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New Post 11/1/2007 3:37 PM
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Hello Beautiful (ff by Avery) 

Nessa McDonald’s dad is a multimillionaire. After all he is the owner of Hollister. So they lived in Hollywood in a big mansion. The house next to them is for sale.

Chap. 1

Look Nessa the people moving in are finally there.” Nessa’s brother Luke said.

“Yeah, I hope some kids our age move in.” Nessa said. right a that moment a limo pulled up at the house.

Three teenagers got out.

“OMJ!!” Nessa said jumping up and down. “NICK, KEVIN, JOE!!” she screamed.

“Enough with the screaming, ok” Luke laughed.

Then he saw Joe.

“Hey he looks my age” he said.

“Yep, he’s 18” (Luke was 18 also)

“Cool”

“Yeah and Nick is right in-between me and James and Kevin is Jakob’s age”

“Ok” he started laughing.

“What?” Nessa asked madly.

“You are weird” he couldn’t stop laughing now.

“Ugh” Nessa said storming up to her room.

A couple minutes later the doorbell rang. In the distance she could hear their maid and a boy. Wait…she would know that voice anywhere. She raced out of her room and down the hall and stopped at the staircase. She walked calmly down the stairs, rounded three corners and saw Joe Jonas, Nick Jonas, Luke, and James.

“Hi” she said.

“Hey, I’m Joe” Joe said.

“I’m Vanessa” she said.

She looked at Nick. She already knew both Nick and Joe’s names but I would be weird if they didn’t’ introduce themselves.

“I’m Nick”

“So...you guys are moving in next door?”

“Yep” James said.

Nessa just glared at him.

“You want to come in and swim?” Luke asked.

“Sure we’ll go get our bathing suits.” Joe said.

“Cool” Nessa said and closed the door.

She ran all the way up the stairs screaming.

Wow Nessa” James said.

He was 15 and so annoying.

“I thought it was my job to be the annoying one, you know being the youngest and all” Nessa said.

“Oh don’t worry about that sis you’re plenty annoying” he said.

“ugh” she said and slammed her door.

She put on her favorite Hollister (duh) bikini and ran down the stairs and out to their massive pool. The maid, Helga, let Joe and Nick in. Nessa was already laying on one of their chairs, sunbathing.

“What Nessa, not coming in?” Luke asked teasingly.

“Yeah, in a minute” she said rolling on her back.

“CANNONBALL” Joe yelled jumping in.

Nessa couldn’t help but laugh. Nick saw it and suddenly got really jealous. He went over to where Avery was to talk to her.

“Hey Nessa” she sat up.

“Hey Nick” she said smiling.


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New Post 11/1/2007 3:45 PM
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Re: Hello Beautiful (ff by Avery) 

i really like it so far !

pms pleasee :]


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New Post 11/1/2007 5:06 PM
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Re: Hello Beautiful (ff by Avery) 

PMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

pwease?


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New Post 11/1/2007 5:18 PM
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Re: Hello Beautiful (ff by Avery) 

comments???


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New Post 11/1/2007 5:22 PM
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Re: Hello Beautiful (ff by Avery) 

PMS! PMS! this is sooooo good. so far.


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New Post 11/1/2007 5:27 PM
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Re: Hello Beautiful (ff by Avery) 

yes please post more soon. I love it !


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New Post 11/1/2007 5:33 PM
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Re: Hello Beautiful (ff by Avery) 

PMS! this is totally awesome! love it! can't wait till u pm(post more)!


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New Post 11/1/2007 5:52 PM
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Re: Hello Beautiful (ff by Avery) 

OMJ POST MORE! PLEASE?!?!?


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New Post 11/1/2007 6:02 PM
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Re: Hello Beautiful (ff by Avery) 

soooo good ave!


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New Post 11/1/2007 6:20 PM
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Re: Hello Beautiful (ff by Avery) 

thanks everybody..heres chappy 2

Chap. 2

“So um, what’s your favorite band?” he asked.

She blushed

“JB” she mumbled.

“What?”

“You guys” she said glancing over at Joe and then him.

“Oh, cool” he said blushing too.

“Are you going to get in?” she asked.

“Only if you do” he said smiling.

“Ok, you go first” Nessa  said walking over to the edge.

“No, then how do I know you’ll go”

“I have an idea” she said grabbing his hand. “We’ll go in together.”

“Ok” Nick said smiling back at her.

They jumped in and all of them had a blast swimming together.

“Can I have your number?” Nick asked Nessa holding up his phone.

“Sure” she said and told him.

“Thanks” he said and then him and Joe left.

“Ooo” Luke and James said together.

A YEAR LATER:

Joe and Luke are now best friends. So are James and Nick. Kevin and Jakob are also best friends. But about a week after The Jonas Brothers moved in Nick started dating Miley Cyrus, another star. So Nessa went about her life not paying attention to the boys who are now like family. Staying over so much they each have their own rooms, it felt awkward when they went on tour. When they all came back Nick told everyone that he and Miley broke up. Nessa was so happy she could almost burst. She still loved him with all her heart, even more now that she really knew him.

“Hey, Joe pass um, whatever that is” Luke said at dinner.

“K” Joe said passing the bowl Luke was pointing to.

“House to ourselves, woooo” James said.

Both of the sets of parents were out for a week. Right now they were all at the McDonald’s while Jakob and Kevin were at the Jonas’.

“Yeah, whatever” Nessa said getting up to go to her room.

When she was gone Joe, James and Luke stared at Nick.

“When are you gonna ask her out, dude? We’re the older brothers and we totally approve.” Luke said.

“Never, okay? She doesn’t like me the same way, never has, never will.” Nick said.

James and Luke almost fell out of their chairs laughing.

“Before you moved in, every night at dinner she would make us pray for you. Sometimes she still does when you’re not here. She loves you, man.” James said.

“Really?” Nick asked.

“Yep” Luke said.

“Ok” he said and got up to go to Nessa’s room.

The whole time he had known her he’d never been in her room. He knew exactly where it was, right next to Jakob’s. *knock-knock*

“Come in” he heard Nessa say.

“Oh hey Nick” she said.

“Hey” he smiled.

 

i normally dont have miley in my stories but it was really short


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