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 9/21/2008 12:18 AM
 

Yet another poem one shot by me!

Haha. I love writing poems now (how odd! I never thought I'd like to! Guess life is full of surprises!)

I got the title idea and the last line from Demi's song "On The Line" ft. JB!!

Please leave me your feedback on this!
If you hate it, tell me. If you love it, tell me. If you'd change something, tell me.

Thanks!

And, same as "In The Moonlight", it's not really geared to one boy or another. It may even be the girl they break up with telling the story!
Use your imagination...
it's all your choice :D
((and I know it's a bit short, but i thought this would be better a bit shorter))

 

You’ve let me sit here

All alone

Heart broken for now

 

Why you left I don’t really get

You said you needed space

I didn’t think that meant you’d leave

 

I sit here crying

Alone on my bed

I wish you’d answer

I’ve called many times

 

I want to know

Where did we go so wrong?

What made you leave?

I want you back baby

 

Just don’t understand

You confuse me so much

Maybe it’s not just you

Maybe it’s just love

 

I feel so empty

So undone

So incomplete

So lonely

 

Like there’s so much inside

Just like a letter left unread

 

 

 

 

 


Thanks Ari! Bottom one by me :D
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 9/21/2008 1:03 AM
 

funny, this is random but on Jonasbrothersfanfiction.com I have 5 views on this  and on here I have 5 views.

does that tell me it's no good?


Thanks Ari! Bottom one by me :D
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 9/21/2008 2:59 PM
 

Does nobody honestly like it?

:(


Thanks Ari! Bottom one by me :D
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 9/21/2008 7:14 PM
 

Why do this have no comments?! I love it =] This is beautifull written, even if it is sad.

xoxo nicole <33


Thanks Ashlee!
Thanks Ari!
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 9/21/2008 7:19 PM
 

megggggggggg!!!!!!!!! what's up darling. long time no talk to.

 

anddddd omg!! this is reallyyyy awesome! ahhhhh. totallyyy sadnnesss. :'(

 

well you are a wonderful poet!

 

ily! peace! :  )

and taylor swift totallyyy pones!


heyyy! : D indecisive girlie here. = P well pm me at kaybuggie loves jonas. yep yep. well love yall! p.e.a.c.e. ♥
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