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New Post 3/27/2008 11:32 AM
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Guardian Angel ( A Nick One Shot) 
Modified By ♥Keri♥[[Soaring Eagle]]  on 3/28/2008 8:57:32 AM)

i hope u guys like this; its my first fanfic, so it may not be very good:

Guardian Angel: A Nick One Shot
 
   Carly slowly walked towards the airport gate.
"20,21, ah, here we go, 22!" she said to herself. Carly, a 14-year-old girl from Minneapolis, had run away from home at 12 because her parents had abused her. She had been traveling across the country ever since, looking for someone to take care of her.
  As the girl made her way to her seat in coach, she began talking to herself. People stared at her, but she didn't care.Carly threw herself into her seat.Not five minutes after she had sat down, did three teenage boys come and sit in the seats in front of her.
"Dude, I can't believe we got put in coach again!" The middle one said. Carly immediatley recognized the boys.
"Hey, you guys are the Jonas Brothers!" she said. All three boys turned around to look at her.Carly felt her cheeks turn red.
"Yeah, that's us."The oldest said.
"You're Kevin," Carly said, pointing to the oldest boy.
"I'm Nick" the youngest one interrupted.
"And I'm Joe" the middle one said, grabbing Carly's hand and kissing it.Carly gave the boy a strange look.
"Carly." The girl said, shaking Nick's hand.
"Fasten your seatbelts.Takeoff will begin in a moment." the flight attendant said over the P.A. Carly and the boys buckled their seatbelts.Since it was late at night,soon after the plane had taken off, Carly fell asleep.
   Carly awoke to the sounds of alarms going off and people panicing.
"What's happening?!" Carly screamed.
"We don't know!" Nick yelled back to her.
"We're going down!" The pilot shouted from the front of the plane.The plane lowered quickly, though it seemed to take forever for it to crash to the ground. When the plane hi the ground, everyone scattered. Everyone, except for Carly, who was covered in carry-on luggage.
"Come on!" Kevin shouted as he grabbed Joe's hand and ran to the exit.
"Come on, Nick!"Joe yelled. Nick looked at the flames around him, then at Carly. Joe and Kevin had left the burning aircraft.Nick, scared to death, knew what he had to do. He dug through the luggage and uncovered Carly, who was out cold.He lifted her seemingly-lifeless body from the carry-ons and ran to the exit. Nick pushed the debris blocking the door away and jumped safely out of the aircraft. He ran to all the people standing outside, most of which were talking on their cellphones or taking pictures with them. Joe and Kevin saw Nick approach and ran to hug him.
"Why didn't you come with us?!" Kevin asked his brother.
"Look, it doesn't matter, we just have to get Carly to safety!" Nick pushed past his brothers and ran to the nurse that had been on the plane.Suddenly, the aircraft exploded.
"'Scuse me, ma'm," Nick said to her. The nurse turned around and said "What?"
"My friend here was covered in carry-ons and is out cold, and I'm not sure if she'll be okay!" Nick set Carly's body on the soft grass. The nurse felt Carly's neck for a pulse.
"She has a pulse, but we won't know if she will be okay unless she wakes up." Nick sat down next to Carly and began crying. His brothers walked over to him.
"What's wrong?" Joe asked sincerely.
"They won't know if Carly will be okay unless she wakes up." Nick said, voice breaking. Joe gave Nick a nice, long bear hug.
   Over an hour later,a police car arrived at the scene. Joe and Kevin had left Carly and were talking to other victims of the crash, but Nick never left her side. A policeman walked over to where Nick was sitting down beside Carly.
"What's wrong, son?" He asked, squatting down beside Nick.
"Carly had luggage piled on her, and they don't know if she'll be okay unless she wakes up." Nick whispered.
"How long has she been like this?"
"Almost two hours."
"Son, I'm afraid there's not much hope for Karen."
"Carly."
"That's what I said." Nick began crying again as the policeman walked away.
    Thirty minutes later, after everyone had already given up on Carly, Nick sat down beside her again,after getting up and talking to his brothers. Nick turned his back toward Carly. By now, she was probably dead. Suddenly, Carly's eyes opened slightly.
"Nick?" she whispered, trying to sit up.Stunned, Nick turned around. He helped her sit up.
"Carly!" he said,"You're, you're alive!" Hearing this, Joe and Kevin rushed over.
"Oh....my....gosh." Joe whispered. The nurse, the policeman, and a crowd of news reporters rushed over.
"Whoa,whoa, wait a minute! what happened here?" Carly asked.
"When the plane crashed, carry-ons fell on you and knocked you out," Nick began " I uncovered your body and carried you out here to the grass where you were unconcous for about two hours and everybody thought you were dead."
"Oh my gosh! You saved my life!" Calry said, standing up to hug Nick. She cried on his shoulder until the rescue vehicles came and took everyone to a hotel where they could stay the night.
   The next day, Carly and the Jonas boys were on every news show possible. Everyone thought their story of survival was amzing, but Carly had only one thing to say about it:
   "It was like I had a Guardian Angel watcghing over me....and that Angel was Nick."
 

              The End?

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New Post 4/14/2008 11:55 AM
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Re: Guardian Angel ( A Nick One Shot) 

Aww, Nick!

He saved Carly's life. And wouldn't give up on her until she was awake.

I wish I could have Nick as a guardian angel.

That was good, even if it was your first.

Make more! lol


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New Post 4/14/2008 11:57 AM
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Re: Guardian Angel ( A Nick One Shot) 

 [ashlee] wrote

Aww, Nick!

He saved Carly's life. And wouldn't give up on her until she was awake.

I wish I could have Nick as a guardian angel.

That was good, even if it was your first.

Make more! lol

ill try. im really stressed put right now with all this writing!

im getting zits everywhere!


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New Post 4/25/2008 11:04 AM
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Re: Guardian Angel ( A Nick One Shot) 

wow..

just...

wow.

you = amazing.

i was on the edge of my seat reading this. DON'T GO CARLY!

and nick, nick was her guardian angel. it was so cute!

i love how she was searching for someone to protect her and take care of her, and it was nick. after everyone gave up hope, he refused to.

ahh, this was amazing!

thanks for linking me!


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Re: Guardian Angel ( A Nick One Shot) 

you're welcome, Ashley. thank you for reading it.

ur still gonna write, right?


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Re: Guardian Angel ( A Nick One Shot) 

 TeardropsOnMyGuitar13[[DG]] wrote

you're welcome, Ashley. thank you for reading it.

ur still gonna write, right?

i loved it. i was an absolute pleasure reading. (minus the whole edge on my seat with anxiety thing, but even that was awesome.)

and yeah, sadly, i'm going to continue writing. much thanks to you and many others for that.


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Re: Guardian Angel ( A Nick One Shot) 

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!!!!!!

*throws confetti*


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New Post 4/25/2008 11:25 AM
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Re: Guardian Angel ( A Nick One Shot) 

Awww that was so sweet!! Really great! I loved it!


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Re: Guardian Angel ( A Nick One Shot) 

 [twilight] wrote

Awww that was so sweet!! Really great! I loved it!

wow, i never thought id get so many comments.


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New Post 4/25/2008 11:37 AM
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Re: Guardian Angel ( A Nick One Shot) 

you know i could have sworn i commented this before. or maybe i just read it and didn't comment. either way i'm commenting now.

and i loved it. it was just so sweet. it was really good. and i love how Nick saved her.


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