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New Post 10/24/2007 4:09 PM
User is offline nickjismine
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Let Me be The One 

i got the title from a Plus One song. They're like the Christian version of N*SYNC. lol anywayzz hope you lurve it. the chapters are kinda long.

Chapter 1:
I stood there in front of my locker opening it, when He pushed me against it and pressed his lips against mine. I kissed him back. He made his way to my neck whispering.
"I love you"
I smiled and-
*BANG*CRASH*
I jumped and shook my daydream off and focused my eyes.
"Excuse me
Martinez????" Mrs. Keefe said slamming her stupid yard stick onto my desk. I bit my lip.
"Y-yes?" I choked out. I could have sworn the devil was in her eyes. She slightly glared at me.
"What was that daydream about?" She spat out with her fire. I wrinkled my nose.
"Nothing" I said confidently. 
Then she gave a look and i lost my confidence. The whole classroom was dead silent. No one dared to move. Mrs. Keefe was the nastiest, cruelest teacher in the 9th grade, I swear she could be 150 years old. She really needed a life.
"Well in that case, for dozing off, One week of detention Ms. Martinez" She said smiling a gruesome smile. I sighed. She began to walk away puffing his flat chest out.
"Fine, old biotch" I muttered under my breath. With that she spun around and came stomping back slamming both hands on my desk. Everyone jumped.
"EXCUSE ME?!?!?!?!?!?!" She yelled. I sighed.
"Well in that case, 4,000 word essay on metaphors due Friday, Whole ENTIRE class, thanks to Ms. Nikkie Martinez" She said biting her snake tongue. Everyone groaned and I heard
"Way to go
Martinez" From here and there. I sunk down in my seat and scribbled the notes Mrs. Keefe wrote on the overhead.
*RING*RING*
Everyone jumped up and hurried out the door.
Well let me introduce myself first of all.
My name is Nikkie Martinez, I am 15 years old, I am slender/thin, I have long straight brown hair with natural highlights, my eyes were a weird color a mix of brown, yellow, green, silver, and a bluish color. People say they are truly unique. I guess so. Well as you can see, I am a daydreamer. I play the guitar, Write songs, and I love to dance and be outside. I attend a Christian private school in
New Jersey.

And for the daydream, Nick, Nick Jonas, He is the most perfect guy at our school. He was considered popular, but he was more of a kind of person with just 2 good friends. I liked him alot. A lot A lot.
He was slightly taller than me by like 1" and a half, He played the guitar and he could sing. His face was perfect, he had brilliant copper brown eyes and his curly hair was amazing.
Mmkay now you know a little about me....
I opened my locker and grabbed my history binder. I turned my head and saw Nick coming down the hall. I bit my lip and turned my head to the locker. No one else was there. The hall way was just about deserted besides people buzzing to get to classes.
I pretended to pick things up and move them around. I heard his footsteps coming closer and closer. I looked in the mirror hanging on the door of my locker and took a breath.
His footsteps got stronger and he paused in front of my set of lockers. He reached over to the locker next to mine. I saw the sleeve of the uniformed jacket. I smiled.
His fingers twisted the lock combo. I grabbed my pencil and looked up at him. He stopped with the locker and looked up at me.
His eyes studied mine for second. He slightly smiled.
I could have sworn my heart was beating out of my chest. I think i could hear it.
He stood up straight and studied me more. I bit my lip and turned around. I shut my locker and looked up at him. He stood there grinning. I nodded at him and walked to my next class.

 


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New Post 10/24/2007 4:24 PM
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Re: Let Me be The One 

comments????


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New Post 10/24/2007 4:35 PM
User is offline sammi♥sjoejonas
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Re: Let Me be The One 

i love it sis, haha you sooo need to make joe or kevo say 'no purple' to nikkie and nick. just an idea ily byez


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New Post 10/24/2007 4:36 PM
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Re: Let Me be The One 

i really like this!!

POST MORE SOON!!

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New Post 10/24/2007 4:52 PM
User is offline Nikkie heart NJ
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Re: Let Me be The One 

THIS IS MY STORY..................

Geez, what is up with people taking my stories??????,

All you did was change the name!!!!!!!

You know, you cold at LEAST give me credit, I spend MY own time writing these and if people are just going to take it and post it as their own, I'll stop writing...

AND i have proof this is mine, I MEAN I HAVE ALL THE CHAPTERS WRITTEN OUT!!!!!!!!!!!!

just please explain why you took it....

and like i said i spend my time on these, Credit would be great-fully accepted.

 
New Post 10/24/2007 4:55 PM
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Re: Let Me be The One 

thanx guys...it gets better so ill just post the next chapter, i think im griunded though...illtry to get out of it ily guys!!!

Chapter 2:
I sat there in my last class of the day. I tried focusing on my test. I couldn't do it. He was standing there. He. He blocked my thoughts. I felt like putty. I read the questions on my test. Number 8. over and over. Nothing. I closed my eyes and saw him. I jumped slightly and just took a deep breath.
"Clam down, After this you can go home and take a break." I thought. I nodded and finished the test. I smiled and stood up and walked over to the teacher. I set it on his desk and he nodded not looking up from his magazine. I smiled and walked back to my seat. I straightened my uniform and watched the clock.
Tick. Tick. Tick....
*RING*
I jumped up and scurried out the room. I made my way to the lockers.
"Yoooooooooo Nikkie, I am so sorry, I have to go to
Europe to see family for the next month But I’ll bring you back some CHOCOLATE!!!!!!!! , love you lots- BFFL, Heather"
I sighed and tore the note off on my locker door. I took my backpack out and put my binder in and my pencil pouch out. I organized the locker a bit.
The hallways emptied as the students rushed out the door for the weekend. I sighed and bit my lip and zipped the back pack up. I slipped it on. I nodded at the mirror. I shut the locker and turned around.
Nick stood there with a guitar case and his backpack slung over his side. I smiled. He grinned. He looked into my eyes as if he were asking me something. I raised and eyebrow. He opened his mouth as if he were breathless.
We stood there not knowing what to do. The clock ticked as the hallways were deserted.
"H-hi, I'm um, Um N-Nick" He stuttered. I smiled. He was brilliant. I wanted to pounce him.
"Nikkie" I said confidently. He smiled big. He was about to say something when a guy with shaggy jet black hair showed up from nowhere and grabbed him by the arm.
"Come on Nick, we have to go" He said. Nick frowned. Joe looked over to me and smiled. I smiled and nodded.
"Um okay, Bye?" I said curving my lip and walking off.
"JOE, You I, I just wanted to talk to her!!!!!!!!" Nick yelled as i slipped through the glass doors of the school. I laughed.

"WOW" I breathed out walking home.
Nick actually acknowledged me. How weird. I shrugged and opened the front door of my house. I walked to the kitchen grabbed an apple and scurried up the stairs. I dropped the apple losing my appetite.
All of my thoughts revolved on him. I laid on my bed staring up at my ceiling. Nick Jonas.
I said his name out loud about 8 times. I sighed. I grabbed my book bag and slipped my binder out. Homework time. Oh goody.
*************************************
Nick's POV:
"Joe that girl, her eyes were, AMAZING" I said as we walked home.
"She was pretty cute" Joe said nodding. I couldn't get her image out of my mind. I couldn't even speak to her. I'm confident around all girls. Just with her. She broke me.
Her face was perfect. Those eyes were one in a million. We got into the house and I ran off to my room and shut the door. I slipped my shoes off and laid on my bed staring up at the ceiling.
I get to see her again on Monday. I need to see her on Monday. Why haven't I seen her before? I was pretty much lost in thought.
Get a freaken hold of yourself Nick. You just saw her today. Its no good to rush things. Never good.
I covered my face and tried to wipe the confusion on the emotion i was feeling. It just hit me.
She looked up at me right before 4th period. I stared at her. I studied everything on her face. Her eyes sparkled. I was already head over heels, and all i know is her name.
I rolled off the bed groaning. It was Friday.
***************************
With me (My POV) :
"Screw homework" I groaned stuffing my things back into the book bag. I slipped off my uniform and slipped on my shorts and a tank top. I brushed my hair and groaned. I wanted to see him again. He probably doesn't.
"NIKKIE CAN YOU GO BY THE GROCERY STORE AND PICK UP SOME GROCERIES!!!!!!!!" My mother squealed. I sighed and nodded. Well she couldn't see me. I grabbed my wallet and slipped down the stairs.

 


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New Post 10/24/2007 4:57 PM
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Re: Let Me be The One 

yeah its ur story...FULL AND TOTAL CREDIT I thought these people would like it too...i never said I wrote it


~Sarah. Photo Sharing and Video Hosting at Photobucket Photo Sharing and Video Hosting at Photobucket That boy can dance!! lol
 
New Post 10/24/2007 4:59 PM
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Re: Let Me be The One(credit to NIKKIE) 

k..see? credit. byez


~Sarah. Photo Sharing and Video Hosting at Photobucket Photo Sharing and Video Hosting at Photobucket That boy can dance!! lol
 
New Post 10/24/2007 5:08 PM
User is offline Nikkie heart NJ
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Re: Let Me be The One(credit to NIKKIE) 

Fine, But just please next time at least notify the person...

 
New Post 10/24/2007 5:09 PM
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Re: Let Me be The One(credit to NIKKIE) 

lol k


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