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11/4/2007 10:21 PM

	shlee [is growing apples and O.P.B in her backyard to give to Joe]
475 posts

Fainting into your heart - a fan fiction (yea i wrote one!!)

Hey, this is my first ever attempt at a fan fiction. i've been writing this story in my head for a month and i decided to actually write it. I know exciting!! So i've already written two chapters, the ending, and tiny parts in between. Comment if you like it or hate it. Please, im begging you. if you hate it, please tell me.
okay here it is.
also, if things don't make sense, just tell me

Chapter 1

“Okay Ashley, its not anything serious, but you have a heart murmur. That is where your heart valve doesn’t completely close.”

“Will she have anything more serious in the future?”

“It is very unlikely. Most girls who have this just have a heart murmur. So, we won’t be messing around with your heart. However, you do need to drink lots of water, eat plenty of food, and get a ton of rest especially since your anemic.”

I just sat there while my parents talked to the doctor. Finally I knew why I had fainted. I’m not scared though. I just have to drink water. How easy is that. Anyway, nothing can get me down since in a week my best friend Sammi and I are going to see . . .
THE JONAS BROTHERS.
They are my favorite band in the whole entire world. Sammi only likes them cause they’re hot but their songs have a special connection with me. When my grandmother died, they wrote ‘Eternity’ and that was exactly what I was feeling. After my boyfriend broke up with me, I heard ‘Hold On’. It’s crazy how they know exactly what to say to make me feel better. OMG, I spaced out a ton. Mom is saying something to me, better listen.

“Honey do you still want to go to the mall with Sammi today.”

“Yes please, she’s meeting me here can you drop me off. Thanks bye”(oh by the way Ashley got into the car and is at the mall now during her spaceyness)

“Bye”

Immediately after I got out of the car, I was attacked by blonde hair.

“OMG WHAT’S WRONG WITH YOU? ARE YOU SICK? ARE YOU GOING TO DIE?”

Sammi is a HUGE drama queen. I keep telling her to go out for plays but she says that only geeks do that. (No offence to people in drama)

“Don’t worry, I’m fine. It’s nothing. I just have to drink more water.” I changed the subject “Don’t you want to go shopping for the perfect outfit to meet your ‘future husband’ in?”

Sammi was a Nick Jonas fan.

“I WAS SO WORRIED ABOUT YOU THAT I ALMOST FORGOT. LET’S SHOP.”

So about 10 bottles of water, 4 stores, and 3 bathroom breaks later, Sammi and I were done. My outfit was very rocker chic. Sammi’s outfit was very ... um ... well ... PINK. She is such a girly girl sometimes I don’t even know why I talk to her.

“SO LET’S TALK MAKEUP FOR YOU. I’M THINKING PINK LIPS AND SMOKY EYES.”

“Um no. You know I don’t like makeup. I don’t even know how to put it on.”

“OH DON’T WORRY BABE. I GOTCHA COVERED. AND YOU ARE WEARING MAKEUP. YOU ARE SO PRETTY. JUST CAUSE STEPHEN BROKE UP WITH YOU DOESN’T MEAN YOU SHOULDN’T TRY TO LOOK GOOD.”

Sammi quickly regretted what she said. It still stung a little to hear Stephen’s name. I was so in love with him. But he said he didn’t like tall, brunettes a.k.a me and started dating Cindy Stantrom, the blondest, shortest, most nauseating girl to ever walk the planet. But I wasn’t in love anymore so I tried to make Sammi feel better.

“Ok Sammi. You can do my makeup. But I swear, if you make me look like a whor*, I will embarrass you so badly in front of Nick.”

“OK I PROMISE.”

Sammi’s mom drove me home. I went to sleep smiling. One week till the concert!

OK please comment back to say if you like it or not. This is my first fan fic and if you hate it, please be blunt and tell me so I can put you out of your misery.

Demi Lovato is the only star I know that can be as pretty and as talented as she is AND kiss Joe Jonas and have me still not hate her. I know, I'm shocked too.

11/4/2007 10:23 PM

	x0xoreosx0x
1188 posts

Re: Fainting into your heart - a fan fiction (yea i wrote one!!)

if you don't post more like...now...then...i'll be forced to make you perish.

ok not really. i'm not good at threatening =P

PMS!
-manda

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11/5/2007 6:18 PM

	shlee [is growing apples and O.P.B in her backyard to give to Joe]
475 posts

Re: Fainting into your heart - a fan fiction (yea i wrote one!!)

OMJ someone commented!!!!!!!!!!

you get joe cookies (as i see you are a joe fan, me too!)

i have a paper due tomorrow so maybe i'll post tonight but definetely (sp?) tomorrow night

Demi Lovato is the only star I know that can be as pretty and as talented as she is AND kiss Joe Jonas and have me still not hate her. I know, I'm shocked too.

11/6/2007 7:43 PM

	shlee [is growing apples and O.P.B in her backyard to give to Joe]
475 posts

Re: Fainting into your heart - a fan fiction (yea i wrote one!!)

Chapter 2

Finally it’s Saturday, the day of the Jonas Brothers concert!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sammi stayed over at my house so we could have a whole day of beauty prepping. Last night we got mani pedis and right now Sammi is yelling at me to not move my face.

“YOU’LL CRACK THE FACE MASK”

“but wha- IF YOU NEED TO TALK, WRITE ON THIS PIECE OF PAPER”.

This is so stupid and kind of funny. I sat there silently laughing as Sammi started freaking out because my straightener wasn’t cooperating

“UHH, WHY CAN’T YOU HAVE NORMAL HAIR INSTEAD OF THIS STRAIGHT RESISTING POOFY MONSTER”.

I was unfortunately graced with slightly poofy hair. So my clean brown (instead of dirty blonde) armpit length wavy hair wasn’t becoming bone straight like Sammi’s shoulder length platinum blonde hair had so easily.

“YOU KNOW WHAT. FORGET IT, YOU’RE HAVING CURLY HAIR.”

Five hours later I was tweezed, curled, and moisturized to perfection. My make up was, to my great relief, not whorish, and I had to say, we both looked hot. Not that I was trying to look hot. I’m not trying to impress the Jonas Brothers. If I ever did meet them, I would only be excited by meeting my musical soul mates, not because they are ‘hot’, even if they are cute.

I was excited, way to excited to eat or drink much. How could I when Sammi was attacking me with styling products? I was a little hungry, but I didn’t notice. When Sammi deemed me suitable, we finally got in the car.

“I call driving.”

“STOP RUBBING IT IN.” Sammi turned 16 three months ago and failed the driver’s test five times. She was such a spaz on the road.

We drove for two hours, jamming to, of course, the Jonas Brothers. We got there three hours early so we could listen to sound check. After we parked and got out of the car, my eyes beheld the most fantabulous sign. PUBLIC MEET AND GREET WITH THE JONAS BROTHERS.

“OMG, I GET TO LOOK AT NICK UP CLOSE.”

“omg, I can talk to them about their music.”

“YOU’RE SUCH A MUSIC NERD. WE GET TO SEE AND HUG 3 OF THE HOTTEST GUYS ON THE PLANET AND YOU WANT TO TALK ABOUT MUSIC? HAVE I TAUGHT YOU NOTHING?”

“Yay, they’re hot.”

“THAT’S BETTER. LET’S GO.”

We walked through the parking lot, guarding our tickets with our lives. We had front row seats. We sat down and started talking about how excited we were that we could meet and greet them. Then, the most amazing voice ever filled the area. I looked up to see Joe singing SOS acapella.

I didn’t realize I was staring until he winked at me. Then he started walking off the stage and down the stairs. OMG, Joe Jonas is going to come talk to me. I tried to stay calm as he walked closer.

“Hey Joe, you have a great voice.”

“oh thanks … ok enjoy the show.” Then he walked away. I turned around to see the person he really winked at, his girlfriend. At least according to her shirt ‘Joe Jonas’ girlfriend’. Of course, she was blonde.

“What’s so great about blondes?” crap, I said that out loud.

“WE’RE MORE FUN. WAIT, YOU’RE NOT TALKING ABOUT ME. WHO ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT? … OMG YOU LIKE JOE!”

“No I don’t. I’m just wondering in general why general guys like general blondes.” Sammi didn’t fall for it.

“I KNEW IT. I DIDN’T BELIEVE THAT ‘I ONLY LIKE THEM CAUSE OF THEIR MUSIC’ CRAP. I KNEW YOU THOUGHT ONE OF THEM WAS HOT. AREN’T YOU GLAD YOU HAVE MAKEUP ON NOW?”

I started blushing. So what if I think Joe is extremely hot. I value him for his music, not his looks. He can date whomever he wants. If I believed that, then why am I jealous? I’m never going to hear the end of this.

okay so we figure out who ashley likes. yay
i know this is a boring chapter.
she goes to the meet and greet next chapter. YAY!!!

COMMENTS MAKE ME UPDATE.

Demi Lovato is the only star I know that can be as pretty and as talented as she is AND kiss Joe Jonas and have me still not hate her. I know, I'm shocked too.

11/6/2007 9:41 PM

	shlee [is growing apples and O.P.B in her backyard to give to Joe]
475 posts

Re: Fainting into your heart - a fan fiction (yea i wrote one!!)

Chapter 3

The concert was amazing. They sang all of my favorite songs and, according to Sammi, Nick is even hotter in person.

During the end of the concert, I started feeling nauseous which is weird because I didn’t eat anything. It got worse in the meet and greet line. My vision was going blurry and my head was throbbing.

“ASHLEY? ARE YOU OKAY?”

“Yea, I’m just excited.” At least I hope that’s what this feeling was. I didn’t want to ruin this for Sammi. I could see how excited she was; she was literally jumping.

We were next in line and Sammi was saying something to me but I couldn’t hear her. Then everything went black.

On the Jonas Brothers tour bus later that night (not in anyone’s p.o.v) :

The Jonas family was sitting down to dinner when Mr. Jonas came on the bus.

“Boys I have an announcement. You know that girl that fainted tonight at the concert?”

“Apparently we were too hot to handle.”

“Actually, Joseph, she has a medical condition and she didn’t eat enough today. She’s going to be in the hospital tomorrow and you boys are going to go visit her and show your support.”

“Dad, no offence, but if this is another one of your publicity stunts, count me out. The media still ask me if I’m dating Miley. It’s getting annoying.”

“Anyway, dad, what if girls think that they need to faint at our concerts to meet them. Then they will be making themselves sick on purpose.”

“No one’s that dumb Joseph. Your uncle thinks it’s a good idea and so do I, so you’re going.”

“Fine dad. Does anyone remember if she was hot so I can get something out of this?”

“Wow Joe. Way to be selfish.”

“Shut up Kevin.”

wow joe is such a jerk
COMMENTS??????

Demi Lovato is the only star I know that can be as pretty and as talented as she is AND kiss Joe Jonas and have me still not hate her. I know, I'm shocked too.

11/7/2007 9:24 PM

	shlee [is growing apples and O.P.B in her backyard to give to Joe]
475 posts

Re: Fainting into your heart - a fan fiction (yea i wrote one!!)

come on guys. i posted two chapters in one night

is it really that bad?

PLEASE COMMENT EVEN IF IT'S NEGATIVE

i feel so unloved

i need a hug but the jonas brothers said they were overrated :(

Demi Lovato is the only star I know that can be as pretty and as talented as she is AND kiss Joe Jonas and have me still not hate her. I know, I'm shocked too.

11/7/2007 9:37 PM

	CareBear
227 posts

Re: Fainting into your heart - a fan fiction (yea i wrote one!!)

yeah! i love this story! PMS!

Read My story... Your My brothers?!??! ha! this should be interesting http://jonasbrothersfan.com/Community/Forum/tabid/265/forumid/62/threadid/118988/scope/posts/Default.aspx Tire Swing Romance: Sequel to Ha! your my brothers,this should be interesting.. http://jonasbrothersfan.com/Community/Forum/tabid/265/forumid/62/postid/170781/scope/posts/Default.aspx http://jonasbrothersfan.com/Community/Forum/tabid/265/forumid/62/postid/170781/scope/posts/Default.aspx We Were Inseparble-until you become famous http://jonasbrothersfan.com/Community/Forum/tabid/265/forumid/62/postid/192591/scope/posts/Default.aspx http://jonasbrothersfan.com/Community/Forum/tabid/265/forumid/62/postid/199294/scope/posts/Default.aspx the Cancer Story http://jonasbrothersfan.com/Community/Forum/tabid/265/forumid/62/postid/225551/scope/posts/Default.aspx

11/7/2007 10:15 PM

	Rosiee.
672 posts

Re: Fainting into your heart - a fan fiction (yea i wrote one!!)

I love it!

you should post moree sooon!

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12 days til one of the best days of my life :D

11/7/2007 10:37 PM

	Sarah
32 posts

Re: Fainting into your heart - a fan fiction (yea i wrote one!!)

This is Really good! PPMS

11/7/2007 10:46 PM

	shlee [is growing apples and O.P.B in her backyard to give to Joe]
475 posts

Re: Fainting into your heart - a fan fiction (yea i wrote one!!)

sorry about that really depressing post

IM SOOOO GLAD YOU GUYS LIKE IT

another update maybe tomorrow night
but definetely friday cause i have a half day!!!!!

Demi Lovato is the only star I know that can be as pretty and as talented as she is AND kiss Joe Jonas and have me still not hate her. I know, I'm shocked too.

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