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chap. 1

I woke up and rolled over trying to fall back asleep. Not working. I sat up and stretched a little.

“Adrienne!!” my mom yelled.

“Ugh” I said and stood up.

I went downstairs and she smiled her evil smile. A man came out of nowhere and hugged her. That’s the way things were around here now. Every boyfriend abused me and every time she didn’t care. Only one thing kept me going. The Jonas Brothers. They were my life. I sighed.

“What mom?”

“Fix us breakfast”

“Got it”

I went into the kitchen and fixed eggs, then went to go get ready for school. An hour later I was walking down to Kingston High School. I was a freshman. I looked at the fresh bruises from last night and the deep cut in my stomach. Ow. I walked into homeroom and we got started. I had no friends, no one to talk to about what happened to me. The principal walked in.

“Adrienne McAdams?”

“Right here sir”

“Come with me”

I seriously thought I was in big trouble. We walked in his office and there were two police officers and a woman in a suit.

“Hello Adrienne, my you’re skinny” the lady said.

“I guess I don’t eat all that much.”

“Any particular reason?” Mr. Clemmons, the principal asked.

“Every time I pick up food my mom says I’ll get fat if I eat it.”

“Really?” the woman asked.

I nodded.

“I’m sorry, I haven’t properly introduced myself. I’m Mrs. Brooks from child protection services.”

I smiled and nodded.

“Your teachers have been noticing bruises and cuts. Would you mind lifting your shirt a little?” Mr. Clemmons asked.

I obeyed and they all gasped. I pulled up my sleeves and they did it again.

“How did you get those?” One of the police officers asked.

“I umm…”

“It’s ok, tell us” Mrs. Brooks said.

“My mom’s boyfriend.”

“Does she know?”

I nodded. “She knows, and doesn’t care. Sometimes she watches or helps.”

“Well honey, you’ll see a lot more of me.” Mrs. Brooks said.

aw poor girl, this is really good

pms

instead of adrienne its supposed 2 b laci...whoops.
like i said. my comp. is crappy it wont lae me edit
im listening to this song!

thanks Ave!!
jonas sistas 4 lyf
anywho i forgot my psswrd so this is my new account
what can i say i have adhd
it seriously makes you forget things
i wrote it down this time though...one more cooment n il post

wow ave..here it is. not that good but it gets better

chap. 2

That day Mrs. Brooks and the police officers went to my house. They said I couldn’t live there anymore and were taking me away from my mom.

“Ok, I know this is hard but this family was eager. They are very nice people and they want to adopt you, stop moping.” Mrs. Brooks said.

I had gotten to know her a lot the past two weeks and there was already a family that wanted me. She rang the doorbell and a pretty blonde woman opened it. This wasn’t a house, it was a mansion.

“Laci!!” she shrieked and hugged me.

Three boys and a man came up behind her. I smiled at them.

“I’m Alyson, but if you want you can call me mom, everyone else around here does.”

“Ok, I think I will.” I said.

“I don’t call you mom.” The man smiled. “Hey Adrienne, I’m Sam, but you can call me dad or daddy…or ‘hey you’. Whatever you’re comfortable with.”

“Daddy? I never had a dad.”

“Oh, I’m sorry to hear that. Come on in.” mom…or Alyson said.

We went to the HEEUGE living room and Mrs. Brooks followed.

“These will be your brothers.” Daddy…or Sam said pointing to the three boys.

“We just wanted a girl so bad.” Mom said.

“I’m Ben” the oldest said.

“Hunter” the middle one said.

“Lance” the one who looked like he was about my age added.

“Laci” I smiled.

“Would you like to see your room?”

I nodded eagerly and we went to the elevator. Yeah, a house with an elevator. She pressed two. There were four buttons.

“You will share the floor with Lance.” Daddy said as we walked out.

I looked around. Our own living room and kitchen. That’s crazy.

“Here is your room.” Mom said and opened the door. 
WHAT?!! It had hot pink and black checkered walls, a black wire king sized bed, all black steel furniture, a ’72 inch plasma screen TV, hot pink shag rugs, a hot pink comforter with black polka dots, a HUGE walk in closet, an apple laptop, everything you could ever want it had.

“Oh My Jonas” I said slowly.

All the boys whipped their head towards me.

“What? It’s my thing.”

“We have some people for you to meet.” Hunter said and dragged me out.

Lance and Ben followed.

“Who?” I asked.

“Very important people…to you” Lance said.

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