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 6/11/2007 9:13 PM
 
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 6/12/2007 11:23 AM
 

Hey everyone. Just wrote more of the story. I already have an idea for my next update. but it might have to wait a little bit. Hope everyone enjoys. Comment to tell me what you think. =D

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   As they were all walking to find food, Kevin pointed out a little place that had food. "How about there?" he asked.
   "Sure" everyone agreed.
   Soon they were at the register. "I would like a bacon cheeseburger meal" said Kevin.
   "Chicken cutlet meal" said Joe.
   "Cheeseburger meal" Nick said.
   the guys turned to the girls and said "what would you like?"
   "Uh...cheeseburger meal" said Anne.
   "Same" said Sam.
   Soon they had their food and were looking for a table. they found one with booth seats. Nick and Anne sat on one booth and Joe and Samantha sat in the other. Keving pulled up a seat to the table. They began eating.
   Sam thought "Wow. Joe is so sweet. I really like him."
   As he looked at her, Joe thought "Wow. She is so cute. I think I like her."
   Anne was deep in thought thinking "Nick is the best guy I've ever met. I really like him. He probably doesn't think of me that way."
   Nick glanced over at Anne and thought "She is the most beautiful girl I've ever laid my eyes on. I have it bad. real bad."
   As they all finished they began to get up to toss their food away. They started chatting and laughing. "Where to next?" asked Kevin. After all the blank stared he said "ferris wheel so our stomachs can settle for real rides?"
   They all agreed and began walking to the ferris wheel. Anne and Sam both knew this meant they could get even closer to the guys. The guys knew that it was one of the romantic rides that would possibly bring them a little closer to the girls. They all got on. Of course, Anne and Nick sat together. Joe and Samantha sat together. Kevin, who already could tell his brothers had little crushes, sat by himself. The ferris wheel began to move.
   Nick and Anne were already sitting really close. Anne accidently looked down and suddenly realized how afraid she is of heights. She got this really scared look on her face and Nick noticed it. "It's ok. I'm here" said Nick in a sweet voice. He put his arm around her and comforted Anne. She smiled and realized how great this fear was.
   Kevin was watching and laughed to himself. "they make an adorable pair."
   In Joe and Samantha's seat, they were talking and getting to know eachother more personally. Sam and Joe were flirting a lot which was perfectly fine. They both enjoyed it.
   Soon they all were off the ferris wheel and on they're way to the egg-toser. which was a ride that is spinny and in the air. They sat in the same seating arrangment again. As soon the ride was over. They all realized they had ridden all the good rides. 
   "So...what shall we do know?" Said Nick.
   Kevin thought for a minute and then said "I've got an idea. It's a surpise. Girls, do you need to call your parents to leave the park?"
   "We don't have to call." said Anne.
   So they all walked to the van and climbed in. Kevin started the car. Anne and Nick were next to eachother again. So were Joe and Sam. Soon they were on their way to wherever Kevin was taking them.


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 6/12/2007 12:55 PM
 
OOOH! POST MORE PLEASE! I want to know where Kevo is taking them!

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 6/12/2007 1:52 PM
 

   Kevin pulled into a parking lot and parked the van. They all got out. Kevin whipped out his wallet and walked up to the cashier booth.
   "How many in your party?" asked the cashier.
   "Five." Kevin said. Just then this really pretty girl walked in. "ok. i change my mind. we now have six people." Then the pretty girl walked up to Kevin and they kissed. "Hey. Thanks for coming, Brittany." he handed the cashier 30 dollars and the cashier handed 5 admittion tickets.
   The group walked in. "Ok. Brittany, Samantha. Samantha, Brittany." introduced Kevin.
   "Hello." Brittany and Sam said.
   "And this is Anne." Kevin told Brittany. "Sam and Anne, you are probably wondering who this is. This is my girlfriend." Kevin smiled. He then told Brittany about how him and his brothers met the girls. Then he told about the day so far.
   They all walked over to this other little booth in the building. "Shoe size?" asked the man behind the booth.
   They all said their shoe size and were handed roller blades. They all put on their skates. The guys helped the girls. The girls thanked them. They all went out to the skate area. They skated around. "One minute" Anne told Nick. She skated to the request booth and requested a song. Then her and Nick went back to skating.
   "What song did you request?" Asked Nick.
   "You'll see." smiled Anne.
   Soon Anne heard a song come one and smiled and looked at Nick. Nick looked at her. "So is this the song you requested?" Nick asked Anne.
   "Maybe..." Anne said in a shy way. 
   All of a sudden Joe, Nick, and Kevin grabbed the girls and went over to the request platform. They asked the dj for mics and had him restart the song. Everyone looked over at the platform to see the boys looking at the girls and start singing.

   "First day at school
I was tryin to play it cool
Chillin with my friends, tryin to pretend that I didn't notice you
3 rows down, second to the left
With your big brown eyes, and your brand new dress
Right then I saw my dream come true, yeah
Cause my knees got weak, knocked off my feet
Tried but I couldn't find the words to speak
Can't let go, my heart says whoa
Girl I gotta let you know"

   The girls looked at the guys with big smiles

   They continued singing while looking at the girls

   "Cause I got this awesome, amazing crazy kinda crush on you
And though I try to forget you it doesn't matter what I do
On my mind all the time, it's a crime
I can't deny it's true
Cause I got this awesome, amazing crazy kinda crush on you."

   The guys continued singing. Anne thought "Maybe he's just doing it to perform and to be nice. He could never like a girl like me."
The guys got off the platform and went to the girls. "That was so sweet, Nick" Anne smiled.
   Samantha said the same to Joe.
   The guys just smiled and said "It was nothing."
   Later after many songs and a long time skating, the guys realized the time and told the girls they'd be right back. While the girls chatted, the guys talked up a plan. They went back to the girls and said "Ready to go?"
   "Sure" the girls said happily.
   They turned in the skates and walked to the van. Kevin got into the driver's seat and Brittany got into the p*CENSORED*enger side. Joe and Sam got into the next row. Nick and Anne got into the back. They all sat close. Joe and Sam held hands. Nick put his hand on Anne's hand. Anne smiled. They both got butterflies. Soon they arrived at this store. The guys told the girls they would be right back and walked into the store. Ten minutes later the guys came out with some bags. They began preparing something without the girls noticing. Soon they got into the car and began driving. Soon they arrived at a nice place.


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 6/12/2007 2:01 PM
 
MORE PALLLEEEZZ!

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 6/12/2007 6:54 PM
 
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 6/12/2007 8:59 PM
 

this is a pretty good story so far

keep up the good work

 


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 6/12/2007 9:20 PM
 
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 6/12/2007 11:48 PM
 

Ok. so i have yet again updated the story. I hope everyone like it. I will say that the things i say in this are not facts or anything. in this update i mentioned some stuff that i see on the boards(rumors about nick) that i don't know whether they are real or not so dont spread rumors from what you read in fanfics. =D enjoy and comment.

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   They got out of the van. They were at a beach that was also a park. They walked and the guys pulled out blankets and picnic baskets. Nick and Anne sat at one. Joe and Sam sat at another. Kevin and Brittany, of course, sat at the last one.
   "So, what are some rumors about you that you would set straight if people would stop spreading if they knew the truth?" Anne asked Nick.
   "I would love to set straight all of these crazy rumors of who I like or who I went out with or who I wrote songs about." Nick said.
   "Such as?" asked Anne.
   "I heard many rumors about me and Miley. Everyone says that we were together and that I wrote a few songs about her. She is just a friend and we don't even like each other." continued Nick.
   "I heard those. I wasn't sure if they were true or not." said Anne.
   "Ya. Good thing you don't believe everything you hear." said Nick.
   "Where did you come up with all the lyrics?" asked Anne.
   "Some of them are from my brothers experiences. Some are from mine. I think it helps to just write. It is a good release of emotions. And sometimes it turns into great songs." Nick said.
   "I completely agree." Anne said.
   "Do you write?" asked Nick.
   "Sometimes. I write mainly poetry but I sometimes write enough to have a song." said Anne.
   "Do you ever share them with people?"
   "I share some with friends. Most the time I keep them a secret." Anne said.
   "Why do you keep them to yourself?" asked Nick.
   "I have been insulted by people really close to me so I just tend to lock up and not let anyone in. My poetry and lyrics just hold so much of my feelings. I guess it's just to keep myself protected. I know I'm really weird." Anne said.
   "No. You are not weird." blushed Nick.
   Anne blushed. The others were also having deep conversations. "You think Joe like Sam?" Anne asked.
   "Ya. it seems a little obvious. What about Sam?" said Nick.
   "Ya. it's obvious that Sam likes him." said Anne.
they began laughing. They ate as they looked at eachother. As soon as they were done they got up. Nick grabbed Anne's hand and they began to walk along the beach. They both felt so warm inside despite the cold of the night air. The sun was beginning to set. "Wow. They sky looks amazing." said Nick.
   "Ya. It really does." agreed Anne.
   They sat down in the sand and cuddled. They realized that Kevin and Brittany were a bit away from them in eachothers arms and so were Joe and Sam. As soon as they were done they all got into the van.
   "We've got to stop somewhere before we take you back to your place." said Kevin as he began driving.
Soon they showed up at a hotel. Kevin, Nick, Joe, and Brittany got out. Kevin walked Brittany to her room and they said their goodbye's. Then the guys went to their room real quick and rushed back to the van. They got on their way to Anne's house. Once they arrived, Anne, Sam, Joe, and Nick all got out and walked to the door. Nick and Joe were holding something behind their backs.
   "I have a surprise for you" both the guys said. Then they pulled out tickets and backstage p*CENSORED*es. "You can come to the concert tomorrow. We will swing by and pick you up."
   "thank you soo much." the girls said.
They all hugged and said their goodbyes and exchanged numbers. The guys got in the van and left. The girls went into the house.
   "So you like Joe?" said Anne.
   "So you like Nick?" said Sam.
   "We have it bad" they said at the same time.
   They laughed and got ready for bed.

   In the van the guys were talking. "So Joe, you like Sam?" kevin said.
   "Ya. She is so cute and nice." Joe said as Nick laughed.
   "I don't know what you're laughing about. You obviously like Anne." said Kevin.
   "She is the most beautiful girl ever and she is so sweet." Nick said.
   They all got in their beds. Nick layed there looking at his phone. Then he got up and got his guitar. Then he picked up his phone and called Anne.
   "Hello?" Anne sais sleepily.
   "Hello beautiful, how's it going, i hear its wonderful in california. I've been missin' you, it's true." Nick continued singing the rest. Anne didn't even have to be told who was calling. She already could tell from the voice.
   "Aww. Nick you're so sweet." Anne said with the hugest smile ever.
   "Just wanted to call to say goodnight." said Nick.
   "Thank you. Goodnight." Anne said.
   "Night." Nick said.
   Soon everyone was fast asleep in dreams of the wonderful day they just experienced.


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 6/13/2007 2:00 AM
 
Aww, how sweet!

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