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New Post 10/24/2007 9:07 PM
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Reality Check [[JOINT FANFIC]] 

Running as fast as I could in the other direction, I glanced behind once. He was coming up fast on my right, and I knew it would only be minutes before he caught me. Willing my legs to keep a faster pace, I headed towards the town square. The whole town seemed deserted, but there just had to be someone in one of the stores.

I reached the square and frantically searched for someone, anyone, who could help me. Sitting in a chair on the porch of the souvenir shop was a man. I caught his eye as I advanced, desperately uttering "Please help me."

He looked at me strangely, as if he shouldn't trust me. I knew why shouldn't he trust me. "Please, Greg, help me! He's gonna kill me, please!"

"I don't know you," he replied. He quickly grabbed his hat and coat and walked briskly inside, ignoring my unceasing pleads. I heard the click of a lock and turned around, still trying frantically to find any means of escape.

I heard soft laughing to my left and screamed at the figure walking slowly towards me. I ran towards the other end of the porch and screamed again. There was no ground underneath it. Just air and blackness. I had no where to run, he had caught me. I backed away from the edge and turned fearfully to the man standing triumphantly before me.

"You thought you could get away couldn't you. Well, I guess that just leaves one thing for me to say," he said, backing me towards the edge. I felt it at the tips of my heels and squealed in fear.

"Please, just leave me alone. Please," I begged, trying not to lose my balance.

"Melanie, get up, we have to make breakfast for Will! It's your turn for dishes!!" He said, in an unatural female voice.

I looked at him in shock, trying to digest his latest remark. He still advanced, ready to push me over the edge. I closed my eyes, bracing myself for the endless fall to my certain death. I suddenly felt myself being shaken by some unknown force. "MELANIE!! Get the eff up, we have stuff to do today!"

I opened by eyes to find my sister Ena shoving me, trying to get me up. It was just a dream?

 

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Alright, so idk if you chicas like this, but i like the idea. ENA"S TURN!

 
New Post 10/24/2007 9:17 PM
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I love it, for sure!

MY TURNNN!


 
New Post 10/24/2007 9:25 PM
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=]! PMS



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New Post 10/24/2007 9:39 PM
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ah i love it! i'm brainstorming already! haha






 
New Post 10/24/2007 9:51 PM
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sweet! cant wait for more

*CHEY*


 
New Post 10/24/2007 10:10 PM
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"Are you going to get up?!" I shouted, yanking the blankets off of her.  She shuddered and rolled herself into a ball, not willing to wake up.

"Mel! C'mon, do you want mom to come up here?" I yelled again, throwing a pillow at her face. Mel groaned and turned over to stare at me in the face. She was sweating and she looked unsually pale. I narrowed my eyes and furrowed my brows, she didn't look well.

"Are you okay?" I asked, taking her appearence as another sign. This whole past week Mel has been screaming in her dreams and not getting enough sleep. Whenever I would ask what was wrong she would change the subject instantly.

"Yeah, I'm good," She said pulling her covers back on to the bed, I could see the uncertainty behind her eyes. She was fighting whether she should tell me or not. I looked at her skeptically.

"Are you positive?" I questioned again taking a moment to study her reaction. It was a pattern with Mel, she was always defensive at first and then she would almost break down towards the end.

"E, I'm fine, relax!" Mel exclaimed jumping down from her bed. I stared at her some more. She looked thinner then before, I could see her ribcage projecting out of her shirt.

"Mel, have you been eating?" I asked her. She caught my gaze and quickly pulled down her shirt some more. Mel crossed her hands in front of her chest and turned towards me.

"Just leave me alone, Ena, I'm fine!" Mel screeched. This is what I get for trying to help. I mimicked her movement and stared her down.

"Tell me what's going on," I stated as I sat down on her bed. She sighed not wanting to give in to me.

"I don't know," she admited. Mel knew I wouldn't fall for that, she held her head with her hands.

"Mel, seriously, what's going on with your dreams?" I pushed. I wanted to know what was going on with my sister, after all she was the only one I had.

"There she goes again, the girl I'm in love with-" My phone rang, it always had the perfect timing. I looked at the screen, "Ashley," it read. I sighed.

"I have to answer this," I told Mel and I put my phone up to my ear.

"Hey!" I said to my best friend, wishing she had something interesting to talk about.

Sorry it took so long! I had a lot of homework and bridge building. =]


 
New Post 10/24/2007 10:18 PM
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Ashley's TURN?!


 
New Post 10/24/2007 10:25 PM
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I love this idea....it's really good! =D


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New Post 10/24/2007 10:37 PM
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Uh, yeah...

ASHLEYYYYY

 

cant wait!

 

ena, you amaze me. XD

 
New Post 10/24/2007 10:57 PM
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starting my chapter now :]






 
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