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 9/22/2008 8:53 PM
 

Again, I randomly wrote this.
I really do like poetry now.
Well, writing it, I should say :)

Please, please, please let me know what you think!
If you hate it...tell me!
If you love it...tell me!

Thanks!

 

 

 

We’re talking about everything

Talking about nothing

It’s what I love about you

We could talk forever

 

Crank that car radio

Let’s dance right here

No reason to leave

Just hold me near

 

I love your smell, baby

Your fresh cologne

The one I bought, maybe?

So sweet like you

 

I’m starring into your beautiful eyes

Wondering how I am so lucky

My love for you is as clear as the sky

You mean the world and more to me, babe

 

Kick off you shoes

Let the grass hold your feet

This is no news

Your kiss is my defeat

 

The warm summer air brushes by fast

I love your sweet kisses

This is surely a love to last

 

The crickets are chirping

It’s getting very late

I don’t want to leave, though

Want life to be this date

 

The sunset is falling

The moon is taking over

Life is now calling

But let’s just forget that now

 

You’re whispering softly

Something I love to hear always

I love you so much, babe

Now let me also say the same

 

You are making me laugh

I just cannot stop

It’s all on your behalf

Giggling nonstop

 

You are always there

When I’m bawling at the scene

I know that you care

And I know you know what I mean

 

You’re there to wipe away tears

Even if you don’t know what’s wrong

You always hold me real close

It helps when you sing that great song

 

The lake nearby

Is as calm as we are

We were so sly

To sneak out together

 

Your breath blows across my skin

As we move back and forth

Now I am wondering when

We’ll have to go back home

 

I’d like to stay here forever    

As I know that you would      

And you know that I want to, babe

But there’s no way we could

 

Let us just make this night last

As long as we can

Stay here until they make us

Come back hand-in-hand

 

I look down to the ground

As you get your guitar

I’m not making a sound

I already feel alone

Even though you’re not that far

 

 

I glance over to you

Smile as you bend over

Those tight denim jeans

Have never looked so good

 

 

 


Thanks Ari! Bottom one by me :D
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 9/22/2008 9:07 PM
 

bump!


Thanks Ari! Bottom one by me :D
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 9/22/2008 9:48 PM
 

no one liked it?

 

-sigh-


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 9/22/2008 11:58 PM
 
 Modified By angel.of.JONAS.music  on 9/22/2008 11:00:14 PM

aw i loved it!!!! great job!! so cute and romantic. i can't believe no one else commented!

but the ending stanza...classic xD


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 9/23/2008 8:17 AM
 

That was awesome! I wish I could write liek that!


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