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 7/5/2009 1:08 AM
 

3 more comments/bumps for next chapter I can't wait for you to read I may give you a sneek peak!

--Annie--

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 7/5/2009 1:16 AM
 

SNEEK PEAK!!

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 7/5/2009 7:34 PM
 

BUMP :). That was a great chapter.


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 7/5/2009 9:09 PM
 

                                                                                  

Annie’s Pov:
Joe!
“Get Out!” I yelled.
“Not till you listen.” He said closing the door and locking it.
“No! Let me out!” I screamed.
“Joe! Open the door!” I heard Kevin and Nick banging the on the door.
“Annie look what if we just started over you know start from a month ago. Okay?” Joe
suggested.
“I… uh… Joe I’m pregnant!” I said over the furious knocking.
“Really that’s great!” Joe said lifting me up. We exited the room holding hands and relief.
“Well I’m going to go call Lily!” Kevin said referring to his girlfriend. Nick and him
went down stairs and Joe and I followed.  We hopped in the couch while Nick went
across the street to his girlfriend Caroline’s house. They returned just as Kevin’s Lily
came over and we all decided to go on a triple date for dinner.
We all climbed into Kevin’s car and were  off to Olive Garden!
                                                                        --
“Uff!” I said.
“You okay?” All my friends asked. Lily, Caroline, Jordyn, Phoenix, Jay, Nick, Kevin, my
finance Joe, and I were all at the mall. It had been 8 months since I found out I was
pregnant.
“Yeah, the baby just kicked me.” I said smiling. Everyone started reaching out for my
stomach and talking all at once. “Hey read the shirt!” I said pointing at my shirt that read
if you didn’t put this baby in here than don’t even think about touching my stomach. I
started wearing the shirt more once some stranger at the mall came and touched my belly
then walked off. We got up and left leaving money in the table. And packed into Joe’s
car. And drove to a house that we were looking at. A month ago we all decided to move
in together. Which I feel bad for them cause I’m moody and once I have the child it will
be crying all the time. Anyway we walked up the driveway and some sales person was
waiting for us by the door as I toddled up the steps everyone else entered the house. “Oh
yeah sure leave the pregnant woman behind.” I said everyone peeked out the door as I
reached the porch. “Forget no child left behind it should be no pregnant person left
behind.” I mumbled. “No one ever leaves children behind anyway it’s always the
pregnant people.” I continued. I waddled into the house and saw an elevator. Yes!
“Welcome and Thank you for choosing this house to look at. I’m sure you’ll be pleased.”
The sales lady Ronda said. 
“That’s what the last people said.” I whispered to Joe.
“So?” He asked. I glared at him then we followed Ronda into the kitchen. She gave us
details and then took us to the living room. She continued around down stairs.
“The elevator is on the jinx there is a mechanic coming later today to fix it so we must
use the stairs.” Ronda said and my jaw dropped as I looked at the stairs there was about
30 of them.
“Your kidding right?” I laughed.
“No would you like to wait here?” Ronda asked.
“No, just can u give me a head start.” I told them going up a step. I pushed my self up 9 more before everyone was at the same step Joe started to hold my hand as
everyone else climbed to the top. I made it up in 2 times the time it took the others.
“Thanks Joe!” I told my finance.
“No problem come on chick.” He said as we followed everyone around upstairs.
We finished the tour and said good bye to Ronda and we walked back down the stairs.
Ronda said bye and we got in the car.
“Votes.” Nick said taking out a notepad and writing down the address.
“I say no.” I said, “Stupid elevator pregnant people don’t do stairs.” I said in a mumble.
                                                            ~~~~
Two weeks later we had a house kind of we had bought the old mall which was 2 stories
high and perfect. It had 2 elevators and several escalators. Perfect for a pregnant woman.
In total there were 8 stores up stairs. So Joe and I would decided to share a store. Lily was
staying in called the old record store Beats, Phoenix called Hibbits (a sports store),
Caroline had Hollywood Videos (the movie store), Jay got Body Central; and Jordyn
Radio Shack. Kevin Emporium (a made-up toy store) and Nick called Hallmark! Joe and
me were going to share Hot Topic! We took the racks out of the middle and turned the
dressing room into a shower and but a whole between the two changing room and hung a
curtain. So we could change in the room next to the shower. We but a king size bed
inside and called it a apartment. Then down stairs there were 2 stores, a movie theatre, a
café and a snack bar. We used the café as a kitchen, the 1 of the stores was turned into an
arcade, the other as a pet room were we kept Elvis (Nicks retriever or lab ), Jay’s
chinchilla Boots, Caroline’s hamster Frodo, and my beagle Pansky (Pan-ski); the movie
theatre was amazing we ripped up the seats and put couches, fluffy chairs, bean bags, and
mattress through out the room so we could watch in comfort, and finally the snack bar
was basically the same it had varieties of candies, buttered and unbuttered popcorn, and
tons of beverages. This was going to be awesome I said looking at the Joe steam roll the
floor down stairs while Nick did the up stairs. I was pigging out on the candy in the Snack
Bar while everyone else watched Cars!
Caroline’s Pov:
Later that night after cars Nick came to tuck me in my new Hollywood videos room and
he gave me a soft sweet kiss.  That once harmless kiss turned heated and crazy. W emove
the kiss to the bed and I knotted my hands into his hair. The kiss had become a all out
make out setion. Nicks hands hit my hips gently and rubbed circles around them. He then
ran his hands up my shirt to my bra. I thought nothing of it till Nick began searching for
the hook.
“Nick Nick what the… what are you doing?” I asked pushing him up.
“Loving you more and more each second.” He replied  out of breath from all of the breath
taking kisses.
“You know what I mean.” I said as he began to kiss my neck and ocasianly nibbling. I let
out a moan maybe a little to loud of one cause I heard Lily get up and Jordyn to in the
rooms beside mine.
“Joe…and…Annie…did…it.” He said in between kisses. I pushed Nick off.
“Yeah and their relationship has been cracked bumped and tested.” I remarked.
“But they turned out all right.” Nick said.
“Well…” I said I was about to give in when I came to my senses. “Nick no!” I said.
“Stop.”

“But Care don’t…” He said wrapping his arms around me.
“Nicholas Jerry Jonas back off of that girl right now!” He yelled. Nick backed up to the
wall. “Caroline other wall.” I backed up to the oppisite wall of Nick. “Do you know what
your about to do?” Joe yelled.
“Well yes.” Nick said. “And I don’t care.”
“Joe I didn’t wanna but Nick he…” I began to feel soft tears roll down my cheek.
“He what?” Joe asked.
“I wanted to do.” Nick confessed.
“WHAT?” Annie yelled. “Nicholas Jerry Jonas my room now!” She yelled as Joe came
over and hugged me.
Narraters Pov:
Annie took Nick and to her room and began yell. “Now crazy white moody girl don’t
play. You lay one finger on that girl for another month you going to die because Caroline
is one of my best friends and pretty much one of the only people in this house slash mall
that will watch Lord Of The Rings  whenever and I don’t want anything to happen to her.
You got me?” She yelled.
“Yes I do.” Nick said, Annie slapped him. “Ow!”
“That’s for almost changing her mind.” She hit him again.
“And that?”
“I felt like.” She humphed.
“Abousive much?”
“Now go to your Hallmark!” She yelled Nick gave her a weird look before she yelled
again. “I said go to your Hallmark!”
 


So whatcha think? Specailly you Caroline?

xo-Annie-ox

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 7/7/2009 12:07 AM
 

Ah!  I loved that so so so much! Especially that you named my hamster Frodo. I like went like :D when I read that.  It was really good.  I can't believe Nick tried to... well you know.  Not that I would honestly mind that much but WOAH. <3  Post more soon.

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 7/7/2009 12:25 AM
 

Thanks!! I have a great suprise for the next chapter!

--Annie--

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 7/7/2009 12:35 AM
 

I love this line... if you didn’t put this baby in here than don’t even think about touching my stomach.

a mall? that's pretty beasty! BUT WHAT WAS NICK THINKING/!?"!? Jeez!

I <3 radio shack! =]

 

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 7/7/2009 2:47 AM
 

Jordyn wrote
 

I love this line... if you didn’t put this baby in here than don’t even think about touching my stomach.

a mall? that's pretty beasty! BUT WHAT WAS NICK THINKING/!?"!? Jeez!

I <3 radio shack! =]

 

Glad you like it!? Yeah some of your likes made me want to put you in a gadget store and I was thinking and then bam radio shack! And well Nick was think about what most tennage guys think of!Thanks!

--Annie--

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 7/7/2009 2:56 AM
 

                                                                                

Annie’s Pov:
We all sat down and began to eat noodles for dinner. I began shoveling it into my mouth
with my hands and was on thirds before anyone was on there seconds (even the guys.)As
everyone finished their seconds I felt pain shoot through my body and felt something wet
on my chair.
“Joe, Joe, Joe!” I said squeezing Joe’s arm and digging my finger nails in his skin his
whole arm turned purple from lack of blood flow and I let out an earsplitting scream. 
Everyone dropped there forks and their mouths hung ajar Nick and Caroline had noodles
dangling on their chin and soon everyone knew what was going on.
“Oh god what do we do?” Joe said freaking he flew from his chair and was out the door.
Nick called Joe when we heard the car leave. “What are you doing?” He ask placing it on
speaker as I went into a spasm of heavy breathing.
“Taking Annie to the hospital. Duh!” Joe said.
“You might be forgetting something.” Nick said.
“What? Oh her clothes right could you bring them?” Joe questioned while Kevin carried
me to the car the others following. We all climbed into Kevin’s new black shiny SUV.
“Ahhh!” I screeched as Kevin peeled out of the drive. “OH F.UCC.KK!! DRIVE
FASTER!!” I screamed.
Kevin pressed his foot all the way down on the gas and 1 mile away from the hospital
Blue and Red lights flashed. Kevin pulled to the side.
“License and Registration Please?” The officer asked.
“GIVE HIM THE LICINSE AND REGISTRATION!! I’M IN PAIN!” I wailed.
“Would you hold on you pregnant person in labor?” Kevin asked me.
“NO!!” I screamed again.
“If she’s in Labor then I will escort you to the hospital.” The officer said.
“Thank you!” Kevin said and we kept driving.
--
Joe’s Pov:
Annie was laying in the hospital breathing heavily it was supposed to help but I think they
just do it so that when my hand falls off they can suck more money out of us.
“Alright are you ready?” Some Male Doctor Mr. Freedman said entering the room.
“Whoa! I thought females did this cause you know it comes out and…” I said.
“Relax Mr. Jonas everything will be fine.” Mr. Freedman said throwing her gown back
slightly  after sitting in a backless chair. “Now Mrs. Jonas are you ready?” He asked
again. I was waiting for her to say it’s Kruer not Jonas but all she did was nod I’m glad
even though our wedding wasn’t for a good 4 more months.
The baby was out and balling I couldn’t wait to see what it’s gender was when Annie
screamed. “Wait there’s another head!” Mr. Freedman excitedly said. Annie proceeded
her cycle of pushing and screaming. As I dabbed her forehead with a wet cloth. Soon the
second baby was out Annie let out another scream.
“Not another?” I asked the doctor.
“No we forgot to tell my brother to come he didn’t even know about the whole you and
me. He never really like you.” She said honestly.
“Well isn’t Landon coming home from his modeling gig in New Zealand Two-mar-o?” I
asked.
“Crap Joe. I just had 2 children please don’t remind me. I’m working on an excuse.”
Annie said as the nurse came back with our newly cleaned kids. One wrapped in a little
pink blanket and the other in a matching blue one.
“The boy is older.” The nurse said handing us the kids I held the Girl and Annie held the
Boy.
“Let’s name the boy Sean Landon Jonas and the girl Shani Abella Jonas.” Annie
suggested. 
“Okay.” I said kissing her forehead. I then began singing Annie and my song.
“I've seen the paths that your eyes wander down I want to come too.” Annie joined.
“I think that possibly Maybe I'm falling for you.” I sang before leaning in for a kiss.



Whatcha think?

--Annie--

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 7/8/2009 12:32 AM
 

BUMP!! bump for the next chappie!! I have alwats wanted to say chappie but it's not as fun as I thought! So Whats up Readers?

--Annie--

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