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 9/19/2008 9:55 PM
 
 Modified By ojdgrl  on 8/19/2009 4:45:31 PM

Hey everyone! This is my 3rd fanfic. I'm in the middle of one with my 2 friends called MySpace, MySecrets, MyLove (in siggy) so check that out! And I'm doing an RPG with a few girls! I'll also be starting another one with 2 girls from the RPG soon! I would love some comments to see if I should continue!! So, here's the intro:

Our Starless Sky Will Shine
The cool October breeze blew all around me, making different vibrant colored leaves scatter the ground. Reds, oranges, and yellows filled the grassy park making it seem warm and inviting, when really, it was empty and deserted. I pulled my light denim jacket closer around my body. My blonde streaks blew in front of my face making me release my hands from my waist to push them away. I looked around from my place on the wooden bench. The old oak trees swayed in the breeze, the swing set creaked with rust, and the open field beckoned me to run through it. The memories that were made at this park started to flood through my brain- at 7 years, I victoriously climbed one of the oak trees, beating my best friend; at 10 years, we would jump off the swings to see who could go the farthest- he always won; and from then to about two years ago, we would run through the field, laughing and not having a care in the world. All these memories I’ve shared with him and lots more. He was there for me at my worst, kept me going at my best, and supported me at everything in between. We shared our first kiss on this very bench, escaped from the rough times to this far away place, and made our friendship stronger with each passing day.
But now, things have changed. Now, we’re 16 and in a way, we’ve gone our separate ways. Now, he’s traveling with his family only to leave me here alone, feeling abandoned and incomplete. I hugged my knees to my chest and closed my eyes. I tried so hard to cover up my tears then and now. I opened my eyes only to find my vision becoming blurry. My cheeks became warm and I released my breath. The hot tears overflowed, running down my flushed cheeks. I shivered and looked up at the endless sky. I knew I couldn’t live like this forever, but it was impossible to move on.
Hopefully soon, Our Starless Sky Will Shine.

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 9/19/2008 9:58 PM
 

Okay this is good! Well-written and I can't wait for more!! Post more soon girly!

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 9/19/2008 10:02 PM
 

Wow! A reader already! Thanks so much! This is my first fic i'm doing by myself, so I'm a little worried... Thanx for the comment! I'll be posting more, but it depends on the number of comments and readers that come!

-Maura


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 9/19/2008 10:02 PM
 

BUMPPPPP

new reader; this ff sounds so good(: i can tell your an amazing writer! you got a trustee reader right here. pms please<33

my name is lorena by the way(:


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 9/19/2008 10:07 PM
 

i like it cant wait 4 more

PSM

-brenna


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 9/19/2008 10:10 PM
 

awwww thats sooooo sad ='[

pms please this is really good

<3steph<3


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 9/19/2008 10:15 PM
 

Simply amazing. You have a gift. Keep writing and POST MORE SOON!


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 9/19/2008 10:17 PM
 

OMG girls! You're gonna make me cry! I can't believe I already have 5 replies and I just posted this! Thank you so much!

Sunnie, you're amazing-t hanx for the comment! That brought tears to my eyes!

Love you girls!

-Maura


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 9/19/2008 10:30 PM
 

ojdgrl wrote

Wow! A reader already! Thanks so much! This is my first fic i'm doing by myself, so I'm a little worried... Thanx for the comment! I'll be posting more, but it depends on the number of comments and readers that come!

-Maura

Don't mention it Maura! It's what I do! lol can't wait for another update!

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 9/19/2008 10:45 PM
 

Seriously girls! Once I reach like 1000 pages or something like that (prob not) you'll be the first epeople to thank! Cuz you're sticking with me through this fic and will stay, right...?

-Maura


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