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I'll Always Be There (UPDATED 7-31)CHAPTER 9 
Modified By ♥Momo&JB♥ {Is a trainwreck}  on 8/1/2008 9:12:16 PM)

This is my first fanfic, so don't be too harsh, just let me know what you think.  Also, because I am new to this, this fic will be sort of short because I am not to good with details. I am also getting a siggy made. So Think of Madison as Selena Gomez and Lauren as Jordan Pruitt. Also Madison is 16, Lauren is 17, and Nick is also 16 during this fic. Well, I'll get on with it!

I'll Always Be There

Prologue

 

Hey, my name is Madison. I am sixteen and my best friends are Lauren and Nick. We have been best friends since the beginning of time. We met shortly after my fifth birthday at the playground. My mom’s friend’s son pushed me off the swing and they helped me up. Since then we have been best friends. They have always been there through everything. They were there when my dad died. And in return, I was there for them when Lauren’s mom left her dad and when Nick was diagnosed with diabetes. They were my best friends, but when our world crashes around us, will we be able to withstand the heat?

 

 

Chapter One

 

“Oh my gosh, that looks stunning on you!!” Lauren screamed.

“Really? You don’t think it looks a little, you know, revealing?”

“No, you look beautiful.” Nick spoke up.

“Thanks. I think I am going to get it. Thanks guys.”

“No problem, now let’s eat!” Lauren said.

“Okay, give me a sec to change, I’ll be out in a bit”

I took off the dress (http://www.kohls.com/kohlsStore/juniors/dressesanddressyapparel/dresses/PRD~369735/Speechless+Mesh+Halter+Dress.jsp) and walked to the register to pay for it. I was sort of bothered by what Nick said. He is such a sweet heart, but sometime I think that he likes me more than as a friend. I think I do, but I really don’t want to ruin our friendship. I brushed out of my mind and walked over to Nick and Lauren who had come with me to buy a dress for the prom. Being sixteen, I was super excited that I was asked to go. But Lauren and Nick decided they were just going to hang out at Nick’s house and watch a movie, so I was going with Max, the HOTTEST boy in the history of the world. (http://gfx.filmweb.pl/blog/818461/208633.1.jpg)

“So what are we eating?” I said.

“Well, we were thinking about skipping the lunch and instead go see that new movie, Han*CENSORED* I think it’s called, then we can go Coldstone and get us some banana ice cream!” Nick said.

“Wow Nick, get hyper is the last five minutes?”

“Maybe….”

We all laughed and went on our way.

 

The next night

(Lauren’s point of view)

 

“Stand Out! Above the Crowd, even if I got to shout out loud, till mine is the only face you see I’m gunna stand out. Till you notice me!” Nick and Lauren sang along to the best movie ever, An Extremely Goofy Movie.  The two of them were an hour into the movie when the phone rang.

“Hold on Nick, the phone is ringing.” She paused the movie and looked at the caller ID.

“Hello”

“Lauren, can I come over?” Madison sobbed.

“He didn’t”

Nick looked at Lauren, puzzled. Lauren shushed him.

“Come on over. We’ll be here.”



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New Post 7/21/2008 10:39 PM
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Ooh!! This is good!! I wanna know what happens!!

PMS!

<3 Hayden



My totally rockin' JBF friends! (Of course in random order): Jenn, Meg, Lauren, Jenny, Bre1, Emma, Jess, Sarah, Bre2, Jennilyn

Credit to Molly for first 2 siggys!!

♥ Nick ♥ Big Rob ♥ Jess ♥ Hayden ♥ 4 peas in a pod!
Operation: IDK my BFF Nick?
 
New Post 7/21/2008 10:56 PM
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This is AMAZING! Please PMS!!!


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New Post 7/22/2008 8:36 AM
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I will be updating tommorrow because my aunt is having twins, so keep it bumped up!!



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New Post 7/22/2008 5:45 PM
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ah! so good! i love it!!!

thanks for the part again! :) oh and sorry i didnt comment sooner i was having computer problems and couldnt find the thread! lol but its all good now i found it!! lol

PMS!

ps. that dress is so cute! lol


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BUMPS! :)


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GreAT STORY pmn!

~LOVE, Jacqueline

 
New Post 7/23/2008 12:15 AM
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Bumps again!! :)


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New Post 7/23/2008 4:06 PM
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Modified By ♥Momo&JB♥ {Is a trainwreck}  on 7/23/2008 6:28:16 PM)

PLEASE READ!!! I HAVE DECIDED TO GO A DIFFERENT WAY SO MADISON'S MOM IS NOT DEAD AND HER DAD DOESN'T BEAT HER. HER DAD IS DEAD THOUGH! SO I HAVE CORRCTED THAT IN THE PROLOUGE! THANKS!

Okay, I always have really good news. You know how before I said my aunt was having her twins? Well, my mom tricked me and surprised me with tickets to my first JB Concert. It was so awesome. If you were at the St. Louis concert, and want someone to talk to about it, send me a message at momolovesjb. Because of this, instead of one chapeter, I will give you two.  YAY!! Also, thank you very much Erin for my clickable siggy! I LOVE IT!

 

Chapter 2

(NO ONE’S POV)

 

“What’s going on?” Nick asked, worried.

“It’s Max.”

“What about him?”

“Nothing, just be prepared for the tears”

The door rang and Lauren sprinted up the steps. She opened the door to see Madison with make-up streaming down her face, showing the markings of dry tears.

“Oh Madi.”

“He didn’t come, he stood me up!” Madison sobbed.

“He did what!?” Nick yelled.

“He stood me up!”

“I’ll be back.” Nick said.

“What are you doing?” Lauren questioned.

“I’m going to take care of that punk.”

“Don’t do anything your going to regret Nick.” Lauren spoke calmly.

Nick grabbed his jacket and ran outside put his keys in the ignition and drove to the school.

“What do you think he is going to do?” Madison sobbed with fresh tears streaming down he face.

“He probably won’t do anything but yell at him.” She held Madison. “I hope.”

 

Chapter 3

(NICK POV)

 

I couldn’t believe Max stood her up. As I drove through the night to the school, I started to think. Why am I doing this? I should be there with Madi comforting her, but instead I am going to the dance to do something I will probably regret doing. I took the keys out of the ignition and walked into the school.

“Nick, hey NICK!!!” Olivia yelled. Olivia was my older brother, Joe, girlfriend.

“Hey”

“What are you doing here little bro, I thought you weren’t coming.” Joe said.

“I wasn’t planning on it. Do you know where Max is?”

“No, why?”

“He stood Madi up.”

“He didn’t” Joe said.

“Oh poor thing!” Olivia said. “She must be heart broken.”

“Yah, she is. I have to find Max.”

 

 

“Dude, don’t do something you are going to regret.” Joe said.

“Oh, I am not going to regret this.”

I walked around the gymnasium for about ten minutes when I laid eyes on Max. He was making out with a girl I didn’t recognize. I took a breath and walked over. I pulled them off each other.

“Dude, what are you doing?” Max questioned, standing to face Nick.

“This” Nick pulled back his arm and punched Max in the face, knocking him to the ground. “That’s for standing up Madison”

Nick walked out of the school. His phone started ringing. He picked it up, it was Lauren.

“Hello?”

“Where are you?”

“On my way back to your house. I took care of Max.”

“You didn’t hurt him did you?”

“I broke his face if that’s what you mean.”

“NICK!!”

“I’m in your driveway, talk to you in a second.” I hung up the phone and got out of the car. When I opened the door, I saw an angry Lauren and a still crying Madison. As soon as I walked in Lauren got up and smacked me on the arm.

“What’d to that for? You could have gotten hurt!”

“Well, he broke her heart so I broke his face.”

“Nick, what are we going to do with you?”

“Umm… let me off for helping a friend?”

“This is the only time. You could have gotten hurt!”

“Gosh Laur, you sound like his mom.” Madison laughed between the tears.

That sent the trio into a fit of laughter.

“I guess I kind of do.”

Nick walked over and gave Madison a hug.

“Thanks Nick.” Madison whispered.

“No problem, I’ll always be here.”



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New Post 7/23/2008 4:51 PM
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