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New Post 11/1/2007 6:58 PM
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People Change [ff] 

Hi! Welcome to the first chapter of my fanfic, called People Change. I have a new strategy for this one, which a friend helped me with, so I have to finish it (even though I have not finished many fanfics in the past). Anyways, please read and leave comments. Most importantly... enjoy!!

PEOPLE CHANGE

chapter 1

I slowly paced up to the coffin, an elegant black dress fit for a funeral upon me. My father walked beside me, holding my arm, as he knew how emotional I was, and something like this would be especially effect me. I had not yet cried, only because I thought it was not true. Everyone kept repeating what had happened, and that he was dead. But I shook my head, it wasn't true... it couldn't be. I had been with him only last week, he promised to come back. I refused to believe them, all of them.

My father held my tightly as we got closer. He looked to me and smiled, I turned and looked up and smiled back to him, although I knew my smile was sincere and his was not. I had been especially allowed in to see him, even though to me, he was not in there. The funeral was not for an hour, my Dad insisted on coming with me, or I would have been alone. The coffin was now right before us. Without hesitating, I flipped it open and immediantly went into shock. I could not speak, I could not blink, I could not breath.

When my body finally allowed me to, I extended my hand and ran it along his cheek, and immediantly drew back. I began to shake, as if I were sivering from the cold. "K-k-kevin?" I slowly breathed out and fell backwards. My Dad was right there to catch me. I felt a tear fall down my cheek, I wanted to cry, I tried to be strong, but it slowly all came out. I started balling, screaming. "NO!" I yelled, which echoed around the whole room. "NO!" I repeated, my Dad held me close. I hit my fists right on his chest, and he pulled me close.

I didn't want my Dad's sympathy, though, so I got up and kicked off my heals and went back to the coffin. I wanted to get in and die with him. I wish that they could have made him look like him. He was so pale, and not smiling. If I knew Kevin, he would have passed with a smile on his face. I started crying again, though I tried to be quiter about it. Much more like sobbing than anything. "Kevin. I never got the chance to tell you I loved you." I said and continued to cry. I held onto the coffin for support.

I stood there for alost the entire hour I had, and I didn't let my father help me, I was independant and could do this on my own. When the ceremony actually began, I left. I couldn't stand to stay, I know I would have cried and I just wanted to be home. I drove myself and immediently showered and changed into sweats and a t-shirt, more specifically... Kevin's t-shirt. It still smelled like him and I started to cry again, I sat on my bed with a picture of us and cried. Before I knew it, I cried myself into a light, though much needed nap.


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New Post 11/1/2007 7:02 PM
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Oh my...wow!!This is really awesome so far!!Can't wait to read more!!PMS!!!


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New Post 11/1/2007 7:03 PM
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This is so sad.

Posy more soon.

Its amazing.

 
New Post 11/1/2007 7:07 PM
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wow this is soooooo amazing
you should totallt post more
*raises right hand* 
i promise to be a faithful and commentful reader
oh woe im wierd PMS


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New Post 11/1/2007 8:15 PM
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thank you all sooo much for reading. :)

probaby more later tonight!


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New Post 11/1/2007 9:03 PM
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I liked it please post more soon. That was so sad.

Rayne


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New Post 11/1/2007 9:11 PM
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can anyone say 



AMAZING!
wow. that was soo good. 
post more soon.


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New Post 11/1/2007 10:43 PM
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Thanks so much to everyone who's reading!! I am soooo glad you're enjoying it. :) Like I promised, here is chapter 2. Sorry if it get's confusing, it all comes together, but ask any questions if you have them. :) I might post chapter 3 tonight, but no promises... anyway I hope you like this chapter as much as the last!

PEOPLE CHANGE

chapter 2

I was jerked awake by the sound of someone's voice. It sounded like Kevin, I smiled. Only to frown when I looked in my arms and saw our picture and remember that it had really happened. I breathed in the sent of his shirt and held in my sobs. I hated crying, and usually could hold it in, or cover it up. This just pained me so much that there was no way I could to that. "Emily?" I heard. That was Kevin's voice! Surely, I was imagining things. It was making it so much harder. I got up and put water on my face, trying to get the thoughts of Kevin from my head. I had a towel on my face as I went int the room, drying my face. I sat back down on the edge of my bed.

"Emily!" I heard it again. I put my hands on my face and as if Kevin were there I started talking to him. I began to cry through my words, "Kevin." I sobbed. "Why did you have to leave now? I wasn't ready for you to leave." I said, and whiped my tears with my hand. "I didn't want to leave." I jumped. I started thinking out loud. "Did you just answer me? That's not... that's not possible." I replied, as if eh were walking to me. Someone touched my back, I screamed as a reflex. "It's possible." He said. The tears made my vision blurry...

Once I took the shirt and cleared them I saw Kevin. He was right there. That was impossible. But I-I... I saw him, dead. This must be a dream. I couldn't speak, I tried, but my mouth was dry. "You aren't dreaming." He said. I pinched myself anyway, and flinched. Ow, that hurt. He smiled as he watched me. Which made me smile back. I decided not to even ask if this was real. If I had any more time with Kevin, whether it was real or not; I was going to take it. I went over to him and hugged him, I cried into his shoulder, he pulled me into him. "Don't cry." He said, stroking my hair. I never wanted to let go, never.

Suddenly, my door opened. I let go and looked to see who it was. "Hey Joe." I smiled. I bet they sent him up here to cheer me up, it usually worked. "You seem happy." He said, didn't he see Kevin... if it was a dream he must be able to see him. I looked over quickly and he was still there. I decided to take a chance. "What do you mean? How could I not be, he's right there." I said poitning to him. Joe saw nothing but an empty space. He gave me a hug. "Em. I don't want to say it but..." Joe choked down his own tears. "He's dead."

I hugged Joe back. He rarely cried. "Joe.... Joe... please don't cry." I said, Joe slowly stopped. "I'm trying not to. I want to be strong for my family, it's just hard..." He said, I smiled and hugged him once more. "I'm sorry Joe." I whispered to him. "You can come hind out here whenever you want." I told him, he nodded, I felt it on my shoulder. He didn't say anything else, he just left the room. I looked back to Kevin, who was now lying on my bad. This felt so real... I couldn't be dreaming. I just... I couldn't. Was Kevin a ghost? Did that mean there was a way to bring him back? But ghosts didn't exist. Right?

"They can't see me." He said. I didn't understand. "What do you mean?" I asked him. Why me? Why could I see him? "They can't see me. I picked you." He picked me... I was hoping that was good, although I really still didn't get it. "Care to explain?" I asked. He gave a slight nod and I went and layed by him on my bed as he told me. "I did die. You saw me, this is my spirit." He explained, I decided to save my questions for later. "One person. I got one person who could see me, that's you. It's pretty simple." He said and stopped. So that was it? He picked me? Why not Joe, Nick or Frankie... even his parents. I move closer to him and lay my head on his chest, he put his arm around me. I listened to the beat of his heart... that's all that mattered. Becase to me, he was alive.


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New Post 11/1/2007 10:48 PM
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wow. simply amazing.


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New Post 11/1/2007 10:58 PM
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wow. Its so amazing. :-)

 
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