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 11/8/2008 9:24 PM
 
 Modified By -lorena;; Sanoj Fam(:  on 11/17/2008 9:53:42 PM

 Sup guys! i`m lorena ... && new to the world of ff. I've written a couple of stories with my bff before but we call them “daydreams” lol anywho I'd like to try my luck at writing a ff & see the response!

 

I need a future girlfriend for Joe [he will be dating someone less pleasant in the beginning]; she is also the main characters best friend =] And of course a girlfriend for Nick!

 

If you are interested just say who you would want to be with, your name, describe your personality & some physical traits such as hair & eye color that I can incorporate in the story! Without any further adieu, let us begin!

 

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Prologue

 

“Mom i..i.. i'm not lying!” little 8 year old Dahlia said to her mom in between sobs and hiccups. Her mom gave her a stern look that Dahlia knew all too well. She looked at the man standing next to her mom with an evil, drunken grin on his face. One look at him gave her this disgusting feeling at the pit of her stomach. How could her mom not believe her? Couldn't she see the malicious look in his eyes?! He was the devil in human form.

 

“Stop accusing him of all these crazy things Dahlia! He wouldn't do that to you ... he lo- loves you.” her mother,Melanie, said with much resistance. Even Dahlia knew she was trying hard to convince herself that those words were true. How many times had David beat her up? Little Dahlia had lost count, after two years of h.ell she had began to grow numb. At first sure he seemed great. Dahlia was willing to let another man into her life to try and fill the void that was left. Her father, her real father lost the battle with cancer right before her 5th birthday.

 

A couple of months into Melanie's and David's relationship he began to show his true colors and became the monster he is known as today. After awhile he stopped using excuses, like that he was drunk or just upset ... he came in and beat Dahlia and Melanie for the h.ell of it. His eyes showed satisfaction every time they coward in fear or pain. Lately, however, his pleasure came from sneaking into Dahlia's room and having his way with her. And that was what she had just finished telling her mother, who to blind to see the truth, was taking his side.

 

“You even know that isn't true!” Dahlia screamed at her mother, as her mother winced at the sudden outburst.

 

Before she knew what hit her, Dahlia felt a sharp pain on her cheek and a loud slapping sound. He hit her.

 

“Shut up you twit! Your a liar! You should be happy I'm still around to keep you and your mother alive! I'm the only person you have, no one else wants you two and no one ever will! Your father is lucky to be dead, at least he doesn't have to deal with your s.hit” he spat, slurring every other word.

 

Dahlia ran to her room at full speed, letting her tears fall off of her delicate, young face. The run to her room was blurry due to the tears but when she made it in, she locked her door and dove on to her bed, burying her face into the pillow, sobbing, punching and kicking. Her fight with the pillow soon came to an end and her fragile body became heavy as sleep took over. Exhausted she closed her beautiful eyes and fell asleep.

 

All to soon, she felt someone shaking her. She tensed up and closed her eyes tight, but she loosened her grip when the angelic sound of her mom's voice hit her ears.

 

“It's me sweetie, wake up, please” her mom pleaded, sounding close to tears. Dahlia look up at her mother, who seemed to have a new bruise on her face. Dahlia, crying, hugged her mom tight, as did her mother.

 

“Shh, sweetie don't cry! Everything is going to be fine but you're going to have to listen to me.” Melanie whispered. Melanie knew all along of David's horrible deeds and it was time to put a stop to it. Putting up a front, however, was the only way to guarantee survival.

 

“Okay mom, what's the matter?” Dahlia's innocent voice chimed.

 

“Your leaving sweetie, leaving this house. I've arranged a one way ticket to your Aunt Lucile's place in Florida.”

 

Dahlia's eyes started to shine bright with happiness and all her mother could do was smile.

 

“We're finally leaving, we're finally leaving him!” Her mother's smile fell.

 

“Dahlia baby, I have to stay. Things are already planned out, I'll follow you ... I promise.”

 

Dahlia could resist but she wouldn't, she had to be mature. She had to be strong for her mom.

 

“Okay, mom. I Love You.”

 

“I Love You Too” her mother choked out while hugging her precious daughter.

 

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Yeah, it's a little rough around the edges but things will smooth over. =] BUMP please and let me know if you guys like it. I might post chapter 1 later! oh and title idea suggestions are greatly appreciated! =]


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 11/8/2008 9:36 PM
 
I'll audition! (and welcome to JBF, by the way)

Name: Anna
Appearance: I have shoulder length wavy brown hair (that I straight iron), gray-blue eyes, and I'm about 5'4" with REALLY pale skin
Personality: Well, I'm really shy at first, but once you get to know me I start to talk alot, perhaps too much. And I am sarcastic at times, but not very frequently. I also laugh at random times, because I'm really easy going. So even at really not funny places I laugh.
Part wanted: Uh, Nick's girlfriend :D

BTW, I really like this! PMS


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 11/8/2008 10:04 PM
 

ahh thank you! you just made my day =] well night. lol

i'll be letting you soon if your in, but hey if no one else auditions you'll def. get the part=]

keep bumping/auditiong people!(: i'll be one for awhile!


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 11/8/2008 10:05 PM
 
 Modified By ronster119  [Kris Allen = <3]  on 11/8/2008 9:06:20 PM

Name: Ronni

Personality: I can seem quiet at first but that's just depending on the situation and who I'm with. Once I get warmed up or if I'm with my friends I am very outgoing, can be loud but not obnoxiously loud, and love to laugh and make other people laugh. When I laugh for some reason I have to walk backwards(even going up stairs, that didnt turn out too well, lol) and when I laugh really hard I cry. I am very loyal and my friends come to me for advice alot. I am very optimistic and positive when it comes to other people but when it comes to myself I usually think of the worst case scenario first. I am also extremely accident prone.

Appearance: I'm 5'4", average weight/slightly curvy figure, fair skin, bright blue eyes that change from a dark navy color to a lighter icy blue color, and long straight brown hair

Part Wanted: Joe's future girlfriend

Can't wait for this story, loved the prologue!


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 11/8/2008 10:20 PM
 

Name: Jessica Marie (friends call me Jay)

Personality: im very random, sarcastic at times, when im pmsing..dont get on my bad side lol, i love making my friends laugh, i am shy at first but once you get to know me i open up, im loud, im very clumsy, i could find the smallest crack on the sidewalk and i trip facedown,  i cry when i laugh too hard, i like to think positive but at times im pretty negative which isnt good, i panic sometimes and just loose it haha, i sing obnoxiously loud, i swear i could dance (its funny), and i love meeting new people.

Appearance: Im around 5'5ish, im pretty slim, tan, long dark brown wavy layered hair to my waist. I have sideswept bangs that bother the heck out of me when they get in my face, i have freckles and rosy cheeks, my eyes change colors alot. They usually are a green/grey color but sometimes just are completly green. Thank you mom for the eyes :D WOOHOO.

Part wanted: joe's future girl :)

prolouge was amazing. cant wait for the first chapter!!!


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 11/8/2008 10:28 PM
 

ooooh this sounds interesting!!

Name: Kirsten

Personality:  laid back, sometimes i can be really quite but then other times i can  be a goof ball, it just depends on who i'm around and what we're doing,  i'm a complete hopeless romantic, have a very close relationship with my family, i'm definitly a daddy's girl but then my mom and I are best friends too, i like to be spontaneous when the oppurtunity arises, i'm into sports (used to play when i was younger but now I just watch) but I also love when i can get all dressed up and girly for those special occasians, i love to have fun or just sit back and chill, i am EXTREEMLY ticklish, Jesus is #1 in my life, i also wear a purity ring that i've had for about 4 years now

Appearance:  5'2, 105lbs, naturally straight golden blond hair that comes just below my shoulders, green-blue eyes, petite body frame, small hands and feet (which a lot of people seem to notice for some reason) big bright smile, i look younger than i really am

Part wanted: Joe's future girlfriend/Mains bff....which seems to be quite popular haha........

good luck picking parts and writing!!

 


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 11/8/2008 10:34 PM
 

ohh jeez this auditon is gonna be tough! ahhh ... =/

i decided to close auditions by [probably] tomorrow! depending how things go from here:)

&& thanks for reading guys; really appreciate it!

BUMPPP


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 11/8/2008 10:36 PM
 

name: stephanie
i want to be with joe s'il vous plait =D (thanks french for thank you btw)
Personality:Loud and crazy and hyper 24/7, but i have my relaxing times, love my friends to death, not very serious want to have fun all the time although i can be serious at times, i love to meet new people, but i am kinda shy around them at first, i have a hard time talking to hot guys unless their my friends, athletic, laugh all the time, random and when im with my friends you should be afraid very afraid!
appearence: long to the middle of my back brunette hair with side bangs, tall 5'5, hazel eyes, small frame, i only wear glasses when i have to see far away and i only wear black mascara and eyeliner


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 11/8/2008 10:36 PM
 

would it help if i said i was open to being nicks gf too? cuz i totally am...joe's just the first choice....

 


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 11/8/2008 10:47 PM
 

DangerGirl4Life815 wrote

would it help if i said i was open to being nicks gf too? cuz i totally am...joe's just the first choice....

 

lol thanxx, it does help! apparently joe is pretty popular! [no duh!] :)

hey guys if you stick around for a little while i might be able to write chap 1 really quick && post!


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