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 9/19/2008 10:10 PM
 
 Modified By Ginny [with liberty and Jonas for all] West  on 10/20/2008 5:25:45 PM

Ok, so this is my very first Jonas Brothers fanfic, and my very first time posting on this website, so I hope I am doing this right. 

Coming Home

Chapter 1:

*Cali-7.5, Kevin-6.5, Joe-5, Nick-2*

            I recall the moment I met the Jonas family. My mom and I had just moved in down the street from them. I was so mad that we’d had to move. So I had decided to run away. I didn’t get very far until I fell for the Jonas brothers. Literally. Kevin was trying to show his younger brothers how well he could walk backwards. (Don’t ask me why…must be a guy thing.) And I was running, tears streaming down my face, so I didn’t really see where I was running to, or WHO I was running into.
 
            “OW!!!” I had just hit something, and hit it hard. Great. Just great. Not only did my world just fall apart, but I had a skinned knee to deal with.
            “Get off me!” Ok, so maybe it was a someONE I had hit. I struggled to untangle myself and to stand. “Who are you?” I heard the Someone ask as I blindly wiped away my tears.
            “Who are you?” I said, in my best snotty, Scarlet O’Hara voice. Trouble was, I really did sound more like Mizz Scarlet, while he sounded more like Frank Sinatra (to me, anyway).
            “Wow. Why does your voice sound so weird?” Two more curly-haired boys seemed to pop out of nowhere.
            “My voice isn’t weird. Yours is!” What did I know, I was seven.
            “Nah-uh. WE sound just like everyone else. You’re just weird.” He seemed to be the middle-aged boy.
            “Maybe it’s cause I’m not from here. But I don’t wanna be here. I just wanna go home!” I stomped my foot at them, trying to hold back my tears.
            “But it’s fun here.” The youngest one protested at me. Shows what he knew. New Jersey was no fun. Georgia was fun. Having my daddy around was fun. Being here with just my mommy was sooooooooo not fun. She was always so sad now. But daddy was gone to heaven and apparently NOT coming back. AHHHHH!!!
            “No, it’s not. None of my friends are here. My tire swing isn’t here. My daddy isn’t here.” And with that, my seven year old self just could not hold the tears back any longer. I took off running again, ashamed of my tears, and ashamed of myself. Mommy would have gone crazy if she knew I had been mean to those boys. She always told me she raised me to be a good girl and good girls weren’t mean.
            I didn’t get very far. Once I hit the street corner, I got scared. Everything was new to me. I had no idea where I was. I just knew I didn’t want to be there. So, I sat down on the sidewalk and started crying more. 
            “Are you ok?” It was the voice from before. The first one…the one I had slammed into. I tried to wipe my tears away, but I couldn’t stop a fresh batch from falling in their place.
            “I hate it here. I hate that we had to move. I just wanna go home.” I hid my face in my hands. Suddenly, I felt an arm being slung around my shoulders.
            “My name is Kevin.”
            “Mine’s California.” I responded.
            “That’s a cool name. You know that’s a state too? I learned that.” I looked up to see him beam at me. “I’m six and a half. How old are you?”
            “Seven and a half.” My tears finally subsided when he seemed to stare at me with a sort of awe.
            “Wow. I won’t be that old for another whole year.” He paused. “How come you don’t wanna live here?”
            “Cause I miss Georgia. I miss my friends. Most of all, I miss my daddy. He died a while ago, and now, we moved here.” I stood up. “It’s not fair!”
            “You know, I could be your friend.” I turned to look at him, and was instantly comforted by his smile. “And so could my brothers.” I scrunched up my nose. “I know they’re just babies, but they can be fun sometimes.”
            “Maybe.” I shrugged.
            “Where do you live?”
            “No where.”
            “Huh?”
            “I ran away.” Another shrug.
            “Then you can come live with me.” Kevin tugged on my hand and practically dragged me to his house. His brothers were still in their front yard, only now they had been joined by a grown-up lady. “MOM!”
            “Yes, dear?”
            “This is California. She is gonna live with us, ok?” I felt uncomfortable as I was being pulled towards this strange woman. It had been drilled into my head since I was four, and my old neighbor’s son had been kidnapped, that I was, under no circumstances, to talk to strange adults. “It’s ok, California. She’s my mom.” Kevin seemed to sense my fears.
            “What an unusual name, California.” The woman bent down to my level, held out her hand, and ever so cautiously, I shook it. “Where are your parents?”
            “My daddy’s dead, and my mommy is at our new home. But I ran away, cause I wanna go back to Georgia. I don’t like it here.” I said in my best ‘grown-up’ voice.
            “Oh. Well, I have to tell you, it is lots of fun here. Just like in Georgia. We have birthday parties, and watch movies, and go for walks…”
            “Do you have a tire swing?”
            “At the park, there are three of them.” My eyes grew wide. Three tire swings? No way!
            “But…but my daddy isn’t here to push me on them!” She wrapped me in a hug, the moment my tears started to fall again. 
            “It’s ok, dear.” I clung to her like my life depended on it. “I know it’s not the same, but I wouldn’t mind pushing you on the swings.” This made me cry harder. She held me until my tears subsided into hiccups. “Sweetheart, I think it’s time we call your mom.” I nodded, weakly. “Do you know your number?” I shook my head ‘no.’ “Do you know where your house is?” I nodded. She smiled and brushed the last of my tears off my face. Then she turned back to her sons. “Boys, it’s time to go for a walk.”
            “Mommy, why do girls cry so much?” If I had been old enough to understand, I probably would have punched Joe for that comment.

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 9/20/2008 12:13 AM
 

This looks good! And they're all so cute as little kids! Hahaha. I hope you post more soon! =D

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 9/20/2008 9:58 AM
 
 Modified By Ginny [with liberty and Jonas for all] West  on 9/20/2008 11:45:09 AM

First off...thank you to anyone and everyone who read this.  Second, I probably should explain that the timeline for this story is kinda weird.  I hope it doesn't throw anyone off, but, for instance, this chapter takes place a few years after the first chapter.

 

Chapter 2:

*Cali-12, Kevin-11, Joe-9, Nick-6*

            “We need to talk to the two of you.” The voice jolted me from the last remnants of sleep. I opened my eyes and saw both Mr. and Mrs. J, looking concerned. I nudged Kevin awake, and I could see he was unnerved by the look his parents were giving us.
            “Mom? Dad? What time is it?”
            “Time for the four of us to have a talk.” The adults sat down in the chairs across from the couch where Kevin and I had fallen asleep the night before, watching some movie that had been on TV. 
            “Are we in trouble?” I asked, wiping the sleep from my eyes.
            “Here’s the deal. Cali, we know you’ve slept over before, and that the two of you have even slept in the same bed together. But you two are reaching an age where you’re maturing…”
            “Mom, can we seriously not talk about this with her here?” Kevin groaned.
            “She’s part of this, she needs to hear it too.”
            “Kevin, they’re saying that us sleeping together might look like we’re…you know, ‘sleeping’ together. Right?” I turned from my friend to his parents. They nodded. “Mr. J, Mrs. J, you know you guys are like a second set of parents to me. And that makes Kevin my brother. And, well, that’s just kinda icky.”
            “I’m icky?” Kevin poked me in the side.
            “No, I’m just saying that, since you’re like a brother to me, I couldn’t, you know, um…”
            “Cali, we don’t doubt your sincerity, and we trust the two of you. But you guys are also getting to the age where hormones…”
            “MOM!” Kevin’s frustrated growl made me roll my eyes. Sometimes, boys could be so immature.
            “I get it. I just won’t be hanging out here overnight anymore. It’s really not that big of a deal.”
            “Thank you for handling this with such maturity, Cali. Maybe some of that could brush off on Kevin.” I looked to see that Kevin was sitting with his hands over his ears. What a dork.

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 9/20/2008 10:42 AM
 

Haha I guess girls DO mature faster than boys =P

Post more soon please =D

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 9/20/2008 12:31 PM
 

aw this is so cute!!! i love little jonases!

btw to maybe help with timeline problem you could put the year before each chapter, or the characters' ages, so you wouldn't have to explain when each chapter takes place.

please post more!! ^-^


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 9/20/2008 1:56 PM
 
 Modified By Ginny [with liberty and Jonas for all] West  on 9/20/2008 5:09:12 PM

Thanks for the idea about adding their ages.  If I get the ages off a little, just know it's cause I REALLY suck at math.  I might be totally off on when Nick was doing broadway, but Cali is 14 years older than Frankie, so I fudged it around so, yeah.

Chapter 3:

*Cali-13, Kevin-12, Joe-10, Nick-7*

            “Cali, Cali, Cali!!!” Kevin raced towards me as I rounded the corner from the school bus stop.
            “Heya, Kevin!” It was weird, being the only kid in the neighborhood to go to school by bus, but I didn’t mind, because Kevin (occasionally with a younger brother or two in tow) was almost always there to meet me.
            “Guess what!” His excitement was starting to rub off on me. I linked arms with him and we continued walking towards my house.
            “What?”
            “Mom’s pregnant! I’m gonna have another little brother or sister!” My heart sank a bit. Why did Kevin get to have THREE siblings, while I was all by myself? Yeah, I know his brothers were annoying sometimes, but at least he had them. It’s not fair!
            “That’s great, Kevin.” I tried not to sound too bitter, but he knew immediately something was wrong.
            “Cali?” His arm went around my shoulders.
            “It’s nothing.” He stopped walking, which caused me to stop as well. He pulled me to where I was facing him. Darn his ability to know me so well. “I—it’s not fair! I want a little brother or sister, too!” I will not cry. I will not cry. Fudge, I’m crying.
            “Hey,” he said gently, wiping the tears from my eyes. “You know you’re welcome to mine, anytime you want them.” That got the desired effect of making me smile. “Oh, and Mom wants to know if you wanna babysit sometime, after the baby is born.” This caused my grin to grow. Mrs. Jonas was amazing. 
            “You know I do!” I had been ‘babysitting’ for the Jonas family before, for about a year which had been basically me hanging out at their house while Mr. and Mrs. Jonas took Nick to his performances. According to them, I was the ‘responsible’ one, and would make sure the house didn’t burn down. Ahh, little did they know.
 

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 9/20/2008 2:02 PM
 

Ginny wrote

According to them, I was the ‘responsible’ one, and would make sure the house didn’t burn down. Ahh, little did they know.
 

Don't tell me she burned the house down?!?!!

Hahahaha.

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 9/20/2008 4:28 PM
 

Since chapters 2 and 3 were so short, here is chapter 4, and it's long.  Love my comments :-)

Chapter 4

September 28, 2000
 
            “What’d you get me?!?” I squealed impatiently. I hated that Kevin made me wear a blindfold. On any other day, I would have trusted him, but it was my 14th birthday, and his being secretive made me worry.
            “One more minute.” This time, it was Nick who was speaking to me. I heard someone light a match and I tensed. “Ok, take the blindfold off.” I did as instructed, and had to blink a few times to adjust to the sunlight. “Happy birthday, Cali!”
            “We’re supposed to say it all together, dork.” Joe said, ruffling Nick’s hair. The four of us, Kevin, Joe, Nick, and I were all at the park, seated at a picnic table. In front of me sat a lopsided cake with gray icing. On top of the cake were 15 lighted candles…14 and one for good luck.  “Happy birthday, Cali.”
            “Happy birthday, Partner.” I groaned. Why did Kevin always have to use that stupid nickname? He knew I hated it. I no longer had my southern accent, and yet, he still felt the need to call me that like I had just come straight out of a John Wayne flick. But he insisted that it was tradition…yeah, a whole 6 year tradition. And it’s not like he called me that all the time, just when he knew I’d get irritated by it the most.
            “Thanks, guys…and Kevin.” I stuck my tongue out at him. “Nick, did you make the cake?”
            “How’d you know?” I smiled. “I did it all by myself, too.”
            “Well, I made the icing.” Joe said, trying to outdo his brother.
            “Chill, guys.” I paused, looking around the table. “Did anyone bring plates or forks or anything that would be useful in eating this, um, cake?” All three turned to each other, then back to me with sheepish grins on their faces. I rolled my eyes. “Thanks, guys.” I stuck my finger in the icing and then tasted it. Not too bad, even though it’s gray.
            “Oh, and we got you a present!” Nick exclaimed.
            “I got you a present.” Kevin said to me. Nick either didn’t hear him or chose to ignore him.
            “This is from us.” Nick handed me a box wrapped in shiny purple wrapping paper. I grinned and ripped the paper from the box.
            “You got me a toaster?” I looked up at Kevin, puzzled.
            “No, silly. Look inside the box.” I opened the box and inside was an official Atlanta Braves jacket.
            “Oh, oh, Kevin. This must have cost you a fortune!” I said sadly. I really liked the jacket, but, man, guilt would eat at me if he’d spent too much on me.
            “Psh. Try it on.” I pulled it all the way out of the box and slipped it on…perfect fit. “Now, when we all watch games, you can feel like you’ve got some team pride.”
            “Yeah, when your team gets creamed!” Nick laughed. I lightly punched his arm.
            “Boys!!!!” All four of us turned to see Mr. J yelling out of their car’s window. “We have to go. Get in the car. Cali, your mom’s expecting you.” His tone left no room for argument. The guys ran over to the car and climbed in. Puzzled, I tossed the box and the paper in the trashcan next to the table, grabbed my cake, and walked home, still wearing my jacket.
 
            “Mom?” She met me at the front door. She took the cake from me and put it in the kitchen.
            “Nice jacket, dear. But, come on. We need to get going.” She grabbed the car keys and practically dragged me out to the car.
            “Wait, what’s going on?” 
            “Denise is having contractions. We think Franklin may be on his way.” I gasped and jumped into the car. The whole way to the hospital, I kept asking mom to hurry.
 
            “Kevin!” He grabbed me in a hug, the moment he saw me. “How’s your mom?”
            “Screaming.” He smiled. We were standing just outside his mom’s room.
            “You two ok out here? I’m going to go in and say hi.” Kevin and I nodded and my mom left us. We were soon joined by Nick and Joe.
            “Dad says we have to go to the cafeteria.” Nick said, grabbing my hand and dragging me in the direction of the hospital cafeteria. “Man, did mom scream that much when she had me?” He asked, once we were all sitting at a small table in the back of the room.
            “More. You were a chunky baby.” I smacked Joe on the back of his head.
            “Like you’d even remember, dork.” Kevin said.
            “Do you guys realize, if she does give birth today, that Frankie and I will have the same birthday?”
            “That’s pretty cool.”
            “Would you guys have to, like share presents and stuff?” I put my head down on the table, just flabbergasted by Joe’s question.
            “Joe, you cannot seriously be asking me that question. I’d be 14 years older than Frankie. We wouldn’t exactly be twins.” I sat back up, and felt my head spin. “Uh-oh.”
            “Cali?” Kevin looked at me as if he’d just seen a ghost. “You just got so pale.” That explains the look. “You ok?”
            “Give me a second.” I closed my eyes, waiting for the feeling to pass. When it did, three pairs of eyes were staring at me. “I’m fine guys. Just need something to eat.” 
            “Go get some chips or something.” Kevin reached into his pocket and pulled out his wallet. He handed both Joe and Nick a few dollars each. Once they were away from the table, he turned back to me. “What just happened here?”
            “Easy, Kevin. I just felt a little light headed is all. I missed out on eating my cake, so I’m a little hungry.”
            “Maybe, since we’re already at a hospital…”
            “Kevin, it’s no big deal. I get like this when I get hungry.”
            “Have you had your blood sugar tested?”
            “Yes. And it’s fine. The doctor said as long as I eat before I do strenuous activities, I’ll be ok.” I decided to quickly change the subject. “Thank you for the jacket, Kevin. I really do love it. But, how did you know what size to get?”
            “Your mom helped me.” Joe and Nick suddenly reappeared and the conversation went back to the new baby that was on his way.
 
            “Oh, Mrs. J, he’s sooooooooo cute.” I said, leaning over to see the baby wrapped in a soft blue blanket.
            “He’s gonna be the coolest younger brother.” Joe said, earning a punch on the shoulder from Nick. “I’m gonna be the coolest older brother.” This time, one from Nick and Kevin. “And I’m gonna teach him lots of things. Like how to ride a bike, and how to build snowmen, and how to make s’mores inside…” This time, I punched him.
            “S’mores…inside?” Mr. J looked at me.
            “It was just once, and we cleaned up the mess.” Kevin jumped in, trying to defend me.
            “Is that why my microwave was so sticky for the longest time?” Mrs. J smiled softly, finding humor despite feeling so weak
            “No, that was when I wanted to try warm soda.” Joe said, smiling. I reached out to hit him again, but Kevin just had to step in and grab my arm. “We used candles for the s’mores.” Kevin let me hit him that time. “Ow!”
            “Cali, what do you have to say for yourself?” My mom stepped in. Joe really did seem to have a death wish.
            “Why do I have to miss all the fun stuff?” Nick pouted.

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 9/20/2008 6:21 PM
 

Haha this is so cute Ginny! I can't believe this is your first ff! You write very well :)

post more soon please :)

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 9/20/2008 6:22 PM
 

Ps Idk if you know this, but my name is Kerry :)

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