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 4/8/2009 2:54 PM
 
 Modified By TaiylorLaRee[frito-lay]  on 11/14/2009 1:06:10 PM

So, this is my first story on here, so to anyone who reads this, please be respectful but give me your opinion.

Chapter 1

“Selena, come on! My mom said it was fine!” my best friend, Demi, whined into the phone.

“Well, that’s really quite fine and dandy, Demi, but my mom didn’t! She would never let me go to that party.”

“Well, you’re mom needs to trust you more.”

“I couldn’t care less about the party,” I said honestly.

“Just come for me, please?”

“Dem, I can’t!”

“Sneak out. I do it all the time.”

“Oh, yeah, and then my mom would definitely trust me,” I said sarcastically.

“Selena Marie Gomez! You never have fun and this is your chance to rip out of that cocoon and become a butterfly!”

“Huh?”

“You should stop being shy and make new friends, but none of them better than me.”

“Whatever, Demi. I’ll sneak out, but only if you do my Geometry homework for a month.”

“Of course!”

“Okay. See you in a while.”

“Meet outside of Ronalds at 8:30.”

“’Kay, bye,” I said and I closed my cell phone. I took a deep breath and thought about my situation.

Should I go and risk getting in trouble with mom? Or not go and get in trouble with Demi? But she is right. I do need to come out of my shell a little. Everyone at school probably thinks I’m some hermit, or maybe they don’t even know I exist…

I’m walking as quickly as I can. I told my mom I was going to McDonalds with Demi, which isn’t a lie. We just aren’t eating there. My legs were trembling from the slight breeze. I chose to wear a cardigan and a jean skirt with leggings underneath. It’s a safe combo.

I arrived at McDonalds and looked around for Demi. I couldn’t see her. I went inside McDonalds but she wasn’t there either.

Well, gee thanks, buddy. You ditch me and go to the party.

Not even two seconds later I saw a small glint in the alley beside me. I cautiously approached it, taking out my cell to use as a light. I saw the twinkle again and gasped, almost causing me to have an asthma attack.

There on the ground, Demi was laying with a steak knife jabbed in her stomach. Tears sprung into my eyes, leaving me speechless. My best friend was lying there with blood soaking her purple tee. I turned around and ran out of the alley and back to the main street where I bumped into someone. I stumbled backward into a wall and looked up.

A boy I had never seen before was standing there. He had dark hair; deep brown eyes and a small smile tugging at his lips.

“You okay?” he said.

“I…no! My best friend is back there and she’s…she’s…” I couldn’t finish. I began crying. The boy hugged me to his chest and let me cry into his shirt. He stroked my hair lightly and said, “Do you want me to go back there?”

“C-could you just c-call 911?” I mumbled.

“Sure.” He pulled out his phone and called. I smiled thankfully at him. He had treated me as if we’d been friends since we were born, but I had never seen him. I watched him talk as I rubbed my arms to keep warm. He put his phone away and said, “They’re on their way.”

I thanked him and sat on the ground, wiping my tear-stricken face. He sat down next to me and laid his arm across my shoulders and pulled me close and said, “Everything is going to be all right.”

I looked at him and actually believed him. I hadn’t even known him for ten minutes and already I could sense something.

So, that's it! Tell me what you think!!


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 4/9/2009 8:14 AM
 

Great start!

Noooo, Demi's bleeding :(

Post more soon!

Laura xxx


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 4/9/2009 9:03 AM
 

Thanks :) i'm going to put the next chapter up in a bit. I'm just putting the finishing touches on it. Once again thanks for reading that :) haha. I'm so excited right now.


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 4/9/2009 11:38 AM
 

 

Chapter 2

 

 

I was at the hospital, sitting in a chair next to Demi’s bed. She had several tubes attached to her. I was scared for her. The hospital always gave me the jitters with its strange smell to all the blood and injuries. Demi wasn’t moving. My eyes started leaking, my once waterproof mascara now smearing down my face. I didn’t bother wiping my face since it was only Demi and I, and she had seen me cry several times. But the first few times she was scared to comfort me.

“Miss Gomez?” a nurse said, poking her head into the door. “There’s a visitor for Demi. Do you mind if he comes in?”

I nodded, thinking it was Cody her boyfriend. The nurse opened the door and Cody didn’t walk in, but the one boy did. His eyes were sparkling even in the dim room and his hair was shiny. He smiled and sat down next to me.

“Hello,” I said.

“Hello, Miss Gomez…”

“It’s…uh…Selena,” I said, looking back at Demi.

“Hello Selena…I’m Joe.”

“Hello Joe.” I looked at him out of the corner of my eye and then without looking at him I said, “What are you doing here?”

“I–well–I wanted to see if she was okay, if that’s all right with you.”

“Whatever.”

My mid-back started to itch. I bent and twisted my arm any way it could go but I couldn’t scratch it just right. Finally, Joe lifted his arm and lightly scratched my back in the right place. My body loosened up but my heart quickened.

I moved a little and he stopped. I avoided eye contact and tapped my foot to a random beat. I nearly jumped out of my skin when Joe spoke.

“Would you like to sit on the couch? I’m sure you’re uncomfortable and I doubt she’s going to be waking up in a few minutes. You should get some rest.”

For the first time, I really looked at him. His hair had a curly look to it as if he’d taken a shower and towel dried it; his eyes were light brown when light hit them but in darker places they were chocolate brown; he also had an almost unnoticeable red mark between his eyes and above his nose.

“Um…I…I’m fine.”

“Oh…okay. I was just –”

“What happened there?” I asked as I lightly touched the red spot.

“Oh. I ran into a wall.”

He must’ve seen my eyes widen because he added, “I know you must think I’m an idiot. But I was making a video with my brothers for YouTube. I was supposed to go through the wall, but it didn’t work in my favor.”

After I took in what he had said, I smiled. He smiled too. “I’m pretty clumsy you could say,” he shrugged.

“I have my moments too,” I admitted.

“Yeah. I –”

“Sel?” I heard. My eyes darted to Demi and saw her eyes were open a fraction of an inch.

“Demi!” I squealed. I hugged her.

“Be careful. I’m hurt,” she said giggling.

“Sorry, but…I thought you were dead. What happened?”

“It was weird. I was standing in front of McDonalds and then this guy came up to me and said he had a message to give me. So he led me into the alley and next thing I know I’m in here…”

“You got stabbed,” I stated plainly.

“Really?” she asked, her eyes looking somewhere other than me. I followed her gaze to Joe. Joe wasn’t looking at her though. He actually looked like he was trying to avoid eye contact.

“Demi…this is Joe.”

“Hey,” she said flirtatiously.

He looked at her and barely smiled.

“Um…hi.”

“He helped me out when I found you,” I explained.

“Well, obviously we have to give him something in return,” Demi said, twirling her hair. I nearly slapped her. Not because she was flirting with Joe, but because she had a boyfriend!

“Do you go to East Northumberland High?” she asked.

“Uh…yeah. I do. I’m a sophomore.”

“Really? I am too, but I’ve never seen you before,” Demi said, not even paying the slightest attention to me.

“I’m in a lot of AP classes.”

“Wait…so you’re a nerd?”

“No. I’m just smart.”

“So, a nerd?” she said again.

“Um…” I began to say.

“Sel’s in a lot of AP classes too. By the way, Sel, you should go wash your face. You look like a raccoon.”

My eyes started watering as I stared at her with disgust. She was completely embarrassing me. I got up, accidentally pushing the chair into the wall really hard. As I approached the door, I heard Demi say, “So, let’s talk and get to know each other.”

I rolled my eyes.

“I…uh…I’m going to go help Selena.”

“Wait – what?” she said, as of she’d been yanked back to reality.

“Yeah, she’s sort of upset.”

“I…wait…but!”

“Sorry.”

I smiled and waited for him outside of the door. He came out and took a sharp intake of breath when he saw me standing there.

“Oh…sorry,” I mumbled.

“No. It’s fine. Ready to go wash up?”

“You bet.”

“So, doesn’t she have a boyfriend?”

“How do you know that?”

“I talk to Cody occasionally and he says he has a girlfriend called Demi.”

“Yeah, that’s her, but she flirts with a lot of guys…even if I like them.”

“Wait –”

I sped up to the bathroom door and said, “I’ll be out in a sec!”

I got in the bathroom and nearly laughed when I saw my face. It was red and blotchy with huge black circles smeared around my eyes. I wet a paper towel with warm water and rubbed vigorously at my face. My face was getting clearer when I heard a soft bump in one of the stalls behind me. I finished my face when another bump made me jump. I dropped to the ground and looked under the doors. I saw a foot pull up from the floor just in time. My breathing became rigid. I slowly got up and backed toward the bathroom door when the stall door opened. A man with a shaved head stepped out with a knife in his hand. The knife that looked similar to the one that was in Demi when I found her.

I screamed as loud as I could, closing my eyes tight while taking deep unsteady breaths. The door opened behind me. I turned around to find myself face to face with Joe, his sweet cinnamon breath lingering like a safe presence. He grabbed me and said, “What happened?”

I looked over my shoulder. “He –”

No one was there. The man had somehow disappeared.

“He’s gone…”

“Who’s ‘he’?”

“The man…he had a knife…like the one that was in Demi before…it was all bloody. H-he…was going to kill me, Joe!”

“You do know this is a girl’s bathroom, right?”

“Yes! I saw him! Do you believe me?” I looked at him, my body trembling. He hugged me to him and rested his chin on my head.

“Yeah. I do.”

The door opened behind us. I looked around Joe to see an old lady. She was looking at us strangely.

“Shouldn’t you two get out of here?” she said.

“Sorry. She um…well…sorry,” Joe said, obviously embarrassed. We walked out and then I burst into a fit of giggles.

“What are you laughing at?” he asked me, his smirk tugging at his lips.

“That woman’s face and your reaction. Your face is so red right now.”

“I wouldn’t be talking,” he said. Joe tickled my sides and I could feel my cheeks reddening.

“Joe! Stop!” I breathed.

“Only if you say that I’m the coolest guy you know!”

“I can’t…” I mumbled.

“What?” he said, pulling away.

“I can’t say that. You’re the only guy I know. Well, besides Cody, but he never talks to me.”

“So, you don’t…talk to guys?” he said, raising his eyebrows.

“Well, I barely talk to girls either.”

“Oh, good. I mean, not good. But I was thinking you were gay or something.”

I gasped and hit him playfully. “I’m not gay!”

“I was just checking.”

I hit him again.”

“What was that for?”

I didn’t answer him. I saw a shaved head pass right by me and I shuddered.

“Selena?”

“He…he…”

“Selena!”

I turned around to try and find the man but he had disappeared. How did he get out of the bathroom without me noticing and then walk right by? I –

I felt arms wrap around my body and squeeze gently. Joe. I closed my eyes and breathed slowly. Joe’s with me, for now. The man can’t hurt me when he’s around…

“Are you okay?” I heard Joe ask.

I nodded.

“Are you sure?”

I hesitated then I shook my head. “He just walked by…”

“Who?”

“The man…”

“Wait. The guy that was in the bathroom with you?”

“Yeah…I saw his head…”

He stayed silent. He took my hand and led me back to Demi’s room where she has asleep. I sat down and stared blankly at the wall, the man’s face imprinted on my eyes.


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 4/9/2009 12:54 PM
 

Oh Golly.

I love it!

Can You Check out My story? Its called

If This is Fate, Im Demanding a Refund

Thanks! And PMS!

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 4/9/2009 2:01 PM
 

Thank youzzzzz!!!!! lol. I LOVE your story by the way. I checked it out right when I read your comment.


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 4/9/2009 2:17 PM
 

Thank You!!

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 4/9/2009 4:03 PM
 

 

Chapter 3

 

It’s been a week since Demi’s incident, since I discovered that man, since I met Joe. Funny enough, I haven’t seen him around school. I searched high and low the first two days, but he was nowhere in sight. Demi was released from the hospital two days ago and when she found Cody, they had an argument about how he hadn’t come to visit her. He said he had, but Demi asked me and I told her that I was there the whole time and he never came. So, they broke up…again.

“It’s not like I hate him or anything, but he gets so annoying when he wants to go further,” Demi said, pulling my hair so tight, I thought it might rip out. “Cody is actually the first guy I’ve liked that much. But God…”

I stayed silent, though I felt like screaming when she twisted another portion of my hair tightly.

“Do you get where I’m coming from?”

“Not really…” I said, staring straight.

“Sel, you need a boyfriend…I get tired of talking to you about my boy problems when you don’t have any problems to begin with.”

“Maybe it’s best that I don’t have a boyfriend. I mean, apparently it’s not all kissy-kissy and lovey-dovey from where you’re coming from.”

“Once you get past everything…you really enjoy it. Trust me.”

“Demi…have you ever had…it?” I asked, right out of the blue.

“Um…no. Have you? Because if you have and you’ve never had a boyfriend, that’s kind of creepy.”

“No, I haven’t. I doubt I ever will. No guy even knows I exist…” Except Joe, I said in my head.

“Not even that Joe guy?” Demi said and I could tell she was smiling, but I didn’t know if it was because she was thinking of him or that she was thinking of him and I being together.

“Well…yeah. Of course he knows I exist. But –”

“He’s hot.”

“What?”

“Yeah. Like surface of the sun hot…”

“Demi…you just broke up with Cody and you’re probably going to get back together.”

“So? I can talk about guys…”

“Yeah…but…”

“You know I didn’t see him at school.”

“Yeah…”

“Do you think he’s a school skipper?”

“Demi, he’s in all AP classes.”

“Yeah, you’re right.”

“Can I ask you a question?”

“Sure.”

“What did the guy that stabbed you look like?” I asked, turning around to look at her.

“I don’t remember…um…I remember he had on a McDonalds uniform…he was bald…”

“Like a shaved head? Or really bald?”

“I don’t know! Why are you asking?”

“I…I just wanted to know.”

“Whatever…Okay, your hair is finished. My –”

Demi was interrupted by her phone. She looked at it and said, “Cody.”

“Maybe you should answer…” I mumbled.

She pushed Talk. “Hello? …Um…no…I’ve moved on. Cody…you know I like you…no, I know that, but…You’re always so…Cody…Co – STOP!”

My eyes widened. Demi turned around, her eyes leaking with tears.

“C-Cody! Please! S-Stop!”

I got up from the floor and approached Demi. She was sobbing hysterically. I gave her a tissue, which she took. She blew her nose.

“NO! STOP IT!” she screamed. She threw the phone at the wall where it busted. Demi collapsed onto the floor. I bent down and hugged her.

“What did he say?”

“He…said he was going to kill me if I didn’t love him.”

“Do you?”

“Well, I definitely don’t anymore!”

I patted her back and said, “Well, here’s another reason not to get a boyfriend. If you don’t love him, he tries to kill you.”

Demi hiccupped and giggled. “Do you mind if I go home early? We can have another sleepover next week.”

“Sure, Demi. I just want you to feel better.”

“Thanks, Sel.” She got up and moved toward the door, picking up her bag. She disappeared into the hall and then came back. “You know…no matter what I say or do or how I act, you’ll always be my best friend.”

“Yeah, I know Demi.”

“And when your boyfriend breaks up with you, if you get one, I’ll be right here.”

“I’m already right here for you, Demi.”

She smiled at me before leaving. I sat in silence, hearing Demi’s car start up and pull out. I spotted her phone on the floor in two pieces. I crawled over to it and tried putting it back together. I managed it and turned it on. Her battery was nearly dead. One New Voicemail popped onto the screen. I put in the code.

“Demi! You b*tch! I hope you die in your sleep! If you don’t I’m going to hunt you down and kill you!”

Heartbroken much?

I went searching through her texts where there were five from Cody with the same message.

You’re dead.

“Cody is a freak…” I said to myself. Cody…Joe talks to Cody sometimes! Maybe I can talk to Cody and get Joe’s number or something.

I dialed his number and waited for him to pick up. Surprisingly he did.

“You’re dead, Demi.”

“Cody, it’s me, Selena.”

“Oh, hey.”

“I was wondering if you knew Joe’s number…”

“Joe?”

“Yeah…um…he has dark hair, brown eyes, a little taller than me?”

“Uh…”

“He helped me get Demi to the hospital.”

“Oh! Right! Yeah, I have his number.”

“Can I have it?” I asked after he said nothing else.

“Oh, you want it?”

“Nooo, I just wanted to call to see if you had his number,” I said, sarcasm in my voice.

“Well, he doesn’t like it when people give out his number.”

“Would you just give it to me?” I snapped.

“Woah! Okay, okay!”

He gave me his number.

“So, hey, how about you and me later?” he said.

“Uh…ew,” and I hung up. I dialed Joe’s number and waited for him to pick up, but to no avail. I shrugged and shut the phone off and got into bed, suddenly tired.

Okay, that's all I'm putting up today. I had Chapter 2 and 3 already written. I don't really feel like writing a chapter today. I'll put one up maybe tomorrow if I get time to write it. I'm feeling kinda rejected though haha. Tell your friends to read this please?? I'd appreciate it!!


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 4/9/2009 4:06 PM
 

NO PROBLEM hehe.


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 4/9/2009 9:27 PM
 

I just wanted to say something...I LOVE MY NEW SIGGIES!!!!!! lol. I'm all excited now. haha. thanks Evie. i love them both!! <3


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