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Freaked... [[FF]]] 

Prologe(sp?haha)

 

Emiliee feels that she doesnt fit in. Three reasons: One. Her huge mansion of a house. Two. Her identical twin who is her complete opposite. Three. She is the only girl on the Varsity Senior football team!

But, she finds friends in her new neighbors.. who happen to be he Jonas Brothers. She isnt thrilled with the three older boys, but finds a best friend in Frankie.

What else could go wrong..... until she falls in love with Joe Jonas?

 

2 comments and I'll post some chapters.

 

(These chapters are very long because I was reeeeally bored last night and this morning..)

 

---------Lola (aka Emmie)



I'm in love with
Alex Gaskarth,Jack Barakat&Jordan Pasquin.
Sorry Kevin, Joe & Nick. (:
 
New Post 11/15/2007 11:35 PM
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bumpity?



I'm in love with
Alex Gaskarth,Jack Barakat&Jordan Pasquin.
Sorry Kevin, Joe & Nick. (:
 
New Post 11/15/2007 11:39 PM
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ahh sounds cute!

post more =]


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New Post 11/16/2007 12:31 AM
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Freaked

by Emma Hayes


"Great job today, Hollywood. Varsity." Coach Ron said, handing me a towel.
"Thanks, coach." I said, smiling. He punched me in the shoulder.
"Dont suck up. Even though youre a girl. No suck-ups. See you at Thursdays practice." He said, handing me my football jersy.

Yep, only girl on the Senior Football team. I love the thrill. The only thing is, my twin. I took off my pads, revealing my bright orange tank top. i took off my shorts letting the world (aka no one) see my black and pink underwear. i heard the door open.
"*CENSORED*." I muttered under my breath and backing into the corner.
"ARE YOU DESCENT?!" my identical twin, Kayla called. I hate that girl. We are identical except that we have totally different personalities and she has blonde hair.
"No. Go away!" I yelled.
"Well, hurry up! You need to drive me to Kristin's house!" she screamed back. Ah, Kristin; the Queen Bee's slave.
"Whatver! I'll be out in a few minutes!" I yelled. I heard the door close again. I grunted as I grabbed my jeans and put them on. I slipped my "Lobo's Football" shirt over my long, natrally curly dark brown hair. I brushed it out of my face and I sllipped my feet into my black high-tops. I heard my cell phone going off informing me that I got a text.
"Where the hell are you? -K" I texted back.
"Shut up, brat. Im coming. -H" Okay, I guess I didnt explain. Everyone calls me Hollywood... Even thoguh Im totally boring. Whatever. I slung my football bag over one shoulder and my messenger bag over the other. I scuffed out of the locker room. I almost ran into Mr. Popular, Austen Allen.
"'Sup, Hollywood." He sneered.
"Shove off, Austen." I said pushing against his chest to get his away. I grunted and body checked him into the wall.
"Nice." He said, walking off. I rolled my eyes and walked out the door to see Kayla leaning on my car, twiling her golden hair and tapping her Prada shoes. I looked into her white rimmed, Paris Hilton glasses.
"Could you take any longer?" she scoffed.
"yes. Want me to next time?" I asked sarcasticly, unlocking the doors and climbing into my Jeep Cherokee.
"Whatever." she said, clipping herself in. We drove in silence to Kristin Block's mancion. Kayla climbed out and walked up to the front door. I rolled down the passeneger window, and being the good sister I am, yelled:
"Be back by ten!!" SHe lloked around and glared at me.
"Betch." I muttered under my breath. I grabbed my baseball cap and slapped it onto my head. I pulled it down close to my eyes. I turned up my music to a song I didnt recognize.
"Next up is Underdog, by the Jonas Brothers..." The DJ said.
"Shes an Underdog..
Lives next door to me.
Shes always heard
But it dont amount
ti anything.."

I smiled. It was a pretty good song. I drove up to our mansion. I looked up at it. Ew.
I started to walk inside when a squeeling came from two women in the kitchen.
"Of course! She'll love it!" My mother gushed. I walked up a flight of stairs to the dining room and catiously waundered in. My mother was sitting at the tanle with a nice looking women with dark, curly hair.
"Uh... hi?" I said, looking at the pair of women. They stood up.
"This is her."My mom said, looking at me. I stared back. "Emiliee, this is Denise." SHe said, walking towards me, Deinise following behind. I stuck out my hand. Denise smiled and took it gently.
"hello, Emiliee. Nice to meet you."  She said nicely. I forced a smile... It probably looked like a grimace.
"You too. So... What were yall talking about?" I asked slowly.
"Well... Mrs. Jonas..." My mother started.
"Jonas?" I gushed.
"Yes." SHe smiled. My jaw dropped. I swallowed and let her continue.
"Well, Denise, her husband, and her sons just moved in across the street. They need a full-time babysitter! Plaese?" My mother asked. Deciding not to be rude in front of Mrs. Jonas, I sighed.
"Why not." I said tonelessly.
"Thank you." Denise said, hugging me, but thewn relizing that I was all sweaty and removing her hands from my back. "Can you come over tonight at 6?" I looked at the clock. 4:30.
"Uh. Sure." I pointed to the stairs. "Im gonna, uh, take a shower."
"Good." My mother said. I rolled my eyes and ran upstairs. I heard my mother say, "She is really a good kid... She plays football... But I wish she was more like Kayla." I looked down at the only thing I had that was girly. My diamond "E" necklace. I sighed and retreated into my room. I ran to my closet, pulled out denim bermuda shorts and my clean football jersy from last year. I ran into the bathroom. I ran the water and stepped in. The warm water rushing over my acheing body. I looked at my stomach. A big, purple bruise was forming on my stomach.
"Crap.." I mumbled.



 you like? If you do, I'll continue



I'm in love with
Alex Gaskarth,Jack Barakat&Jordan Pasquin.
Sorry Kevin, Joe & Nick. (:
 
New Post 11/16/2007 12:36 AM
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i like it! do i count? haha, it's good so far!

i wanna see where you go with it!

so post more soon =]

 


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New Post 11/16/2007 12:37 AM
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haha. of course you count!



I'm in love with
Alex Gaskarth,Jack Barakat&Jordan Pasquin.
Sorry Kevin, Joe & Nick. (:
 
New Post 11/16/2007 12:38 AM
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Freaked
Chapter Two
by Emma Hayes

I slipped another tank top, this time black, over my head before I slipped on my old, tattered jersy. I looked down at the red and black shirt.. thing. It had multiple holes in it. I sighed. I took it off and just wore the tank top. I slipped on my jeans and put on some clogs. I pulled my hair up in a messy ponytail and put  an elastic headband around my head, then looked in the mirror. Wow... I looked like a soccer player.I looked at my desk and walked over to it. I reached over to my one and only jewelry box. I pulled out my ruby cross necklace, and took off the "E". Its the first time I had taken it off since I had it replaced 4 years ago. Anyway, I took it off and set it on my desk.
Hear some noises outside, I walked to my window. There were two guy playing basketball in the streets--- with no shirts... One with curly hair, who looked like... 15, 16 maybe, and one with long, dark hair. Then there were two other guys in laying in the grass. One looked to be about 20, and the other about 7. I laughed as the one with the dark hair ran over and picked up the youngest one, who was screaming "PUT ME DOWN!" and laughing.
"Well, it looks like I'll have a little fun.." I said out loud. I went to my bag and grabbed my new, clean, game jersy and slipped it over my head, then grabbed my "BRITAIN" hat and tucked my hair up it it. I replaced my clogs with some old tennis shoes that I had, and ran downstairs, hoping no one would notice me.
As soon as I walked out of my house, the one with the dark brown hair ran up to me.
"Hey, dude. What to play?" he asked throwing the ball to me. We started to play. "Oh, by the way, whats your name?" We all stopped for a sec. I thought.. Oh god, I hadnt thought of that...
"Uh.. Ryan." I said in a manly voice. "You?" He pointed to him self, then at Curly, then at Mr. 20 then at the youngest.
"Im Joe, thats Nick, thats Kevin, and thats Frankie." He said, and looked at Kevin. "Shouldn't Frankie's new babysitter be getting here soon?"


"Yeah." he replied. I looked at my watch. Oh crap...
"Well, I... gotta go!" I said quickly and ran into the house. *CENSORED**CENSORED**CENSORED**CENSORED*. Its 6:08 and I was supposed to be there at 6. I took off the jersy quickly, put eyeliner on, put on my clogs, and let my hair down... then put it up again like I had it in the beginning. I ran downstairs and out the door again. Everybody must have retreated inside, because there wasnt anyone out there anymore. I made sure I had my cell phone, took a deep breth, and rung the doorbell.
"I bet she's hot." I heard Joe say from the other side of the door. He opened it and looked wide eyed at me. He gasped and slammed the door in my face. How nice.
"She looks... Like that Ryan guy!" I heard him say. "But.. she's hot!" I laughed. I heard more footsteps. He opened the door again, but this time, Nick and Kevin were standing on either side of him. I put my hand on the door.
"Please dont slam it in my face again.." I said. Nick and Joe just stared wide-eyed at me but Kevin stretched out his hand. I took it and he led me in side. We sat down on the couch. Nick and Joe followed. Joe must've come out of his coma, because now he was acting all playful. He sat on my lap.
"Oops. My bad." he said, sitting on me.
"Ugh.. Joe, my legs." I said, and he stood up and stared at me.
"How do you know my name?" he asked.
"Helloooo smart one. Youre a Jonas, right?" I said and I pointed to Kevin and Nick.
"And thats Kevin and thats Nick." Joe nodded and sat back on my lap. I tried to push him back up, but he braced against me. I gasped for breath.
"Come on Joe. She cant breathe." Nick mumbled from where he sat.
"It speaks?" I laughed. He sneered at me. I rolled my eyes.
"Well..." Kevin started, looking at hius watch. "Its 6:40.. Wheres mom?" At that moment, Denise ran into the room.
"Everyone ready?" She asked the boys.


"If you dont mind me asking, where are you going?" I asked Kevin.
"We have a concert... And it wouldnt be good for Frankie to go. It gets pretty crazy." He explained. I nodded, and Mr. Jonas walked into the room, carrying little Frankie. I smiled as Frankie ran over to me and hugged my legs. He looked at Nick, Joe, and Kevin.
"You guys cant have her. She's mine." He stated. We laughed and I picked him up. I love him already. He smiled at me.
"Bye, Frank the Tank." Joe said, kissing Frankie on the head.. Then his parents doing the same.
"Dont hurt her, Frankie." Mr. Jonas said sternly. I put Frankie down and Denise gave me all their cell phone numbers, emergency numbers, etc.
"By the way," Joe said turning to me, "You never told us what your name is."
"Im Emiliee.. But you could call me Hollywood. thats my nickname. Em or Hollywood."
"Em or Hollywood. Got it." He said.
"I'll call you when we are headed back." Denise said, kissing Frankie on the head one more time.
"Bye guys!" The boys called from the door.
"Bye!" We called back. When they were gone, I looked down at Frankie. I kneeled down to his level.
"So, Frankie.... What do you want to do?" I asked.
"Could we watch tv?" He asked innocently.
"Sure. You do that, and I'll make your dinner." I said. "Uhh... what do you want?"
"MAC 'N CHEEEEEESE!!!" he squeeled.
"Oh, okay." I said and walked towards the kitchen and Frankie plopped down in front of the tv. I raided the cupboards, and I finally found a box of macaroni. I started the stove and put on the water. I walked back over and sat on the couch behind him. The Radio Disney "Top 10 in 60 seconds" thing popped up.It got down to number one, and when the group came on, Frankie started to sing the song.
"You  know the song?" I asked.

"Yeah, its my brothers. Ive probably heard it for.." He counted on his fingers. "2 years." I pointed at the screen.
'You mean to say that those are your brothers?" I asked.
"Yeah. Arnt they good?"
"Yeah." I said, getting up and pouring in the noodles for the mac n' cheese. I sat back down, and Hannah Montana came on.
"THATS THEM AGAIN!" Frankie gushed when the episode came on. I looked up from the book I was reading, and sure enough, there they were, on the show.
"Wow." I muttered, and got up for the third time and poured out the water and prepared Frankie's dinner. There was some left over, so I decided to have some. We sat in front of the tv, eating until 8:30.
"Uh, frankie, its time for you to go to bed."  i said. (Haha that rymed)
"Oh... okay." he said. We put our dishes in the sink, and we waundered upstairs. I helped him take a bath, brush his teeth, and then I tucked him into bed.
"Night, little buddy." I said.
"Emmy, will you be my bestest friend?" he asked in a little voice.
"Sure." I said, kissing him on the forehead.
"Oh, one more thing?" he asked, "Could you sing me something be fore I go to sleep?' Well... Why not. I dont really sing very much, but if its for my new best friend, sure.

"Sleep my child,
In peace atend thee,
All through the night.
Guardian angels,
God will send thee..
All through the night." 
I sang. That was the song my mom used to sing to me. i looked down at his slepping face. I kissed his forehead again and tip-toed out of the room.



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I'm in love with
Alex Gaskarth,Jack Barakat&Jordan Pasquin.
Sorry Kevin, Joe & Nick. (:
 
New Post 11/16/2007 12:45 AM
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haha i'm commenting! so post more soon!

but then again i am going to bed now, so post more so i can read it in the morning! haha.

anyways, i like it because it's not like the typical fanfiction. so good job and ill be waiting for the next one...patiently. maybe =]


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*gasp* THIS IS SO GOOD! I can't wait to find out what's gonna happen next, please update soon!

-Bee-


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Thanks for the comments! Keep 'em coming!

Freaked
Chapter Three
By Emma Hayes

I walked back down the spral staircase and sat down on the couch with "Pride and Predjudice." Ugh. Boring book. I slammed it down and stared at the wall for a few minutes trying to figure out what to do for a few hours. I looked over and saw a desk against the wall with a notebook laptop on it. I stood up and sat down at the desk. I logged on to Joe's account; "password" was his password! SOMEONE isnt very creative. I went onto the internet ans studied the boys for about an hour and a half. I looked at the clock. 10:56 pm. Ugh... What could be taking sooo long? I watched a few videos and then logged off and curled up on the couch. I was awoken by the sound of the phone ringing. I got up slowly and answered it.
"Huuuullllooo?" I said slowly.
"Emiliee?" It was Denise.
"Yes?"
"Hi honey. We're on our way home. Is Frankie okay?" she asked. I heard Joe randomly scream in the background. Then Denises voice again, "Joesph! You cant just scream whenever you feel like it!" Then his voice again, "Sorry, Mommy." I giggled quietly when I heard him call her "Mommy."
"Yeah... He fell *yawn* asleep quickly." I said.
"Oh, sweetie, you sound tired. It'll be another hour until we get there, why dont you go to sleep." She said in a motherly tone.
"Thanks Mrs. Jonas." I gushed.
"Please, call me Denise." She said kindly.
"Okay.. Well.. Goodbye." I said.
"We'll see you soon!" she said. "Bye!" We hung up. I went back and collapsed on the cold leather couch. I shivered and with that I fell asleep again.

When I awoke I was being carried through the cold night air with a fleece blanket around me. I half-opened my eyes to see joe focused on carrying me back to my house. I yawned again and put my arms around his neck. He looked down, obviously surprised that I had woken up.
"Hey." he whispered.
"Hmmggellooo..." I slurred. He laughed. I braced myself against his warm chest, smelling his... smell. We walked into my house and I heard Kayla shriek.
"JOE JONASSS???? Oh my god!! Ohmygodohmygod!" she squeeled. Joe shushed her and she glared at me. I could see him frowning as he saw we were (almost) identical. We climbed up the spiral stairs, and he managed to find my room. He layed me down as if I were a baby, and layed down next to me. He put his arms around me. I gasped as his arm hit my stomach. I waited until he was asleep and then removed his hands from my body and got up. I went into the bathroom, on the way grabbing some pj shorts and a red wife beater (i have a thing for those). When I came back out, I layed as far away from Joe as I could. But I was asking myself in my head..

"Why am I afraid of love?"

Instantly, I fell asleep.

I woke up to Kevin's yelling.
"Joe!! You probably scared her.. or.. or.. pushed her off the bed or something! Mr. insensitive!" He yelled at pitiful Joe, who was sitting on the edge of my bed.
"*ahem*" I cleared my throat. Kevin came over and sat next to me, utting his arm around my shoulders. I scooted away.
"Oh.. sorry." Kevin got up. "ARe you okay?" He ask3ed.
"Yeah, Im just fine. But if you please, could you leave I sorta need to get dressed..." I asked, pointing to the door. Kevin nodded and gave me a friendly hug. This time I hugged back. Joe looked at me, looked down and walked out of the room.
"Ignore him." Kevin said as he walked out. I grabbed some basketball shorts.. yet another black white beater and retreated to the bathroom to put my clothes on. After, I put on more black liner and grabbed my Vans and slipped them on. I put on my newsbo cap and headed down stairs, my long hair bobbing up and down as I went. Kayla stood at the bottom, wearing a denim mini, MINI skirt and (boob-)toob top and some crappy-looking wedges.
"Now, what the HELL did you do with Joe last night?" She asked angerly. I grabbed my longboard off the wall.
"i didnt do anything. It was HIM making the moves." I said, mocking her tone.
"And did you accept them?"
"Ew. No. Hes my friend, not my lover."
"Good. 'Cause he's mine."
"I wouldnt count on it." I said, going out the door. As soon as I closed the front door, I heard her stomp up to her room and I saw her look out the window, and I looked back.
"PONED!" I screamed. She flipped me off. I rooled my eyes and skateboarded towards my best friends house, Tasha.
I couldnt wait.

 

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Sorry Kevin, Joe & Nick. (:
 
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