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New Post 10/25/2007 9:36 PM
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Build Me Up to Tear Me Down 

"Amanda Caroline Harrison?" I stood up to the sound of the secretary's voice. She smiled.

"Welcome to Denview Community High School. Let's meet your dean," she said standing up. I nodded and followed her into a new room. A woman in a nice suit was sitting at a desk in a personal office. She looked up and smiled.

"Hi! You must be Amanda. I'm Kathleen Judigard, your dean," I shook her hand after she spoke. The secretary left us. "So you just moved here?" she asked.

"Yes, from Wisconsin," I said. She smiled.

"Wow, well that's a far ways from Jersey. And particular reason?" she asked.

"Uh...well...I guess not," I said. Lie. Lie Lie. My parents had gotten divorced this month. We were living with my mom's family.

"Ok, well let's take a look at your schedule," she said handing me a paper. I stared at it. "Ok, now don't feel overwhelmed. The classes you're in are probably giong to be identical to the classes you had before. There are 3,000 students here, so it probably can get a little confusing. Don't worry about a thing," she said. I stared at her as if she were crazy.

"Ok...so how will I find my classes?" I asked hopefully.

"It's pretty easy. The room numbers start with the floor, and then the letter next to it is which hallway it's in. Pretty self explanatory!" she said cheerfully. I nodded. "Ok, so I will walk you down to first period," she said.

20 minutes here and I could already tell I was in for something big.

*******

"Mr Burton? New student!" Kathleen said walking up to the P.E. teacher. I was the only one not dressed. I followed Kathleen up to him. He smiled. The students...well...let's just say you could pinpoint the friendly, the jocks, the cheerleaders, the girlys...and the slackers.

"Amanda?" the teacher asked. I nodded. "Ok, well let's introduce you to the class then." I sighed. I hated this part of the day. I would probably need to say some long speech in every class about myself. "CLASS! LISTEN UP! We have a new student. Her name is Amanda Harrison." I heard girls laughing. I stared around for help. There were two girls in the back smiling sympathetically. I would need to be their friends.

I looked in front of me at the group still chatting. At the center was my first vision of an angel. His hair was perfect, a shiny black style. He was athletic, I know from his new Nike sneakers. His deep brown eyes took a glance at me, and looked away.

I knew I was out of place. "Amanda, want to say something about yourself? Where you from?" Mr Burton asked.

"Wisconsin...I just moved here," I said. The boy suddenly got my attention, watching me intently. His girlfriend, from what I could guess, whispered something in his ear and he laughed. "I'm 17, and I guess you could say I'm pretty diverse," i said confidently.

I couldn't think of anything to say. "Ok, well go have a seat next to Gianna. We're not doing fitness today," he said pointing to the nice looking girl in back. I nodded.

As I walked past the group with the guy of my dreams, I heard laughing. I guess school would be a nightmare.

"Hey! I'm Gianna," she said smiling. I smiled.

"Amanda," I replied.

"Cool! And, don't pay attention to them," she said notioning to the group. "They're jerks." I nodded. "When do you have lunch?" she asked.

"Uh...5B," I said staring at my schedule.

"Awesome! We can eat together!" she said smiling. I giggled and nodded.

**********

The day went by pretty smoothly. Until 4th period. "Amanda Harrison?" my math teacher called. I nodded.

"You'll sit next to Mr Jonas...he'll also be your partner," he said. I nodded, but I didn't know who this Jonas kid was. The teacher pointed to the guy. Yes, the guy from gym class.

I nodded slowly, swallowing hard. I wasn't exactly out of place. I was wearing skinny jeans, a purple polo, and white flip flops. My hair was smoothed out today and my face was clear. I didn't feel so bad walking up to him.

He smiled at me as I sat at the two-person science-like math table. "I'm Joe..." he said sticking out his hand.

I gave a weak smile. "Amanda," I said. He nodded and took my hand in his.

"You're new right?" he asked after a minute of listening to the lecture.

"Uh, yeah," I said shyly. He nodded, shaking his hair out of his eyes. I couldn't stop but think, why is he talking to me?

"Where'd you move to?" he asked.

"A few streets up...on Halloway I think," I said. He smiled.

"Then I must live up the block from you," he said. I nodded shyly, and the teacher shot us a death glare. I sunk in my seat as Joe laughed.

Maybe things weren't so bad.



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New Post 10/25/2007 9:37 PM
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Re: Build Me Up to Tear Me Down 

PMS!


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New Post 10/25/2007 9:42 PM
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New Post 10/25/2007 9:42 PM
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its awesomee !!

pms please :]


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New Post 10/25/2007 10:48 PM
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Re: Build Me Up to Tear Me Down 

School was soon over. I went to my locker for the first time, juggling my books. I stuffed them inside and took out my iPod ready to go home. I exited the school and passed by the many cars entering or leaving the lot. I walked up the sidewalk and crossed the street, beginning to blast some music. I walked up the street, arms folded. I was the only one walking alone.

I heard laughing behind me. I turned down the iPod to hear them. "Where's she from? Probably the middle of nowhere..." a girl snapped.

People laughed. I frowned. I turned the corner onto my new street. I heard the group say goodbye and walk up the street, obviously leaving whomever was walking behind me. I sighed listening to teddy geiger.

"Hey Amanda! Wait up!" I knew that voice. It was Joe. He was a fake.

I stopped. "Yea?" I asked a little rudely.

"I'm having a party tonight. Want to come?" he asked. I stared at him for a long second.

"Uh...no thanks...I'm have stuff to do," I said vaguely. He looked at me longingly.

"Please? My friends want you to come," he said. Yeah right! To laugh at me!

"No thanks."

"Why not?"

"Your friends don't seem to like me that much," I said stuffing my iPod in my purse.

"It's just a party. What harm could it do?" he asked. We stopped in front of my driveway.

"Which house is yours?" I asked giving in. He smiled.

"Three doors up, across. See?" he asked pointing. I nodded. "Come over at 7!" I nodded again and opened my door walking into my new house. It was unbearrable to look at. It was plain white.

"MA! I'M HOME!" I shouted.

"How was school?" she asked excitedly unpacking some plates onto the kitchen shelves.

"Fine. I got invited to a party tonight at a house up the street,"  I said. SHe nodded.

"I spoke to one of our neighbors today. Her name was Denise Jonas I think. She's got four sons," she said. I nodded.

"Actually, that's where I'm going tonight," I said.

"Lovely! She's a nice person. Her oldest is in college in the city...the next one should be your age. Joseph is it?" I nodded. "and then she's got a 15 year old and a little one," she said. I nodded.

"Ok, well I'm giong to unpack my room," I said. She noodded and I went upstairs to my fresh room.

First I got the paint and painted it a light pink. It only took me about an hour. Since today was an early dismissal day, (weird on my first day), it was only 2. I then put new sheets on my bed and unloaded my junk onto my desk.

It was 6 PM when I decided to take a shower and get ready. I put on my Hollister hoodie over an Abercrombie baby doll top and my torn light skinny jeans. I slipped on a pair of navy flats and grabbed my purse. "Perfect," I whispered.

I ran downstairs and said a quick bye to mom before walking across the street. I knocked on the door and that snootish girl that was with Joe before answered. "Uh...who are you?" Then Joe came up behind her.

"Don't worry, she's with me," he said. She rolled her eyes and walked away. I felt so out of place. She was wearing a skin tight strapless dress and black pumps. I was underdressed. "Hey! you made it!" he said smiling. Something, wasn't...something wasn't right.

"Uh, yeah," I said my voice cracking.

"Come on in!" his house was huge. People were dancing like crazy. I'm too shy to dance like they are. I followed him past the crowd to the backyard. "Fun, huh?" he asked smiling. I gave an uncomfortable smile.

The girl who answered the door walked up to Joe and gave him a big slobbery kiss, staring at me as she did so. "Come on! I want to dance!" she said taking his hand. I felt myself shrink. He nodded and left me.

I looked around, people stared at me. I was a lost face in the crowd. I turned around, but instead I bumped into someone and ice cream spilt all over my navy hoodie. I shrieked. Some laughed.

I immediately walked back to the front of the house and ran home. I ran inside, ran upstairs, and ran to the only place I could think.

I changed my clothes and layed in bed not wanting to move. My mom echoed from downstairs "AMANDA! YOU HAVE A VISITOR!" she yelled. I frowned.

"NO THANKS!" I yelled. I heard footsteps. My mom stormed in.

"Now, there's a nice boy here to see you! I think it may be Joseph---"

"Then tell him to go away," I said angrily.

"Amanda Caroline! I will send him up here. You better behave!" she said forcefully. I could tell she wanted to make a good impression. I threw a hoodie on over my pajama tank top and ran my fingers over to smooth my hair.

I quickly opened my laptop and then heard him walking up the wooden stairs. He knocked. I didn't answer. So, as rude as he is, he just opened the door and came inside.

"Hey, where'd you go? I was looking for you?" he asked all bubbly. I looked up to him.

"Oh, sorry..."

"Come on! Let's go back to the party!" he said excitedly. I sighed.

"You don't get it, do you?" He looked confused. "As much as I like you trying to be my friend, your friends don't want you to. I'm not the party type of person. Sorry."

"Ok, then let's just go back and listen to the music...or EAT!" I giggled. He was so energetic. "See, you have a great smile," he said reassuringly. I smiled.

"Hang on..." I said walking over to my closet. I took out my green satin short spaghetti strap dress and my same shade of green sandals.

"Now that's a party outfit!" he said smiling. I smiled and walked into my bathroom, and changed. My hair was fine...I had no time to style it. I walked out and he smiled "COME ON!" he ggrabbed my hand and led me downstairs.

My mom laughed. "be back by 11!" she yelled as we ran outside.

"Thank god it's still warm outside!" I said. He smiled.

"I'll have to introduce you to my brothers," he said after a minute. My heels clanked sophisticatedly against the cement.

"Ok," I said awkwardly. He opened the door to his house and took my hand gripping it tightly. This was wierd. People stopped and stared, almost like there should be a spotlight and the music should just be cut.

Joe smiled at me and led me back to the backyard. The group of girls was there sipping...probably alcohol. "IS that?!" I heard one say. I felt the inside of me light up.

"You want some punch?" Joe asked as we passed them. I smiled and nodded. He rushed over to the table while I waited for him. The girls walked over to me.

"You...you...Amanda was it?" I nodded. "Keep your hands off him. He's mine," she said. Her dark hair flew with the wind, her eyes glaring at me.

"Says who?"

"Look, we've been perfect together. So don't try to mess things up!" she said. Joe walked back over.

"Oh hey Angie! So you've met Amanda?" Joe asked surprised.

Angie nodded, still looking at me. "Yes...she's something alright," she said snottily. I sipped my punch. Joe stared at me, and then at her as we looked at each other.

"Ok, well let's dance!" Joe said hopefully to me. I nodded. He smiled taking my hand again.



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New Post 10/26/2007 8:28 PM
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Re: Build Me Up to Tear Me Down 

should i drop it???? =(



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New Post 11/1/2007 4:11 PM
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no !! dont drop it !!

i love this one !!

pms pleasee !!?!! :]


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New Post 11/1/2007 4:27 PM
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oh my god!

 

Jeez Manda, quit embarrassing me..

 

XD JAYKAY

 

this is so good, pms!

 
New Post 11/1/2007 4:51 PM
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Re: Build Me Up to Tear Me Down 

wow.

amanda. stop it. 
your too good. JK.
but the good part is true. 
and DONT STOP THIS ONE 
its amazing.


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New Post 11/1/2007 7:15 PM
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Joe pulled me close once we got inside, like I was his possesion...or an accessory. I gave a weak smile as he puled me to the dance floor. I was definitely not liking the looks we were getting as we walked past the crowd of party goers.

A slow song came on the minute we took our place in front of the DJ table. I spotted Gianna there dancing with Joe's older brother, Kevin. I smiled at her and she waved back. I turned back to Joe and he smiled, taking my waist. The song went on, Angie came in from the backyard and scoffed at us.

"Forget her," Joe said nodding his head towards her direction. So he noticed me looking at her.

"Oh...she's nice I guess," I said trying to not talk bad about her. I just met her anyways.

"She's too protective. She's stuck in her own world. Angie-world...24/7..." he said. I laughed and rolled my eyes.

"She threatened me earlier," I said softly.

"Probably. It's not unlike her." I giggled and the song stopped. I walked over to Gianna and Kevin.

"Gianna!" I said happily. "I actually know someone here!" She laughed.

"Amanda, this is Kev---"

"I know. Joe's brother," I said interrupting her. She laughed again. Kevin smiled.

"I'll be back in a few..." he said kissing her on the cheek. She nodded.

"Are you dating him?" I asked her surprised. She smiled.

"Kind of...at least for now.He's at college, so we don't know how it'll turn out," she said. I nodded understanding. "What about you and Joe...?" she said teasingly.

"I don't know what's going on. For now he's just a friend," I said trying to talk over the music. Gianna frowned.

"A friend?" a male's voice questioned behind me, quietly. I turned to face none other than Joe himself.

I opened my mouth to talk, but he turned on his heel and stormed out. I sighed. "Sorry...I thought..." Gianna tripped over her words.

"No it's ok. I know what you thought. I just thought against it.." I said running after him. I pushed my way through the dancers and smokers (cough!) and got to the front door that Joe had slammed a minute ago. I scanned the front of the house...he wasn't there. I ran up to the sidewalk and looked up the street.

A figure was walking briskly the other way. I sighed and took my heels off. The cement was warm since it was still the end of summer. He turned to the left, to what seemed like a park.

I sighed, trudging on the sidewalk and made my way to the dark clearing, but then there was a lamp over the park. He was sitting on the swings. I sighed...walking up the way. He looked up and saw me. "Look. Just go away..." he said rudely.

"I know how you feel," I said sadly. He shook his head no, with hurt eyes.

"Amanda, I really like you. Even though I've known you for a day. You didn't even give me a---"

"A chance?" I asked quietly. He nodded. "I'm sorry. Can we try this again?" I asked hopefully. He stood up with his hands stuffed into his pockets.

"I don't know." I sighed and stood up. I walked up to face him. He just stared at me. I pressed my lips against his quickly, and then pulled away...almost embarassed.

He just looked at me, and then pulled me close. He kissed me, so I kissed back. I was guessing this was a yes to the trying again thing.

I felt a presence behind us, staring from the sidewalk. Joe pulled away, still holding my face, to look at who it was. It was Angie. "JOSEPH JONAS! YOUR LIFE AND HERS WILL BECOME A LIVING HELL IF YOU DON'T STEP AWAY!" she called angrily. I felt my heart sink. he wouldn't give his life up for me. "YOUR POPULARITY, GONE! YOUR FRIENDS, GONE! UNLESS YOU GET YOUR *** BACK TO THE PARTY!" she called again, crossing her arms.

He looked down at me, but I didn't look back. I stared at the ground, suddenly cold. I shivered. "Ang, see if I care!" he called back, but not quite as loud as she was. I looked up at him, and he smiled down at me.

"UUUGHHHHHH!" she stormed off.

"How could you do that?" I asked softly. He smiled, touching his forehead against mine.

"Something tells me I never belonged there in the first place..." he said kissing me. I smiled and he took my hand, leading me back to the party.



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