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 6/16/2009 3:30 PM
 
 Modified By CHAR!?  on 6/24/2009 12:15:30 PM

 

 
One more shot.
 
Ch1.
 
Clearly coming to this sleepover had been a big mistake. I was sitting on the couch in my friend’s basement eating oreos by the dozen. There were 4 girls there, besides myself. Hogging the remote and also stuffing her face was Bee.  She was tall, skinny, blonde and very temperamental but we were used to her. Falling asleep on the couch next to me was Cassidy. Cass was the quietest one of the group. She was also tall, but more curvy. Her life revolved around dance. The two other girls were sitting on the floor talking slowly. That’s because they were Sadie and Verena. It was Sadie’s house that we were all at, Verena was her foreign exchange student. Verena was from a little town in Germany, and considering that spoke excellent English. She was small, blonde, and gorgous but her accent always gave us a good laugh. We weren’t looking forward to her leaving at the end of the month.
 
The reason why I felt so out of place in all my friends was because I had surely been invited out of pity. They had all just gotten back from the JonasBrothers concert, which I didn’t attend. When they decided to have a sleepover after the concert I was phoned and begged my mother to drive me over. I was pretty sure they would beat me with a stick if I didn’t come to their little after party.
 
Now, I didn’t attend this JonasBrothers concert for a reason. That reason is: the JonasBrothers sold their souls to Disney. Now, that’s not to say that I am totally against Disney Channel or anything, because I am a huge fan of Sonny with a Chance. The people who run the Disney Channel are pure genuises, but the JonasBrothers were complete idiots to sign with them. Why? Because their music actually had potential before Disney. Teens should use Disney as a spring board. Disney can get your face out there when no one has any idea who you are. You sign a short term contract with them and then when it’s up, you sign with people in the music buisness. Not in the TV buisness. The JonasBrothers were musicians, not actors.
 
Basically, since they signed with Disney in 2007 I stopped listening to the JonasBrothers. I liked their raw, off-beat music from 2006, back when Nick was still going through puberty. Now, they’re older, and they’re gearing towards a younger audience. Something here seems to be off.
 
When their new show first aired I figured I’d give them a second chance. Half way through the episode I got up and left the room because I could feel myself getting stupider. It was horrible. Like I said before, the JonasBrothers are musicians, not actors.
 
Anyway, back to the party. My friends were hung over on adrenaline from the concert and needed a set of ears to retell the entire thing to, so they called me over. We ended up watching CampRock and almost every single episode of Jonas by 1 am. I was ready to shoot myself, but instead decided on death by cookies.
 
((please comment!))

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 6/16/2009 4:59 PM
 

bump.


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 6/16/2009 8:59 PM
 

bump. i've got another two chapters waiting. :] i just want one post before i put them up. :]


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 6/16/2009 9:07 PM
 

omg!! i love it!!! PLS continue it! PMS!


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 6/16/2009 9:13 PM
 
 Modified By CHAR!?  on 6/17/2009 6:57:58 PM

 

 
Ch2.
 
Around two I fell asleep on the couch. When I woke up three hours later to the sound of the T.V. all I could remember was that I had a dream, and the JonasBrothers were in it. Of course, I didn’t think twice about this, being that I had been bombarded by stories about them the night before. Of course, had I thought harder I may have realized something.
 
I threw my pillow at Sadie who was sitting up against the coffee table with the remote in her hand. Unsuprisingly she was watching the HannahMontana episode with the JonasBrothers on it. When was enough enough?
 
Sadie looked over her shoulder at me and her eyes widened. “Sorry Charlie. I didn’t think it was that loud.” She said. She really was sorry too. Sadie wasn’t a very good liar. “I’ll lower it. Go back to sleep.”
 
“It’s too late.” I said, throwing my blanket onto the floor and crawling over to sit next to her. “I’m already up. Can we watch something else though?” I rubbed my eyes as she flipped channels. Of course, there was nothing else decent on other than the Food Network, which would only make me hungry. I closed my eyes and laid my head back, letting her keep on the Disney Channel.
 
I fell asleep like that, listening to the show. It was funny how I could be so unconsious, yet still absorb so much. When I woke up again at nine I could have recited that episode over seven times.
 
Once everyone was awake we went upstairs and I made pancakes for breakfast. Sadie’s parents had left earlier in the day and her and her older sister were completely useless in the kitchen. As we ate everyone got back to talking about the concert.
 
“The lazers were amazing!”
“I loved the smoke!”
“The fire was very very nice.” Verena said enthusiastically. I nodded, smiling the whole time. In reality though, I was regretting not going just for the fact that I wouldn’t have to be on the receiving end of all this commotion. Of course, at $100 a ticket, I would sit here and take it like a grown up.
 
“I’m so sorry I won’t be able to see you off Verena,” I said, changing the subject. “I wish that I’d have planned this better.” I was to be leaving for the Bahamas the day before Verena would be leaving for Germany. Everyone else was going to drive down to the airport to say goodbye.
 
“It’s okay. That’s what Twitter is for.” She said, laughing. She was right though. The world wide web really was world wide. That’s how Sadie had met her in the first place.
 
“That’s right,” Sadie said. “You both promised you’d keep us updated!”
 
“I know, I know” I said, grabbing another pancake. “I promise.” Verena nodded in agreement. We finished breakfast, packed up our stuff and I said goodbye to everyone- and to Verena one last time.
 
(glad you like it! again, please comment!)

 

 


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 6/17/2009 4:12 PM
 

bump?


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 6/17/2009 8:58 PM
 

added a picture to the begginning of each chapter! i plan on continuing that!


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 6/17/2009 10:13 PM
 

CHAR!? wrote
 

 

 
 
 

woah derr, that girl needs to put on some pants. ; )
those aren't even short shorts.
they're shorter. :O
anyways.. PMS please. ; )


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 6/18/2009 12:05 PM
 
 Modified By CHAR!?  on 6/18/2009 10:08:08 AM

Ch3.
 
I walked the few blocks home by myself, carrying just one bag with everything in it. My friends always made fun of me that my pocketbooks could carry the whole state of Texas inside. On the walk home I tried to mentally prepare myself for the trip ahead of me. I hadn’t been on a plane in six years and now I was going to be on one for three hours. It was a pretty crazy thing and I had stress issues, but I knew that if I psyched myself out now I would be regretting it forever.
 
I ran the last few steps up to my front door and knocked. My little brother opened the door, the Wii remote in one hand and a water bottle in the other. He had recently become obsessed with the wii fit. He was sweaty and gross so I just patted him on the shoulder as I said hello. I quickly threw my bag into my room before screaming upstairs that I was home.
 
“You better finish packing young lady!” My mother yelled back down.
“I will,” I yelled back. I headed into my room and sat down on my bed next to my open suitcase. It had worked out well that I slept over Sadie’s house. I’m not sure I would have been able to get to my bed.
 
I looked down at my list of things to pack. Underwear, bras, swim suits, shorts, shirts, sundresses and one formal dress. I had already packed most of that, along with shoes, so there wasn’t much left to do. I walked over to my closet and pushed all the clothes to one side so I could get my sweet 16 dress out of the back. My aunt had told me that it would be good as a formal dress. I thought it was a bit over the top, but she told me it would be fine. As I searched my room for something to ship the dress in I heard my little sister singing in the next room over. “Standing out in the rain / Need to know if it’s over, ” It was like they were following me. I got up and closed my door before I started to go truly insane.
 
Once everything was packed I counted everything over and checked it up against my list. I bit my finger, trying to decide whether or not to pack yet another extra outfit, just in case. In the end my worrying side decided that I should, and I walked over to my dresser to pick out an outfit. I opened up my drawer and started rummaging through shirts. As I pulled through them I found a shirt I had made for a JonasBrothers concert in 2006. They were young, and so was I. The concert had been standing room only in NYC-IrvingPlaza to be exact. Tickets cost $20 and only 75 people showed up. Cassidy and I had managed to push our way up to the front early on and had a great time. Afterwards there was a free meet and greet and the guys had signed our shirts and given us each hugs. We had a great time. It was probably one of the very best memories I had.
 
In the end I decided to bring the shirt, hoping that some of it’s good times would rub off on the vacation. Just me and my aunt on a tropical island for a week...it was going to be amazing.
 
((yeah haha. they aren't shorts at all. but they're cute underwear!))
 
((again, please comment! good or bad!))

 


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 6/18/2009 12:34 PM
 

Loved it! bump!!! :D


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