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 11/2/2008 6:32 PM
 

To be honest, I don't really have any ideas.

But that's half the fun of writing a joint, right? lol

Just leave your name and a sample of writing?


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 11/2/2008 6:36 PM
 

Why dont you help me with One last Wish?


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 11/2/2008 8:11 PM
 

Name: Lily-Eluih or just Lily

Sample:

 He looked at me weird as I continued to half heartedly smile at him. I dont know what's wrong with me, maybe im just having an off day. He tried to lean in and hug me put i pulled away turning my face. Or maybe ive finally gotten that the love of my life was cheating on me.
 " Lily, whats wrong. This isnt you", He asked in a concerend tone. I bit my lip hoping what I would say next wouldnt come back and exploed in my face.
 " Where were you last night Kev", I asked in an off hand tone.
 " Hun, I told you with the guys", He said.
 " Kevin, I know where you were and who you were with. Its over", I said in whisper. I handt dare looked up yet, afraid that if I looked into his eyes that I would just give in.



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 11/2/2008 8:23 PM
 

Skyler heres the sample

The sounds in the room was the soft drumming of the rain and the rumble of the thunder. It was a slow day i had nothing to do so i let my mind wander in the darkest places. I came across the horrid words that always burned my chest, and ran those words again and again in my mind. "I' love you Danielle, but i met someone else." were the words i tried to forget, but couldn't because they were the only memory i had of- I can't even think his name without have the burning in my chest. I shut my eyes trying to take back control of my mind, wraping my arms around my waist breathing heavily. i could feel the knot in my thoat. No not now. I dropped down to the floor and held my knees to my chest trying to kept my chest in one piece. "Danielle! Are you ok?" the voice was distorted I tried to form words, but nothing came out. then another voice called out to me but i couldn hear barely make out the words, then everything went black. I woke to see my two best friends Aimee and Rachelle with panicked faces "Oh good your awake!' Rachelle said; in a relived voice, it was clear that she had been crying. "what happen Danielle? I Walk in and see you on the floor in a fetal postion, then next thing I know you pass out thats not normal." Aimee said; worried, but angry . "I'm fine guys its just stress." I said in a weak voice. "No your not Dani, don't lie to us we can't help you if you don't  trust us." Rachelle said; in a stern voice. I sigh "Look if I'm fine. I promise if there is something wrong you two will be the first to know, then Joe ok?" i said in a smooth voice, and gave them a smile. "OK fine Danielle there's no use in opposing. Oh and by the way the guys want you to go to their concert tonight so go get ready and put on a happy face because you know how Joe is if your not smiling." Aimee said; in a motherly voice. "OK. Whatever you say" I said jumping off the couch, but loosing balance and was caught by Rachelle "Are you sure your Ok?" She said; worried was written all over her face. I sigh  and give her a reasuring smile and she let go of my arms. I walk up the stairs straight to the bathroom.

 


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 11/2/2008 8:39 PM
 
 Modified By steeniejonaas; jube-jubeKJN <3  on 11/2/2008 7:40:27 PM

Christine.. but call me Steenie if you want. :)

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She took the Barney shaped cookie from the shaggy brown haired boy and smiled at him.

"I'm Evelyn. What's your name?" she asked.

He looked at her with a wide smile.

"I'm Joe. I'm seven and a half. Do you want to come inside my house and meet my brothers?"

She nodded and he took her hand leading her inside.

"Moooom! I have a friend!" he called out loud.

Just then a little curly brown haired boy came running out and hugged her knees tightly followed by another curly haired boy.

"I'm Kevin. That's Nick" he introduced smiling.

"I'm Evelyn"

Kevin smiled at me.

"Hi Evelyn. Do you want to come play guitar with me?" he asked taking her hand.

Joe grabbed her other hand pulling her back.

"No! I met her first! Evelyn, do you want more Barney cookies?"

"Barney's for babies Joe. Evelyn wants to do big kid stuff right?"

Both their eyes stared at her each of the boys expecting her to choose sides. She looked at Joe, then at Kevin, and finally at Nick who had gotten bored and went to play with his Blues Clues stuffed animal.

"I want to play with Nick!" she exclaimed running over to him.


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 11/2/2008 8:55 PM
 

Lily[[I dont care what you think as long as its about me]] wrote

Why dont you help me with One last Wish?

 

You wouldn't mind?  I don't want to intrude, the story is so great now. . . I'd be afraid to ruin it. lol


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 11/2/2008 9:33 PM
 

BUMP!


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 11/3/2008 9:25 AM
 

No I wouldnt mind! Are you kidding me?! This was your idea anyway, I was just posting it because you couldnt!


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