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 4/13/2009 6:58 PM
 

So, this is my first story! It's a Kevin three-shot for the song Here Comes Goodbye by Rascal Flatts. I hope you enjoy it. All feedback is welcome, but please, try not to be too harsh, ok? :] 

Enjoy!

Here Comes Goodbye

                Kevin smiled slightly, running a hand through his mess of curls as Jake, his monster of a Labrador, walked to the front door, tail waggling, ear perked. Peering through the blinds, he listened to the driveway hoping to hear the blaring of music and skidding of tires he was so used to. Kevin opened the front door, letting Jake out to the yard and walked into the dining room, taking a lighter from the drawer of the hutch, lighting the two candles sitting so perfectly upon the table.
                Placing a second glass on the table and pulling ever so gently to straighten the silk table cloth, Kevin nearly dropped the bottle wine he held in his hand as an excited bark came from the front yard. For the first time in almost an hour, Kevin listened to his surroundings, taking in every detail of the moment, the last time he’d be called “the boyfriend”.  Silence filled the house as he noticed the CD that had been playing had stopped, a quiet clicking coming from the old player signaled the last track had finished.
                Footsteps slowly echoed off the wooden paneling of the front porch as Kate walked up the stairs to the door. Nervously straightening his shirt, Kevin patted his pocket, checking that the box he had bought earlier still remained. With a questioning look at the sound of the doorbell, he walked to the front door, opening it to reveal a very monotonous looking Kate.
                “Come on in,” Kevin smiled, stepping to the side as she walked through, Jake at her heels.
                Placing a kiss on her cheek, Kevin’s smile faltered as he noticed her strange mood. His eyes quickly scanned her face, hoping to see a smile form, any sign of happiness expressed, but he received nothing: her hazel eyes showed emptiness, her face displaying no emotion.
                “You ok?” He questioned, rubbing a hand slowly on her shoulder. “You usually just come right in.”
                Kate looked at him, a small, fake smile dancing on her lips are she replied with a soft “yeah, I’m fine.” Placing her keys on the table next to the door, she slowly took off her jacket and hung it on the metal hook coming from the wall.
                “I made dinner, I hope you’re hungry,” Kevin grinned, shrugging off her mood as he led her into the dining room.
                “Everything looks great,” she replied, slowly sitting into the chair Kevin had pulled out for her. Her voice drifted off into the silence as they settled into the meal, the only sounds coming from their forks and the occasional splash of wine as one of them refilled their glass.
                Stealing a glance at Kate, Kevin’s worried look returned as he noticed the small amount of food gone from her plate and the piece rolling from side to side as she pushed it gently with her fork. Questioning again, Kevin broke the silence as he asked her if she was ok. With a shrug for an answer, an unusual response from Kate, he prodded further, hoping to get a better answer.
                “Are you sure?” Kevin asked, slowly slipping his hand into his pocket, running his finger over the black velvet casing.
                “I can’t do this anymore,” she replied in a soft, barely audible voice as she put the fork down.
                “You can’t do what? We can go do something else if–”
                “No, Kevin, that’s not what I mean,” she sighed, running a hand through her hair, a nervous habit she’d picked up from him during their year and a half of dating.
                “Then what do you mean?” He questioned, hoping his gut was telling him wrong. Kevin took his hand from his pocket and reached for Kate’s, trying to stop her nervousness.
                “Us, I can’t do this anymore. I can’t keep going on pretending everything’s ok… that I’m still in love with you,” she said, her voice trailing to a whisper with the last words. Watching Kevin’s face go from worried to shocked to a look of pain in less than a second, Kate braced herself as she continued with her explanation. “I can’t handle you being on tour all the time, you traveling day in and out. Do you have any idea what that’s like for me? I watch my friends hang out with their boyfriends in public all the time and I rarely get to see mine, let alone talk to him. It’s hard knowing that when you’re not home, you have girls gawking at you, draped all over you, flirting shamelessly and at first I was fine with it, but maybe… maybe I realized that I’m more needy that I thought.
                “You know I’m not the kind of person who needs her boyfriend there every second of the day, but it is nice to be able to talk to them at least once. I tried convincing myself that I still love you, but I… I just don’t. We’ve drifted apart and I just can’t see myself hanging on to something that I don’t see going anywhere. I’m so sorry for dragging this out so long,” she said in a pained voice, a single tear slipping from the corner of her eye as she stood up and gently placed a kiss on the side of Kevin’s face, allowing her lips to linger for a few seconds.
                “I really am sorry,” she whispered as she glanced back once, picking up her jacket and walked out the door. Jake stood nose to the door and let a small whimper come out as his tail drooped between his legs.

 

So, that's part one of the story. I'll post the next part after I get some feedback. :]

Oh, just so you know, I didn't remember that the character from Twilight was named Jake/Jacob until after I already named the dog. Haha. :]


Krissy always laughs when they act stupid. :)
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 4/13/2009 7:19 PM
 

Aw...it was cute in the begining then I got all sad...no no no, Kate...no! Kevin....the black velvet box...disappointment...shock...it was all there

CONTINUE! I must know what happens!


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 4/13/2009 7:33 PM
 

ditto to brianna's post.


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 4/13/2009 7:45 PM
 

Poor Kevin! I hope that Kevin will be alright.

I loved it and I can't wait to read the rest!


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 4/13/2009 7:50 PM
 

Mango.

I love this! I was so happy for them! But then Kate came in a werid mood-y

But Kevin just let her be, and then she broke up with him.

BROKE UP WITH HIM?!?

We don't like that.

Fix this please.

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 4/13/2009 9:00 PM
 

Aw poor Kevy...

Post more pleaseee! :)


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 4/14/2009 3:06 PM
 

Bump.

I'll post the second part soon. :D


Krissy always laughs when they act stupid. :)
"There's a beautiful side and something important in every single person out there no matter who they are. No matter what you might say to them, they might be someone who can change the world." -Paul Kevin Jonas the second.
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 4/14/2009 5:44 PM
 

So, here's the second part to the story!

Enjoy! :D

                Kevin laid in his bunk, watching the rain slowly slide down the fogged window of the tour bus. It’d been just a month since Kate had walked out his door, one month of plastering on a smile, thirty days since he’d been back to the place it had happened.
                Removing his hand from under the pillow his head rested upon, Kevin placed his hand to the cool glass and rubbed his thumb across it, clearing enough of the translucent barrier to see out of. Breathing heavily with regret, he gazed across the highway and through the rain, thoughts of what Kate may be doing at the moment running through his mind.
                Rolling over to face the aisle, Kevin reached below his bunk to the suitcase at the very top, sliding his hand into the smallest compartment to reveal the black velvet box he had bought just a month and a half earlier. He placed it tenderly in front of the window, fearing if he was too rough, it might break as well. Running a hand through his untamed curls, Kevin sighed softly as he read the inscription, closing his eyes to feel the emptiness.
                Kevin remembered every detail of their relationship, the fights and the kisses, all the dumb jokes and stupid things they found hilarious, and fought to keep his composure as he heard her voice say “I love you.” He remembered the first time he had heard her say it as vividly as if he was watching it in real life, replaying the scene through his mind.
                Kevin and Kate had been on their second official date in the four months they had known each other. After spending so much time apart, only getting to talk or text over the phone, Kevin had tried to the point of insanity to get everything perfect: getting there on time, reservations at her favorite restaurant, bringing her favorite flower; however, nothing had seemed to go in his favor. Kevin’s car had broken down on his way to pick up the flowers, which had been sold out by the time he got there, and because of the break down, they missed their reservations, but for some reason, Kate didn’t care.
                With nothing else to do, the two of them ended up ordering pizza and ate it in the middle of the park by Kate’s apartment, where it began to down pour. Kevin remembered the laughing screech Kate made as the cold rain hit her bare arms and how their hair had plastered to their faces in a matter of minutes. He remembered how they ran down the sidewalk trying to get back to Kate’s apartment and he remembered how they were stuck at the intersection under the street light when the crosswalk wouldn’t change and the cars didn’t seem to stop coming.
                Peeling his eyes away from the ring, Kevin shut the box and stared out the window once more, playing the final frames, slowly welcoming insanity as he heard her say “I love you” once again.
                Kevin’s smile grew bigger as he watched Kate bend her neck backwards, watching the falling sky come crashing down on her closed eyes. With outreached arms, Kate stood under the soft glow of the street light, the drops of rain slowly rolling down her face, accentuating the curve of her pale lips. Kevin smiled softly at the beauty Kate found in the simplest of things and could barely comprehend what he was doing as he stood himself in front of her, placing a hand on the small of her back gently pulling her closer.
                Kate opened her eyes, the hazel coloring radiating in the soft light as she lightly bit her lip; Kevin’s eyes danced across them, noticing the bead of rain her teeth had split and the barely visible cloud of breath forming as she exhaled. Leaning his head down, Kevin placed a kiss on her lips, feeling a smile form on hers as well as his.
                “I think I’m in love with you,” he said softly, resting his forehead against hers, completely forgetting the rain crashing down and the cross walk buzzing, telling them they could cross.
                “Would it help you make up your mind if I told you I love you?” She questioned in all sincerity.
                “Are you saying that you…?”
                “Yeah Kevin, I am. I love you,” she smiled, her eyes gleaming with excitement as he responded with the same.
                Kevin rolled onto his back, staring helplessly at the bunk above his. He remembered the moment with such intensity. He could see in her eyes that at that moment she’d forgotten every other heart break in the past, that she had never felt that way before.
                Placing his feet to the ground, Kevin stood and walked to the main area of the bus to find his brothers gathered around a keyboard, Nick with guitar in hand. Kevin looked at them with tired eyes; he’d given up on sleeping for the night, and every other night before.
                “Hey Kev, how you doin’?” Nick asked softly as he jotted something down quickly.
                “What are you working on?” He asked, giving a shrug to Nick’s question.
                Kevin reached for the notepad as Nick pulled it away, writing another line. A confused look spread across Kevin’s face, he’d hoped to help them, thinking it might help him feel better.
                “Oh, so now I can’t help with a song?” Kevin asked angrily. “First you won’t tell me what you’re playing on guitar when I asked, then sound check turns into a secret play-something-on-piano writing session, and now I can’t help write!” Kevin ranted, his voice getting louder.
                “Whoa Kevin, wait a–”
                “No, I can take a hint guys, thanks. Why not just kick me out of the band?” He continued as he headed back to his bunk.
                “Kevin, you’re overreacting,” Joe and Nick said as they grabbed him by the arms and pulled him back to the couch.
                “That’s not it,” Joe started. “We’re, well, we’re writing–”
                “– a song for you. We were hoping to keep it a secret until it was finished, but we’re stuck. Nothing seems to sound right,” Nick finished as he handing him the notepad.
                Kevin’s eyes traced the lyrics printed across the lines, each word hitting him harder than the one before it. His listened to the music Nick had played-back on the keyboard and listened to him strum along. Kevin robotically took the pen off the table, scribbled the second verse quickly on the pad, and stood up. Stopping the music, Nick stared at him as he walked back to the bunks and curled into his. Joe silently picked up the pad and began to read the words.
                “That’s it,” he whispered, looking at Nick.

 

So there it is! Comments are lovely. :]


Krissy always laughs when they act stupid. :)
"There's a beautiful side and something important in every single person out there no matter who they are. No matter what you might say to them, they might be someone who can change the world." -Paul Kevin Jonas the second.
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 4/14/2009 5:57 PM
 

I'm really interested about the song that the boys are writing, and maybe it will bring Kate back.

I love your writing Mango it is amazing. :)


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 4/14/2009 6:14 PM
 

lindsay wrote

I'm really interested about the song that the boys are writing, and maybe it will bring Kate back.

I love your writing Mango it is amazing. :)

Aww thanks Lindsay! That really means a lot, especially since this is my first story. :]


Krissy always laughs when they act stupid. :)
"There's a beautiful side and something important in every single person out there no matter who they are. No matter what you might say to them, they might be someone who can change the world." -Paul Kevin Jonas the second.
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Here Comes Goodbye [Kevin Three-Shot]
I Believe In Us (This Holiday) [one-shot]
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