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New Post 10/6/2007 9:39 AM
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The Last Walk (A Jonas Fanfic) 

Hey guys... i have been working on this fanfic...  tell me if you like it!

 

                               Chapter 1: Joe... JONAS?

That hot summer day my best friend, Anna, and I were walking the sidewalk of the little subdivision I live in. We had my ipod listening to Hannah Montana songs and crazily dancing around to the beat... we always did this when she came over. It was about lunchtime, so we started back for home. There were many people walking and jogging, mowing the grass, playing... but I noticed someone was moving in across the street from me. 

  "We should go meet them," Anna suggested.

  "After lunch, I'M STARVING!!" I complained. She rolled her eyes and followed me inside. Soon after eating, and watching a little Disney Channel (the best channel ever, lol), we headed back outside to the new neighbor's house. When we got to the front door, a boy opened it, and brushed right by us. He started running down the sidewalk, angrily. We stared at each other, then started running to catch up with this guy. When we got along beside him, he took out his earphones and smiled. For some reason, this smile made me feel weak inside, and butterflies flew inside my stomach.

 "We don't mean to bother you, but we're your neighbors. Well she is..." Anna pointed to me. I couldn't speak. He had taken all the breath out of me.

 "Cool. Sorry about ignoring you, I have just been dealing with LOTS lately," he smiled again.

"I'm Abbie," I finally got out. "And this is Anna."

"I'm Joe," he grabbed my hand to shake. When we touched, I turned the BRIGHTEST RED a person could turn. He apparently saw, and chuckled.

 "WAIT A SECOND..." Anna screamed.

 "WHAT!" i yelled back.

  "That's Joe Jonas..." She whispered. He smiled once again. How could i not have known that, i mean, i LOVE him!! I guess I was too caught up in his eyes... HIS BEAUTIFUL, BIG, BROWN EYES!

 

I'll post more soon, but i need reviews before i do... give me your ideas, and CRITICISE ME, PEOPLE!

It probably stinks, but oh well!!


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New Post 10/6/2007 9:57 AM
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IS anyone READING??? I AM NOT GONNA POST MORE UNTIL PEOPLE REPLY!

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New Post 10/6/2007 10:08 AM
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haha yes i am reading PMS its good and funny.  I WISH joe jonas moved in next door.

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New Post 10/6/2007 10:10 AM
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Thank you so much for reading... If you spread the word about my fanfic, i will spread the word about your AWESOME fanfic... thanks!

 

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New Post 10/6/2007 10:12 AM
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I'm reading =]

i like it. haha how could they NOT know it was joe



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New Post 10/6/2007 10:17 AM
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 abbinator wrote

Thank you so much for reading... If you spread the word about my fanfic, i will spread the word about your AWESOME fanfic... thanks!

 

 

Abbinator

 

haha,.no problem PMS though!!! lol

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New Post 10/6/2007 1:40 PM
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i wish joe lived next door to me, i have old grumpy people as my neigbors =[
 
New Post 10/6/2007 2:03 PM
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Re: The Last Walk (A Jonas Fanfic) 

Ok, here's the next chapter...

Chapter 2: The Jonas Family/ the Balcony/ A GIRLFRIEND?

"So, you wanna see the rest of my family?" Joe broke the awkward silence of Anna and I staring in disbelief.

"HECK YEAH!" We screamed! He laughed then walked us back to his house. Once we got there, Joe led us inside to see a hundred boxes piled high in the living room.

"NICK, KEVIN, FRANKIE!!!" Joe yelled to the top of his lungs.

"WHAT JOE?" Kevin yelled as he ran down the stairs. He stopped when he looked over and saw Anna and I. "Oh, and who are these LOVELY ladies?" he asked, eyeing Anna. She giggled and blushed. I rolled my eyes. She was such a flirt. 

"These are our neighbors Abbie, and Anna," Joe answered his brother. "So how old are you guys?" He inquired.

"Oh, I'm 16 and Anna's 18," I answered him.

"Where's Nick?" Joe asked his brother. No reply. We looked over to see Kevin and Anna talking up a storm. They were totally oblivious to the world around them. We chuckled then went upstairs. He showed me his room, Nick's room, Kevin's room, and the bonus room. Apparently Nick and Frankie went over to hang at a friend's or something... and Mr. and Mrs. Jonas had to run errans, so we were the only ones home. I noticed outside his room he had a balacony, straight across from mine.

"Close your eyes..." He instructed. I did as I was told. He grabbed my hand and led me into a white room. As I opened my eyes I saw dozens of guitars, keyboards, a drum, and a beautiful baby grand piano. He sat down at the piano and started playing You Just Don't Know It. As he played, and sang, I shut my eyes. I had just met the man of my dreams... and he was singing live to me. Well not to me, just singing. When he finished I opened my eyes.

"That was beautiful," I sighed. Before he could answer his cell phone started ringing.

"Hello?" he answered.

I decided to give him privacy, and stepped over to look at the guitars.

"YOu like them?" I jumped around to see him behind me. "Sorry, didn't mean to scare you," he laughed.

"Yeah, I love them." I answered.

"JOE! AJ'S HERE!" Kevin yelled from downstairs. Joe immediatly rushed out of the room, and i followed him. I saw him walk over to the girl, whom I realized was AJ Michalka(sp?) and wrap his arm around her waist. I suddenly burst with jealousy, but tried to contain myself.

"Abbie, this is my girlfriend, AJ," he smiled. "AJ, this is Abbie my new next door neighbor." I tried to smile, but i could barley make one on my face.

"Nice to meet you," she "smiled". Her smile was a fake, i could tell. When Kevin and Joe looked away, she quickly made a face at Anna and I.

"Ok, well we had better go," Anna rushed out of the house, uncomfortably. AJ obviously didn't want us there.

"Ok, I will see you later ok?" Joe and Kevin asked us.

"Maybe..." I rushed back over to my house. 

 

 

Ok, there's more later today... ok guys!? It's boring now... but there are some BIG SURPRISES really soon, ok??

If you have any ideas... let me know you guys!
Luv ya all and thanks for reading!!

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New Post 10/6/2007 2:48 PM
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Come on, i see people looking at my fanfic... but i need replies! Hey peeps, how do i make a signature?

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New Post 10/6/2007 2:50 PM
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