad... like super duper sad!! I feel sooooo bad for Alyssa! Even though it is partly her fault for letting herself get involved with Tyler again, but it's not completely her fault, because she was still broken-hearted and partly in love with him. I blame Tyler more!! Ugh! I freaking HATE Tyler!! He's such a jerk, who's just ruining Alyssa's life!!

Now, I have decided to list the reasons why I hate Tyler. Just, get ready for a long list, because there are a LOOOOOOOOOOT of reasons. And, why am I doing this? Well, because I have nothing better to do with my time on a thursday night. I know, I'm pathetic, and I have like no social life. haha ANYWAY, here is the list...

1. He got a big head just because he got bumped up to first string. I mean, there's no reason to get all full or yourself just because your first string on your football team. It doesn't mean you're any better then anybody else.

2. He broke up with Alyssa because he got a big head!! (this is related to the first reason) There was absolutely NO reason for breaking up with her! I mean, who's the one who stayed with him even while he was a second stringer? Who's the one who loved him no matter what? ALYSSA!

3. He ruined Alyssa's Senior Year and broke her poor little heart!! Nothing else to add to that.

4. He insulted Kevin multiple times!! Nobody gets away with insulting Kevin under my watch! You hear me? NOBODY! Kevin does NOT deserve that crap, because he is one of the sweetest, most caring guys ever! And, that brings me to reason #5....

5. He hurt Kevin!! That was also partially Alyssa's fault, but if he hadn't kissed Alyssa, danced with Alyssa, or even talked to Alyssa at diner, then Kevin wouldn't have gotten hurt. I mean, everything was going great until he entered in the picture, and completely ruined it! If he really wanted to break up with the girl, then why does he keep entering in the picture? If he really cared about her, he would just butt out and let her live her life. He's just hurting her more.

And now for the last reason. I could probably come up with more, but my brain is just a little slow and tired right now because it's kinda late. So, I guess 6 reasons will just have to due.

6. HE'S A COMPLETE JERK!!! That's all I have to say about that. It's pretty self-explanatory.

Okay, so, that's all for the reasons why I hate Tyler, and now back to what I think of the chapter in general. So, I absolutely loved the chapter!! It was amazing, even though you had to break poor Kevin AND Alyssa's heart! I just hope that those two get together soon, cause they would make the cutest couple ever!! Well, as cute as Sierra and Joe, and Madeline and Nick.

So, Faye, please fix this!! Mend poor Kevin and Alyssa's hearts!! I hate seeing them all sad and hurt. I just want them to get together as soon as possible!! Please make it happen!

But, there is one thing I want to say: STUPID KEVIN FOR NOT LISTENING TO ALYSSA!! If maybe, just maybe, he had waited for like a few minutes and actually listened to what she was going to say, he wouldn't have left the dance so broken hearted, and then they would have been able to get together sooner. But, then this fanfic would be over too soon, and I don't want this fanfic to be over yet

ANYWAY.... I will now end this much-longer-then-usual comment. I can't wait until the next chapter!! Please post more soon!!

P.S. Sorry if this comment makes absolutely no sense... but I'm really tired and my brain doesn't work too well late at night. lol =P



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New Post 7/17/2008 11:27 PM
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Re: In Her Eyes [a NEW Kevin fanfic by Faye - Chapter 6 up 7/15!] 

 G-Fresh [{G}onas!] wrote

 Rock{Mel}Star wrote

 

 Faye(izzle) wrote

OMG!! That was well worth the wait! Everyone, THAT is an epic comment! What the heck would I do without Nat and Missa?!?!?!?!?!

NATILICIOUS I LOVE YOU!

And Missa...WHAT is with all the glaring...you know it will get better! :D

I LOVE YOU GIRLIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It took me forever to read those comments btw!

And Missa...stop spamming my thread with randomness ; )

 

So...update really really soon...tonight...I don't have to work and I'm really excited about this chapter...it's going to longer than normal but I really love it! I'm already half way done! YEY!

And Mel, I didn't forget about you! I love seeing your comments as much as Nat's epic ones! Thank you soooooooooooooo much! You are amazing!!!!!!!!!

 

Stay tuned girlies! Update sooner than soon!

~ Faye

 

Awwwww Your welcome!! You so deserve all these amazing comments!!

And thank you! Just comparing my comment to Nat's epic comment is like... wow....

I tried to read the whole thing but....man.... I think it's just too late at night for that!

Man, Nat! You have like a gift when it comes to commenting!! lol =P

 

She totally does!!!!  I say that all the time but she says its impossible that that is a gift.  I can't write those comments...i can only reply thus making them epicly epic

haha ya....same here. I don't have the brain power, or the patience to write such epic comments as Nat.



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New Post 7/18/2008 8:59 PM
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Re: In Her Eyes [a Kevin fanfic by Faye - Chapter 8 up 7/18!] 
Modified By Faye[izzle]<3<3<3  on 7/20/2008 10:02:30 PM)

Ok...so here's the new chapter...I really like it...especially the first POV...but ya'll be the judges! :D

This chapter is dedicated to Sierra...my real-life schemer and dreamer... +P <<<That's Faye...Sierra's drunken smiley...

 

Chapter 8:
 
 

 
            “Not a chance!” Alyssa spat as I waved three VIP pas.ses in front of her face. It was the 1 a.m. the morning after homecoming and we had just gotten back to Alyssa’s house and slipped into our comfiest pajamas. Even though Mads and I were still mad at Alyssa for what she did to Kevin, we had decided to stick to the original plan of sleeping over at her house since we knew the last thing she wanted was to be alone. We both realized it was not going to help to berate her and it was better to just try to understand, especially after seeing her in tears outside on the bench. We had all laid out blankets and pillows in front of Alyssa’s home theatre system and were getting ready to cuddle up and fall asleep watching 27 Dresses when I decided it was the right time to show Alyssa the boys’ homecoming present for us: 3 VIP passes to tomorrow night’s concert. But apparently, that wasn’t sitting well with Alyssa.
“Oh, come on, Alyssa,” Madeline whined jokingly, “It’s the concert of the year! Who wouldn’t want to go?”
“Me!” Alyssa said stubbornly, grabbing the remote and focusing on fast-forwarding through the previews.
“Alyssa, please,” I pouted. “I want to see my boyfriend!”
“Me too,” Madeline mimicked my pout and we both scooted toward Alyssa.
Alyssa rolled her eyes. You could always know it was bad if a puppy-dog pout didn’t break Alyssa. “You can find some other girl to use that spare ticket on. Just yell out on the street,” she said, still staring at the previews going by at a fast pace.
“Lyssy!” I said, bringing out the cutesy nickname I had made up when I was hyper one day. “You’re my best friend. It would be no fun without my best friend! Please.” I brought out the pout even more and Mads did the same.
Alyssa rolled her eyes again but this time a smile crept across her lips as she pushed our faces away.
Score! Sierra always wins!
“Fine,” she said softly. “But I’m not speaking to Kevin…because he won’t want to speak to me anyway.” I could see tears starting to form in her eyes and I immediately nodded and dropped the subject, satisfied that I had won that round. I scooted close to her and she laid her head on my shoulder as the movie came on and the tears started to flow from Alyssa’s eyes for probably the third or fourth time that night. I peered over Alyssa’s head to give Mads a concerned look and she nodded with the same look of worry in her eyes as in mine before laying her head on Alyssa’s other shoulder. I laid my head on Alyssa’s and with that we fell asleep dreaming of James Marsden and romantic weddings, hoping that tomorrow night would be better for Alyssa and Kevin.
 

 


*The next evening*
 
            “Thank you so much, we love you guys!” Kevin yelled into the microphone before we all ran off the stage after both of our encore songs were finished. Nick and I followed behind Kevin to the side of the and as soon as we were out of view of the audience, Kevin whipped around and glared at both of us. “Do you two want to explain to me why you invited Alyssa here?!” he snapped.
            “So you noticed?” I smirked, as Nick and I exchanged amused glances. “Couldn’t help but notice those big brown eyes, huh Kev?”
            Kevin looked away and began to focus on packing up his guitar. “I’m not talking to her,” he mumbled.
            “I knew you were mad at her,” Nick laughed. “She hurt you didn’t she?”
            “No!” he demanded, side-glaring at his kid brother. “It’s just…I don’t think she wants to talk to me.”
            “Maybe so,” I said, patting him on the shoulder, “but it will certainly be hard to marry her and have kids one day if you two don’t talk to each other.” Nick and I burst out laughing at my clever remark but Kevin was not at all amused and instead rolled his eyes and stormed off toward the warm-up room. That made Nick and I crack up even more because now we were sure we were right.
            “You two might want to compose yourself for the ladies,” a deep voice said behind us. Nick and I both spun around at the same time, bumping heads in the process.
            “Ouch!” I yelped. “Nick, keep your big head away from mine!” I laughed, rubbing my sore noggin. Then I looked ahead to see Big Rob standing there with Sierra, Madeline, and Alyssa.
“I’m sorry!” Nick snapped before running over to Madeline and taking her in his arms and kissing her gently.
A huge smile appeared on my lips as I saw Sierra’s blue eyes and I ran over to her and wrapped my arms around her waist. “Sierra, Nick hurt me head,” I whined and pouted playfully.
            “Well, maybe if it wasn’t so big…” she giggled, wrapping her arms around my neck.
            I stuck my tongue out at her. “My head’s not big! But it does need a kiss,” I pouted again, pulling her closer to me. She giggled again and leaned forward and kissed the sore spot on my head. Then I leaned forward and pressed my lips to hers, feeling like it had been twelve months instead of twelve hours since I had kissed her last.
            After a moment, Sierra pulled away smiling then nudged her head toward Alyssa, who was standing aside alone looking at the floor. I nodded at Sierra and let go of her waist and walked over and pulled Alyssa into a hug. She pulled away after a second and smiled appreciatively before Nick came over and gave her a hug as well.
            “I think she needed that,” Sierra whispered to me soft enough so Alyssa was out of ear-shot.
            “How are we going to get her and Kevin to talk to each other?” I whispered back.
            Sierra flashed me a surprised look and elbowed me softly in the ribs. “Are you telling me you don’t have a plan?”
            I grinned and wrapped one arm around her waist. “I always have a plan,” I whispered into her ear.
 
 


 

 
            I sat in the back of the boys’ bus with Nick, Sierra, Joe and Alyssa. We were savoring the time we had together before the boys’ bus had to depart for Arizona by watching a movie in their back lounge. We were also waiting to launch Joe’s plan to get Alyssa in the same room as Kevin, who was, according to Big Rob, playing Guitar Hero in the warm up room until Alyssa left. I had volunteered to supervise and make sure everything went well while Frankie was more than happy to be the bait.
            I felt Nick softly squeeze my hand and I looked at him to see him nudge his head toward Joe and Sierra. I turned to look and them and saw Joe nod at me and nudge his head at Frankie. I looked at Frankie and he nodded and thus the plan was set for take-off.
            “Nick,” Frankie looked at Nick and fake-whined, “can we play Star Wars on the X-Box?”
            “Frank, we’re trying to watch a movie,” Nick played along, “but I’m sure you can go play in the venue until we leave if you take someone with you.”
            With that, Frankie got out of his seat and scrambled over to Alyssa. “Would you like to come play with me, Alyssa? I could teach you how!”
            Alyssa smiled at Frankie but shot me and Sierra each worried looks, obviously a little anxious about the possibility of running into Kevin inside the Venue.
            “It will be fun, Alyssa, you should go,” I told her enthusiastically. She nodded and stood up. Frankie took her hand and started to lead her out of the room.
 Just as choreographed, Frankie paused to turn around one last time, “Anybody else want to go with us?”
“I’ll go with you, Frankie. I always wanted to learn to play X-Box anyway.” I replied as I stood up.
            “Good luck,” Nick whispered in my ear, squeezing my hand. I smiled at him as I let go of his hand and followed Frankie and Alyssa off the bus and into the venue.
            As we walked through the door of the venue, I spotted Big Rob and nodded to him. He nodded back and started to follow us.
            “Are you three off to the warm-up room?” Big Rob asked casually.
            “I guess,” Alyssa laughed, still being pulled along by Frankie “I’m going wherever Frankie is taking me.”
            Big Rob laughed deeply and nodded. “I’ll make sure you get there safely.” Alyssa nodded back as Frankie rounded the corner and stopped at a cream-colored door.
            Frankie opened the door and peered inside. You could here the sound of Guitar Hero coming from the room and I prayed silently that the sound wouldn’t tip Alyssa off too quickly. Frankie started to pull Alyssa inside quickly, apparently realizing the urgency of the situation.
            That kid sure catches on fast.
            “Hey Fra—“ I heard Kevin say from inside the room, obviously pausing when he saw Alyssa enter the room with him.
            “Now, Frank!” I yelled before Alyssa or Kevin had the chance to really react. Frankie came bolting out from the door and he and I slammed it shut, holding it shut as Big Rob quickly locked it with a key he had strategically acquired from the venue management. With that, all three of us ran down the hall and out the door of the venue and onto the bus, leaving Kevin and Alyssa behind to talk out there problems.
            “How’d it go?” Sierra asked bright-eyed as we came into the back lounge panting.
            I flashed her a thumbs up as I sat down next to Nick, lying my head on his shoulder so I could catch my breath. And with that, we turned our attention back to the movie and waited until it was time to leave.

            Dear God, please let this work!

 

 

Thanks for reading! More really soon because I really kind of hated ending the chapter like that...

~ Faye

           

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New Post 7/18/2008 9:18 PM
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Re: In Her Eyes [a Kevin fanfic by Faye - Chapter 8 up 7/18!] 

Sneaky sneaky SNEAKY!!!...i like it!!!!!!!!!!!  This was seriously ADORABLE!!!!  It was filled with oddles of cuteness!!!!!  ODDLES and DODDLES of cuteness!!!!!  Haha it was!  I can't WAIT to see what Nat says about this chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  So GOOD!!!

 

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New Post 7/18/2008 9:25 PM
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Re: In Her Eyes [a Kevin fanfic by Faye - Chapter 8 up 7/18!] 

Ahhhhhhhhhh!! Faye! That chapter was fantastalistic!!!!! <<<<< just plain fantastic didn't cut it. =P It was just so hilarious, and cute, and adorable, and just..... AHHH! I can't even make one comprehensive sentence I am in such awe and adoration of your writting skills. I can understand why you liked this chapter, because it's just so amazing!! Though you should like each and every one of your chapters, because your writting is just plain.... WOW!

The one part I loved was the last part, with the little plan to get Kevin and Alyssa together in one room together. Brilliant!! Joe is an absolutely genius!! And Frankie.... man, he's is the coolest little kid ever! He is just plain awsome! And Big Rob is just.... well, he's just Big Rob. I mean, who can't love Big Rob?! He's just like the coolest bodyguard/rapper ever! haha

Oh! And I absolutely loved the part when Joe and Nick were teasing Kevin, and then they bonked heads!! lol!! =P Poor guys and their big heads. But I feel so bad for Kevin.... he really seems like he's hurting... bad. Faye! Please put a smile on Kevin's face again! Pretty pretty please!! *puppy dog pouts* I don't wanna see a sad Kevy.... it makes me sad....

And I actually agree with what you said at the end.... I hate that you had to end it like that!!! Now I'm like sitting here wondering "WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN IN THERE?!?!" I swear, I'm like on edge right now!! I wanna know what's going to happen! For some reason, I can picture an intense makeout scene in the future.... lol But, I guess I'll just have to wait and see. Oh man! I just remembered that I'm probably not going to be able to read it if you post the next chapter tomorrow!!

Please post the next chapter tonight Faye!! Pretty pretty please?!?!

 

But no pressure..... =P Haven't you ever noticed that when someone says no pressure, it just adds like a ton of pressure? haha



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New Post 7/18/2008 10:02 PM
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Re: In Her Eyes [a Kevin fanfic by Faye - Chapter 8 up 7/18!] 

Awww! Mel! You won't be able to read a new chapter tomorrow?!?! *scrambles to word document to write chapter 9*

I'm serious. I also really want to know what happens in there too...so I have to write it...does that make any sense?

Hmmm Mel, intense make-out scene? IDK.... It could never be as good as some of your little Nicky kisses in The Dark Side of Fame...haha! But I will try to find a time to put one in... : P

 

And okay...I will try to make both Kevin AND you smile in this next chapter! :D

 

And HI MISSA! I love you!

 

More as soon as possible!

~ Faye

 


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New Post 7/18/2008 10:56 PM
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Re: In Her Eyes [a Kevin fanfic by Faye - Chapter 8 up 7/18!] 

BUMPZ :) add more PLEASE


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New Post 7/18/2008 11:46 PM
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Re: In Her Eyes [a Kevin fanfic by Faye - Chapter 8 up 7/18!] 

No....unfortunately I probably won't, cause I'm going to my grand-parents' trailor for the day... which includes waking up at a beastly hour in the morning (okay... it's only 7 in the morning... but that's still early compared to the times I usually wake up at during the summer), and I have no clue at what time I'll be back home at. *cries* I'm going to have JBF withdrawals!!

haha yess, that makes sense... at least to me it does. Maybe it's just a writer's thing or something, but I feel like that too sometimes when I'm writting.

awwww.... why thank you.... but I'm sure a makeout scene written by you would be 100X better then the little Nicky kisses in my fanfic. Probably doesn't help that I actually have never kissed a boy before so I actually pretty much base those kisses on what I read in other fanfics..... but shhhhhh..... that'll just remain a secret, okay? I don't wanna lose my street cred'! =P lol

Can't wait for the next chappy!!! Though I'll probably be asleep if you post it tonight, since I have to go to bed soon if I wanna wake up early tomorrow. =[ Actually, I should be in bed right now.... oh well, I'll just survive tomorrow on 7 hours of sleep. That'll be plenty! =P



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New Post 7/19/2008 12:45 AM
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Re: In Her Eyes [a Kevin fanfic by Faye - Chapter 8 up 7/18!] 

 Rock{Mel}Star wrote

No....unfortunately I probably won't, cause I'm going to my grand-parents' trailor for the day... which includes waking up at a beastly hour in the morning (okay... it's only 7 in the morning... but that's still early compared to the times I usually wake up at during the summer), and I have no clue at what time I'll be back home at. *cries* I'm going to have JBF withdrawals!!

haha yess, that makes sense... at least to me it does. Maybe it's just a writer's thing or something, but I feel like that too sometimes when I'm writting.

awwww.... why thank you.... but I'm sure a makeout scene written by you would be 100X better then the little Nicky kisses in my fanfic. Probably doesn't help that I actually have never kissed a boy before so I actually pretty much base those kisses on what I read in other fanfics..... but shhhhhh..... that'll just remain a secret, okay? I don't wanna lose my street cred'! =P lol

Can't wait for the next chappy!!! Though I'll probably be asleep if you post it tonight, since I have to go to bed soon if I wanna wake up early tomorrow. =[ Actually, I should be in bed right now.... oh well, I'll just survive tomorrow on 7 hours of sleep. That'll be plenty! =P

Awww Mel! I don't think I can get it done tonight...my internet is about to shut off! But I'll make it extra special just for you! :D

And your in good company with the kiss thing...I've never kissed a guy either...still waiting on that first kiss...lol!

~ Faye


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New Post 7/19/2008 12:48 AM
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Re: In Her Eyes [a Kevin fanfic by Faye - Chapter 8 up 7/18!] 

Bump it up


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