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 9/16/2008 8:45 PM
 
 Modified By Nicklover09  on 9/17/2008 5:05:46 AM

Hey guys, this is my friend Natasha and my fanfic that we are writing together. This is the prologue below. I't's sort of like the intro test to see how many replies we get. So if you love this and are looking for a fanfic to read...then READ please...I'll have you know that this is the prlogue ...as in the before part. It's when the characters officiallly met when they were 7. The whole FF is not like this. It actually ends up jumping to when the characters are in University in Chapter One so don't be fooled by the seven year old beginning lol Here it is:

The Story to Tell

 

Prologue

 

Shay and Alexa pumped their legs back and forth,  swinging higher into the sky. They were going to the park on account of it being Shay’s 7th birthday.

                “Alexa! I’m swinging higher than you!!” Shay yelled as their competition prolonged.

                “Not for long!! Get ready to lose!!” Alexa called back.

                Shay pushed herself forward, she flew to the ground, picking herself up, and whirled around to face Alexa.

                “HA!! How do you like that!?” Shay laughed and ran to the slide. All of a sudden, she felt the hard hit of someone else slamming face first into her, causing her and a little boy to fall to the ground.  When she finally gained back her balance to stand, she came face to face with a little boy. The boy looked like he was about the same age as her, but how could she tell through all the tears.

                “Nick!! Dude, are you alright?” called another little boy. He looked the same as the first boy, but clearly older.

                “I’m fine Joe…but how are you? I’m so sorry. I guess I wasn’t looking” he said, gesturing towards Shay. She wiped her eyes and sniffled.

                “I’m okay. Um... “she sniffled some more as she stuttered. Just as she found her voice, Alexa appeared behind her.

                “Who do you think you are? Bumping into my best friend like that!! I think this calls for a swinging competition!! You, little boy, against Shay!! The best swinger in town!! SHE EVEN BEAT ME!!!” Alexa challenged the boy. Shay took off towards the swing set, followed by the little boy.  Shay jumped on the swing, ready to beat the little boy who had caused her to dirty her new favourite t-shirt that she had received for her birthday. The boy hopped on the swing as well, waiting for someone to say ‘GO!’

                “Okay, let’s explain the rules. Now Shay, and—you little boy…what’s your name again? I didn’t catch it.” Alexa questioned Shay’s competitor.

                “My name is Nicholas. You’re Shay, right?” Nicholas turned to face Shay.

                “HEY!! My name is Alexa! Ever think about asking me MY name?” Alexa lectured Nicholas. At that point, the boy that had helped Nicholas and a different little boy were gathered around Shay and Nicholas, watching the scene.

                “ Yes, what is your name Alexa?” one of the boys said.  Alexa whipped around to face the cheeky little boy who had replied to her comment. She placed her hand on her hip and gave him a look that basically said ‘Uh, stupid boy!’

                “You know my name. But I don’t know yours? And who are you?” Alexa said to the two boys.

                “ I’m Joseph and this is my older brother—“ Joseph started to say.

                “I’m Kevin…thank you very much. I can introduce myself Joe.” Kevin cut Joseph off.

                “Soooorrrrryyy! Didn’t know you were so ‘sensitive’ Kevin.” Joseph replied.  “My parents—well my mother—call me Joseph (that’s my full name) but everyone else, calls me Joe…”

                “FINE JOE!!!” she screamed in his face. He stepped back with a look of sheer terror.

                “Okay…let’s get this competition over with.” Shay interrupted. Alexa explained the “so called rules” and then prepared the two for the start of the competition.

                “READY, SET—“ Alexa began to say but was cut off, again.

                “GO!” Kevin and Joe screamed as Alexa got cut off. She looked at them evilly and then stormed off to the monkey bars. Joe and Kevin laughed loud at the look of surprise that was on  Alexa’s face before she stormed off in anger. But just as they were in the middle of their laughter, a wave of guilt came over Kevin. Being the older one, he walked over to where Alexa was sitting on top of the monkey bars.

               

                Shay pumped harder and harder to try to beat her new friend, Nicholas. He did the same thing.

                “OKAY! ARE YOU READY TO JUMP? “ Joe said. He signaled the signs of 1, 2, and 3 with his fingers. They were to jump after Joe said 3.

                “Are you ready to get creamed, Nicholas…whatever your last name is?” Shay screamed to him. Nicholas nodded and on that note, they jumped. Shay flew through the air, just like always. Nick flew in the exact same direction. Shay landed first, but this time, flat on her back. She gave a small scream and once Nick had landed, he ran to her side.

                “SHAY! Can you hear me? Are you alive?” he called to her. She sat up with a look of confusion on her face. She was fine, just fine. But when she caught Nicholas’s eyes, she was even better.

 

okay so how did you like that? if you liked that please comment. I want to know if this is a good beginning that i can start chapter one on. is it? let me know. ill be checking. im looking for atleast 3 comments before chapter one is posted. ill keep checking everyday so help us and let us print more...

 HOPE YOU LIKED IT!! THX :D

               

 

 


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 9/16/2008 9:09 PM
 

Aweehh that was cute.

Post more? =]

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 9/16/2008 10:37 PM
 

Ashley wrote

Aweehh that was cute.

Post more? =]

I plan to make it like AWESOME...tell people about it if you don't mind I mean I want people to actually read it. Please peeps!! comment comment comment!!


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 9/17/2008 12:30 AM
 

I like it! =)

Can't wait to find out what happens when they're in University =D

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 9/17/2008 7:04 AM
 

alexis♥ wrote

I like it! =)

Can't wait to find out what happens when they're in University =D

Aw thanks!!! :D that is so nice to hear. My last fanfic sucked. Nobody read it at all! But this one is going to be WAY better!!


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 9/17/2008 7:53 PM
 

awww this is cute so far post more soon!


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 9/17/2008 8:51 PM
 
 Modified By Nicklover09  on 9/17/2008 8:34:23 PM

KK people!! Here is our very first chapter and we are so excited!! However, it's not finished yet and it's not like Jonafied so, don't think we suck because we don't actually. Just keep checking back for the full chapter and we'll have it soon...lol

Chapter One

 

Alexa walked down the university hallway that she had walked many times before. But this time was different. The silence that usually occurred at this time of night, didn’t occur tonight. She slowed down her pace as she listened to heavy breaths and sighs.

            ‘It’s probably just some hot young couple, who can’t keep their paws off each other’ she thought silently to herself, listening to more heavy sighs. But something about what she had just heard made her stop, dead in her tracks. The sharp tone of her boyfriend’s voice, echoed through the usual silent hallways.

            “Oh, my alarm! Got to go babe. See ya tomorrow, same time?” he said. The sentence confused Alexa as she was listening to all this. Was she sure that this was her boyfriend? Or was this some freaky dream? But then her thoughts were cut short when she came face to face, with the character himself. They both stared at each other. Alexa was at a loss for words as she just brought her hand to his face with intense force, then leaving him in the empty hall, watching her walk out of his life.

 

            Nick, Joe and Kevin walked off the stage, hearing the millions of screaming fans behind them. They accepted towels from the stage manager and walked into their dressing room. They were talking about this cute blonde in the front row that was holding a sign that said ‘I’m going to BB good to you forever,’ when they were interrupted by their Mom.

            “Great show boys. I think that was your best yet,” their mom said as she walked in. They returned the comment with a smile on each of their faces and got up to gather their stuff. When they had it all packed up, they walked out to their limo that was waiting outside for them so that they could go back to the hotel that they were currently staying in.

           

            Alexa stormed into her apartment, Matt following close behind her. He was trying to keep up with her, but Alexa was moving faster than ever. She stomped up the stairs, causing her footsteps to echo in the empty complex stairwell.

            “Lexi, can you just listen to me…PLEASE!!” he called after her, but only got the reply of an apartment door slamming in his face. He knocked and knocked, but Alexa never answered. She was hurt and she didn’t feel like seeing him right now. He has a good solid girlfriend to fall back on, he’d bounce back. It’s not like he actually cared.

            “What’s wrong? What’s going on?” Shay questioned as Alexa slammed the door and tossed her bag on the couch. She didn’t answer, but went straight to her room. She closed the door, causing the flower vase sitting on the kitchen table to shake. Shay turned the water off and left the dishes that she was washing soaking in the water as she went to Alexa’s room. She knocked softly, trying to hear her best friend. She couldn’t tell if she was crying, or if she was cursing Matt to herself. She decided upon crying and silently opened the bedroom door.

            “Alexa? Do you want to talk about it? What did Matt do this time?” she went and sat down beside Alexa, placing one arm around her best friend. Alexa just turend to Shay, looked at her for a moment and lay her head down on her best friend’s shoulder. Alexa cried and cried until she fell asleep. Shay moved Alexa down under her covers, turning the lights out as she shut the door. As soon as she was reassured that Alexa was actually asleep, she moved across the apartment to the door and opened it to find Matt sitting there against the hallway wall with his head leaning up against it. As soon as he saw her standing there, he stood up.

            “Is she alright?” he asked. But Shay just shut him out. She knew he had done something wrong. She opened the door once more to find out what had happened, but decided it would just me best if Alexa told her herself. It would be a lot easier that way.

 

            The three brothers walked into their hotel room and unpacked their things they had taken to the concert. Kevin showered and Joe got ready for bed. Nick was playing cards with Frankie on the floor when their Mom, Denise, walked in.

            “Boys. Just to update you on what is happening tomorrow…” she started to stay but was silenced by Frankie. He walked over to her and requested for her to kneel down so that they were eye to eye.

            “Mom, we know…you can go back to your room now, I am in a very important card game.” He said as he raised a single finger to his mother’s mouth, silencing her. A smile spread across the boy’s face as they watched their little brother reject their Mom’s plan. Denise stood back up and walked out of the room, warning them that they had to bring Frankie back to the room in 15 minutes for bed.

            “So, I was thinking, tomorrow before our interview, we could go like shopping or something. I think I need some new shoes.” Joe said as Kevin came out, wrapped in a towel, shaking the wetness from his dark curls.

 

 


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 9/19/2008 5:04 PM
 

that was AWESOME!!! LOL!! GREAT JOB!!


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 9/19/2008 8:26 PM
 

DANGERous11 wrote

that was AWESOME!!! LOL!! GREAT JOB!!

so just wonderin are you going to stay tuned to see what happens?


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 9/20/2008 5:44 PM
 

i agree that was sooo cute! especially the last sentence.....

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