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New Post 10/21/2007 11:45 PM
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Just a Country Girl 

Ok so, this is my 1st ff so please tell me what you think, and please be honest.

 

 

 

Prolog:

 

This could not be happening! My dream finally came true!

  But, why me? Why would a guy like Nick Jonas fall for a girl like me? I’m just a simple country girl who can drive a tractor and a 4-wheeler but than a car!  So what made him fall for a girl like me? I’m always the girl who is the “Friend”, the one you can talk about anything and never get mad, who can always brighten up your day, who is never down, who is so strong in her beliefs, and the girl who never shed a tear in front of anyone. That is the kind of girl guys see me as.

    But he saw me different than everyone else did.

       My name is Sarah, and this is my story. The story of how I finally fell in love with a guy who fell back

 
New Post 10/21/2007 11:47 PM
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Sounds great. Go Country girls! Please continue.

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New Post 10/21/2007 11:47 PM
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Chapter one

 

 

“MOM, you have to let us to go!” I said, well it was more begging than just saying it.

 

“No, I don’t Have to”

 

“Yes! Yes you do! Mom, I have backstage passes to meet the Jonas Brothers, ONE-ON-ONE! Plus it would be Rachel’s 1st concert!” I added “You wouldn’t want to deprive her of that now would you?” I say, laying on the guilt, praying it would work. It normally does, but there are those times when it doesn’t.

 

“Well…”

 

“MOM!?!?” I yell

 

“Okay, I guess you can go since it is Rachel’s 1st concert” she FINALLY said after what seemed like forever

 

“OMGOSH!!!! THANK YOU SO SO SO MUCH! I love you Mommy!” I know what you are thinking, you still call her mommy? Yes I do, but only when I really want something! Most of the time it works. Being the youngest rocks, sometimes.

 

“Come on Rach! We need to go to the mall!” I say as I’m running out to my car.

 

Rachel and I are best friends, and we have been since 5ht grade in softball, and she lives with us. I know what you all are thinking “Sweet you live with you best friend”, well not so sweet in her case.  Her parents died in a car crash coming home from church on Sunday, Rach wasn’t in the car, but she was behind them, she was with me, and she saw everything happen. So we took her in, her parents said if anything ever happened, they trusted us enough to take care of her. She still has nightmares to the day about what happened.

 

She hops in the car and we head off to the mall, 1 hr away. Oh did I forget to mention that we live in the middle of no where. Surrounded by nothing but farm land, farmers, trees and dirt roads. The closest town with a store is 15 miles away! Don’t get me wrong, I love it out here, but it does get really annoying when you need to go somewhere.

 
New Post 10/21/2007 11:49 PM
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This is really good. I like it. I understand the whole closest town with a store thing. That's like where I live. This is really good. PMS, please.

 

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New Post 10/21/2007 11:51 PM
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This is awesome! I like it so far!! :)


Made by Jonasbrospone!!! "God put us here on this carnival ride. We close our eyes, never knowing where it'll take us next." Broken Perfection Made by Shmellow!!!
 
New Post 10/21/2007 11:59 PM
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Re: Just a Country Girl 

I LOVE IT!

xoxo
Taylor

 
New Post 10/22/2007 12:05 AM
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 rayne♥Jonas wrote

This is really good. I like it. I understand the whole closest town with a store thing. That's like where I live. This is really good. PMS, please.

 

Rayne

 

 

Yea me too! But I wouldnt trade it for any thing

 
New Post 10/22/2007 12:06 AM
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Chapter two

 

Rachel’s P.O.V.

 

It worked, I can’t believe it. The guilt trip actually worked.  Our mom, well Sar’s mom, said we could go! I know that she isn’t really my mom but I call her mom cause she is the closest thing I have to a mom anymore.

 

“Come on Rach! We have to get to the mall!” I hear Sarah Calling from the car already. So I hop in the car and we’re off.

 

 ****************************At the Mall*****************************************

 

Sarah’s P.O.V.

 

We finally get to the mall, and we automatically head off to our favorite store, Rue 21.

 

We shop there for a while till we both find something that we like, I end up picking out a mini-skirt to go over my black leggings that I already have at home and a wicked cool shirt that has a bunch of guitars and music notes on it. Rachel finds something similar but different, the shirt she picked out is really cool, it is happy bunny and its says, “Revenge is sweet, it tastes like chocolate”.

 

I look over at her, give her my “up-to-no good look” and say “Done with clothes, now lets have some real fun!” I say as I start walking out the door, she starts to laugh.

 

Rachel’s P.O.V.

 

“Done with clothes, now lets have some real fun!” she says as she gives me one of her many looks. I know what she means so I laugh, for those of you who don’t, she means “let’s go find some cute guys to flirt with”

 

Sarah is not shy around guys, and I give her credit for that, cause I am. It more than likely has something to do with the fact that she is always with her brother, the are best friends, so of course, she hangs out with his friends also. I have never seen her get nervous around them, she is always very energetic, and crazy!  She has really brought me out of my shell, see I’m very shy, and ever more so around guys. I wish that I could be as comfortable as her around guys.

       Once we are done with clothes, we decide to head over to F.Y.E.

 
New Post 10/22/2007 12:09 AM
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Good chapter! I love it! Please post more soon!


Made by Jonasbrospone!!! "God put us here on this carnival ride. We close our eyes, never knowing where it'll take us next." Broken Perfection Made by Shmellow!!!
 
New Post 10/22/2007 12:13 AM
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Long Chapter, but that is all for tonight, I am getting kicked off by my mom since it is a school night

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Chapter Four

 

Nick’s P.O.V.

 

Here we are in another city, getting ready for another show, but we have a couple days, so today we are just chilln’ out, taking a break from all of the craziness of the tour. I think we are in Ohio, not really sure, I fell asleep and wasn’t paying attention. But I do know that we in a music store, don’t know the name, But it is in a mall. And I also know that we are in disguises, and that’s about all I know right about now.

 

“Sorry” I say as I bump into somebody, we amazingly say it at the same time. She laughs, she has got a great laugh I thought to myself.

 

“Umm… you can take of your sunglasses, you are inside now” she said, sounding nervous.

 

Just then Joe and Kevin come over, and she asks us if we are in a gang or under cover agents or something, I laugh in my mind, our disguises must be working, I say to myself.

 

Joe being the “Funny” 1 replies, “Something like that”

 

“Well which one is it, I gave you 2 choices. Well technically, I gave u 3 choices” Man she sounded so nervous, I was getting nervous watching her. Just then someone else walked over, I saw Joe’s eyes fall right on her. She was pretty but whoever her friend was a lot prettier, in my opinion.

 

“Hey what’s up?” she asked, and then she saw us, and she blushed and looked freaked out. Her cell rings and she jumps.

 

“Ello?” She says as she walks away, you could tell that her friend was mad at her for walking away, but I was glad.

 

“So what are your guys’ names?” she asks

 

“Hey, I’m Joe, Nice to meet you. Oh and by the way, what was your friend’s name?”

 

“Hi, I’m, uh, Nick. Umm, nice to meet you. Ignore Joe, he is a major dork” Wow I was so nervous, and I don’t know why, I just meet her and I don’t even know her name yet. “What’s your name?” I ask her

 

Just then her friend walks over, Great, I am never gonna know her name now, I say to myself.

 

Joe’s P.O.V.

 

We are just hanging out in another mall in Ohio, just chilln’ in a music store when I turn to find Nick talking to some girl, well Nick isn’t talking, she is but still. Oh great he might blow our cover I say to myself, so I get Kev, and we go over and give him some help. He gets really nervous around girls that he thinks are pretty, and I even have to say that she was really pretty.

 

“So are you guys in a gang, undercover agents or something?” She asks I look at Nick and Kevin. Kevin is in like lala land or something and Nick is to shy to say anything so I simply reply “Something like that” she doesn’t seem to like that answer cause she comes back with “Well which one is it, I gave you 2 choices. Well technically, I gave u 3 choices” Wow she sounded nervous when she said that, and she was looking at nick the whole time.

 

Just then her friend comes over, and my eyes fall on her immediately. She is very beautiful, she has amazing eyes, and her hair is so flowy, it is beautiful. She asks what’s up and then she starts to blush. Her phone rings, she jumps and then answers it, and then walks away. My eyes on her the whole time

“So, what are your guys’ names?”

 

“Hi, my name is Joe, nice to meet you. Oh and by the way what is your friends’ name?” I had to ask, I HAD to know her name!

 

“Hi, I’m, uh, Nick. Umm, nice to meet you. Ignore Joe, he is a major dork. Oh and what is your name?” he asks, he must think she is really pretty, he has never stumbled that much saying his own name. And he has never called me a dork in front of girls!

 

Just when she starts to answer her friend comes back over. “Hey Liz, that was mom. She said that if we want to go to the concert, than Abbi is driving us. Oh and that Rissa is moving back and she is meeting up with us here! Also that Rissa is coming to the concert with us, since you have 4 backstage passes.

 

Liz complains about Abbi going, and then gets all excited cuz some one named Rissa, is coming back.

 

“Ok, that answers my question, your name is Liz, and Joe her name is Rachel” Nick says, I guess he could tell that I liked Rachel.

 

Kevin Chimes in and asks them what concert, and THEN he tells him his name. They say that he probably doesn’t know the band, but they tell him and it is us! “Yeah, I have heard of them, they are pretty good” he tells them. O great, He is bragging about us I think to myself for a minute, and realize that they said that they were gonna be at our show, and that they had backstage passes! SWEET! I say to myself as I start jumping up and down to myself, In my mind of course, I don’t want Rachel to think that I am crazy! Ok well I am but I don’t want her to know, yet anyway!

 

Kevin’s P.O.V.

 

I don’t really wanna be at the mall, I want to be sleeping right now, but someone has to keep an eye on Joe. Normally you would have to keep your eye on the youngest one, Nick, cause Frankie isn’t with us yet, but NO, in our case, it is Joe, He acts like a six year old more than Frankie does! Well at times he does.

 

So I am just walking around when Joe come to get me and says that Nick needs help, me being the oldest more concerned brother, I automatically think that he has fainted or something to do with his diabetes, so we get over there and he is perfectly fine, just nervous cause he is talking to a girl, well the girl is doing all of the talking but still.

 

Since I really don’t want to be here, I zone out, and next thing I here is something about a concert and a girl named Rissa coming back.

 

Apparently “Rissa” is coming to see them and catch up, and sure enough someone comes walking through the door, and the two girls, I didn’t hear their names, run up and give her a huge hug. I can’t help but stare, I mean this Rissa girl is so amazingly beautiful. Everything about her, is just I don’t know, I can’t describe it. At least I didn’t have to worry about Nick or Joe liking her, I could tell Rachel, I think that her name anyway, was Joe’s type and that Liz, that’s what they called her anyway, was Nick’s type of girl, so I had nothing  worry about.

 

They start talking about a concert, and me being the curious monkey that I’m, “What concert. Oh and by the way my name is Kevin.” I say realizing that didn’t introduce myself, and I wanted Rissa to know my name.

 

“Umm you probably have never heard of them” Liz says

 

“Try me” I say

 

“Umm… the Jonas Brothers?” Rachel says.

 

“Yea, I have heard of them. I think they are pretty good” Wow, I can’t believe that I’m bragging about us.

 

“Well, we gotta and catch up on old times with Marissa here. Hope to see you again” Liz says. And then they walk out of the store and leave us standing there, staring at them.

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Ok so I will post more sometime 2 morrow after school, btu if I ride the bus home I dont get home till 4:30 so I dont know when  but there will b something!

 

Gladf you guys like it!

 
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