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 9/20/2008 10:03 PM
 

pms please!

bumppppp :D

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 9/20/2008 11:05 PM
 

bump! 

sorry its taking so long guys,
im still working on the chapter though.
i kept getting distracted lol.
but i promise it will be up as soon as im done tonight! :D


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 9/20/2008 11:18 PM
 

BUMP!

PMS!

~Lauren~


LoveBug thanks Emily! :]
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 9/21/2008 12:03 AM
 

Hahaha mmmmbump =P

Ooooh sounds like mmmbop! Haha

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 9/21/2008 12:06 AM
 

alexis♥ wrote

Hahaha mmmmbump =P

Ooooh sounds like mmmbop! Haha

haha yeah it does!

mmmbop ba duba dop...

loll :P

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 9/21/2008 1:07 AM
 

ahhh!!! Hanson!!...haha

used to love them..

-Ashley

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 9/21/2008 1:36 AM
 

Here's chapter 4! It was originally going to be longer than this, but i decided to make the original end part of the next chapter. so, let me know what you think, and i'll keep working on the next chapter :D


The Sixteenth Wish
Chapter Four: Nick’s Point of View


“This isn’t our house.” I said sounding confused.

“Yeah, I know.” said Kevin.

“Then, why are we here?” I asked him, still oblivious to what was going on.

“Um, Dad told us to stop and pick something up for him here.” Kevin answered sounding a bit like he was lying, but I figured he had to be telling the truth. Why would he lie about something like that?
“Okay, well then go get it.” I said, not wanted to get out of the car. Joe and Kevin looked at each other and seemed to be discussing something silently, only using facial expressions.

“No, I think we should all go in.” Joe said after their silent conversation was over.

“And why’s that?” I asked him, beginning to get annoyed.

“Well, cause…” Kevin started to explain when Joe cut him off.

“There’s a killer on the loose!”

I stared blankly back at him.

“A killer?” Kevin gave Joe a look questioning if he was serious.

“Yeah man. Didn’t you hear? He comes to random parked cars and checks to see if anyone is inside. If there isn’t anyone, he breaks in and steals the car. And if there is someone in the car,” Joe paused for dramatic effect, “he kills them!”

“You’ve got to be kidding me.” Kevin mumbled to himself. I just raised an eyebrow at Joe, who had a satisfied look on his face.

“What?” He asked once he noticed the look I was giving him.

“You are the worst liar I know.” I said as I rolled my eyes at him.

“Ugh, whatever man. Just come with us.” Joe pleaded. I sighed.

“Fine.”

We all got out of the car, I was a little hesitant to at first, so I was the last one. Kevin and Joe started toward the building that we supposedly had to pick something up at. It looked like a big place. It was one floor and the outside was made of bricks. There were a few windows, but it was impossible to see what was inside. There must have been something covering the windows. Kevin and Joe were whispering to each other, already at the door. I wondered why they were waiting for me instead of going in.

“Nick, you go in first.” Joe suggested as I walked up to them.

“Why?” I asked.

“Just go.” Kevin pushed me towards the door. I gave him a look that said ‘what the heck’ and rolled my eyes. My brothers are so strange.

I reached for the door knob, feeling a little worried about what was inside. I mean, Joe and Kevin were really acting weird, even for them. I shook the thoughts from my mind and twisted the knob. I pushed the door so that it opened and I took a step inside the pitch black room with Joe and Kevin close behind. Once we were all in, the door slammed shut. Joe and Kevin didn’t seem to care, but I was a little creeped out. Just as I was about to turn around and get out of the dark, freaky building, I was startled by bright colors.

Colorful lights flashed on all around me, revealing what was really there.

“SURPRISE!”


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 9/21/2008 1:38 AM
 

 

Kevin began sucking Joe's tiny pen1s, riding Nick up and down, screaming out loud. Kevin could feel the cum bursting into his anus, and grunted with delight. Nick continued sucking and rubbing Kevin's small c0ck, shoving it in and out of his mouth.

Nick stopped for a second, then went to the closet, and pulled out his Cat-Of-Nine-Tails, cracking it off a few times, walking over to the orgy. Kevin got off Joe and they lined up, pen1ses erect. Nick started lashing out at their shafts with the whip, SNAP, SNAP. The blood and cum flew everywhere as the Jonas Brother's moaned with pure ecstacy.

Now it was Nick's turn, and he went on his knees, taking Joe's d1ck in his mouth. Kevin picked up the whip and began to snap it off on Nick's ass. Nick screamed in pure pleasure.

After about an hour of Sadomasochistic fuhcking, Kevin ran to the closet, and brought out the next play toys, a goat, a cat, and a horse. Nick went right for the goat, and started letting it ride inside of him. Faster and faster it went, Nick was ejaculating all over. Kevin took the cat, and let it lick at his tight ass-hole. He continued rubbing his c0ck up and down, spraying semen everywhere. Joe wanted the horse, and quickly bent over under it, letting its 2-foot-long d1ck penetrate his behind.

They continued Fahking for hours, and were found dead the next day. Cause of death: Happiness

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 9/21/2008 1:40 AM
 

nick is a grouchy pants in this ff aint he??

-Ashley

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 9/21/2008 1:44 AM
 

loved the chapter emily!!! hahah killer! joes so funny! SURPRISE!!! :D PMS!

~Lauren~


LoveBug thanks Emily! :]
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