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New Post 11/16/2007 6:44 PM
User is offline Nikkie heart NJ
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Re: Worth a Thousand Words 

WOW... That was a very good introduction, I still feel a bit baffled......

 

I cannot wait to see what Lauren has for the next chapter... I'm still trying to figure out how the boys will enter the story.... I love the title... :)

~Nikkie

 
New Post 11/16/2007 7:10 PM
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More? Soon? Please?

It's REALLY good xD




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New Post 11/16/2007 7:32 PM
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Modified By LisaAnn  on 11/16/2007 6:33:41 PM)

OMG!!!! That was AMAZING....and its only the PROLOGUE!!! Mia, you got me EXACTLY!! i even took photography class..and i sucked at it, but thats not the point! the whole idea was totally me!!!! gosh, i loved it!!! I cannot wait for more....please, dont make me wait long!!! PMASAP!!!!!

Lots o'Love!!!

~LISA~

p.s.--I am totally makin a t-shirt that says that now! i was crackin up!!! Amazin job!!


~LISA~
 
New Post 11/16/2007 8:29 PM
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omgsh!!!
amaaazinggg!!!!

pmasap!!!
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New Post 11/16/2007 10:01 PM
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Wooo!!! I’m excited to write the first chapter! Hopefully my writing style will mesh nicely with Mia’s… but I guess there is only one way to find out *Deep breath* Here goes nothing…

 

Worth A Thousand Words. Chapter 1.

 

  Perched on top of a wooden picnic bench, I clutched my camera tightly as it rested on my lap. I have been at this park for almost an hour now, and have had zero luck in regards to finding the “perfect” shot. I sighed and got up on my feet.

  It was a beautiful day at the park. The bright orange leaves that still clung to the tree branches were swaying in the crisp wind, one by one descending to the ground. Their color popped in contrast to the dull grey sky.

  I love fall… The bright colors and cool temperatures are invigorating, yet soothing at the same time. The changing seasons are so beautiful and… familiar.

  Okay so I guess taking a picture of the leaves and crap is out of the question. -not to mention, cliché to the max!

  I walked across the small soccer field in the middle of the park. I can remember numerous little league soccer victories that took place on this very field… many losses too, but hey, I can’t help it if the team was more interested in the post game pizza party rather than the game itself.  

  I guess that makes this a familiar place too huh?...  

  I kept walking past a row of three elm trees. I stopped in front of the last one and grazed my finger tips across a hasty engraving into the trunk. “L.A. + R.T.” with a makeshift heart around it.  Memories of my ex boyfriend came flooding into my mind. I remember he carved that into the tree on our 1 month anniversary… once again, familiar.

  Ughh was Mr. Gales’ sole purpose in life to frustrate me with this project?

  I took one final glance around the park. Maybe there was something I was missing… something new –other than the playground equipment.

  I glanced from the street to the forest, there has to be something here, something different, something unfamiliar somewhere.

  Just then I saw it… the perfect shot. How could I not see it before, they had been standing there the whole time. I raised the camera to my eye, and glanced through the small lens, and it all came together, like a revelation.

  Standing at a street corner were 3 guys, they looked to be various ages, all in the 13-21 age bracket. The oldest looking one was holding a map and pointing at the street sign, while a curly haired boy was pointing the opposite direction. The guy in the middle was looking somewhere off into the distance, probably looking at the statue that stood in the middle of Alden Park. They looked lost, more so, they looked as if they were in an unfamiliar place.

  I quickly snapped the picture and heaved a huge sigh of relief. I did it… I actually found the shot. I was about to go home and relish in the complete-ness of my assignment, until I remembered what Mr. Gales had told us. “If your photo has a person, or persons in it please make sure to get their written consent to be photographed”

  That means confrontation doesn’t it? Don’t get me wrong, I mean… I’m not painfully shy or anything, but let’s just say that meeting new people is not one of my stronger points.

  I quickly slipped the lens cap onto the camera, and started walking towards the guys. Ohh but just my luck, as soon as I get within 10 feet of these boys, they start to walk away. I sighed and picked up my pace.

  “Excuse me…” I called out.

  They all simultaneously stopped walking, and turned around. The guy with straight hair stepped forward. “Hey there, what’s your name?” he asked.

  “Um… Lisa…” I answered. I was kind of confused; I mean does he address all strangers like this?”   

  “Hey there Lisa, nice to meet you! Want an autograph or something?” he asked in a very friendly manner.

  He wasn’t even joking or anything, he was being dead serious, asking me if I wanted his autograph. “…Excuse me?” I asked.   

  “Ugh, Joe… I don’t think she’s a fan…” whispered the curly haired boy.

  “…Ohh.” The guy –who I’m assuming is Joe- said. “Well then what does she want?”

  “Why don’t you ask her?” The oldest one chimed in. They all turned their heads towards me at the exact same time. It was kind of creepy actually.

  “Umm… I’m doing a photography project for school, and I just took an amazing shot of the three of you. I just need your consent to be able to turn in the photo, so do you mind?” I asked.

  “No, not at all.” Replied the oldest. “It wouldn’t be the first photo we’ve ever been in…”

  I didn’t get it, but I politely laughed anyways. I pulled out a photo release form from my photography folder and asked them to sign it. They quickly signed the form and handed it back to me.

  “Thanks a lot!” I said “Hopefully you guys get me an A!”    

  “Fingers crossed” replied the oldest one. “It was nice meeting you Lisa”

  “You too. Thanks again for the shot.” I said, and with that I turned on my heels and headed back home.

  On the walk back home I got a text. I flipped open my phone. It was from Abbie.

Hey, I heard u need help 2 find the “perfect shot”? where shud i meet u?

The message read. I smiled and typed up a reply.

No need. I think I already found it…

 

Haha, so that was my feeble attempt at a chapter. Hope you guys liked it, comments make Mia & I smile! :)


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New Post 11/16/2007 10:53 PM
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Wow... I just read the Prologue & the 1st chapter, and i must say... I'M IN LOVE WITH A FANFICTION! Seriously,Both of your writing styles are so different, but so similar, it's really interesting to read. And this might be the most gramatically correct fic that I have ever read! (not to mention that my vocab grows with every post) Keep it up you two! Mia, I believe you're up! <3

_Randi


Randi by day....... NINJA BY NIGHT! lol Lauren - - - - Jonas Brothers are life <3
 
New Post 11/16/2007 11:09 PM
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YAY!!!! so they come into play...i wonder wut will happen next!!! That was amazing!! Mia, Lauren--your writing styles are amazing together!! i feel soo lucky to be the main character in a fic written by both of you, together.....i CANNOT wait for more!!! PMASAP!!!

Lots o'Love

~LISA~


~LISA~
 
New Post 11/16/2007 11:13 PM
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Good stuff, good stuff.

I love how you both write!

Anyway, PMS!


 
New Post 11/16/2007 11:32 PM
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ohhh i love this so far!!


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New Post 11/16/2007 11:53 PM
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Modified By offcourseofcourse  on 1/12/2008 9:26:56 PM)

Glad everyone's liking it so far.  The weekend is finally here and I'm planning on waking early especially to write some more for you wonderful, wonderful people.  Comments make the fingers type and the lips smile.

-Mia

Worth a Thousand Words: Chapter 2

    There’s something peaceful about developing film: comfort in the order, in the motion of flipping the tank over in a regular motion, of timing things precisely, and pouring and measuring and having absolute control.  I’m not a control freak or anything, but I liked developing film.  I’m not the best photography student of the bunch, though certainly not the worst, meaning I understand f-stops and shutter speed in theory, but sometimes the “vision” just isn’t there.  Maybe I try too hard, maybe I don’t let myself just see or feel or whatever led to brilliant photographs.  On my last photo assignment, Mr. Gales wrote, “Lisa, your technical skills are superb, but I found that your interpretation could have delved deeper.  Things don’t have to be perfect to photograph.  Often the best work comes out of the imperfections.  Take a walk with your camera and just shoot.”
    So for this one?  I didn’t take a walk exactly, but I’d dare to say that I ambled through the park for a fair amount of time.  The timer went off, signaling that I should put in the next chemical.   I was in the photo lab after school developing my film.  Abbie had band until 4:45, and Div was at volleyball practice until 6:00, meaning that I had quite a bit of time before anyone would disturb me by calling.  After a few more minutes, and another round of chemicals, I pried the lid off of the tank, removed the light trap, and pulled up the reel of film.  It was covered in soapy suds, so I couldn’t see anything yet, but after thoroughly washing it, my favorite part came, pulling the negative off of the spool.
    It’s a surprise that gets me every time, a generous statement, as this was only my third time ever developing.  But watching the little boxes unravel from the spool in shades of black and dark purple and knowing that you’ve created something, even if it is only pictures from a childhood park.  I slid my fingernail under the end of the negatives and started to carefully but firmly remove the film.  Some of them were bad.  A few too thin, a few too dense.  Maybe I didn’t understand shutter speed as well as I had thought.  I watched the progression of my shoot unravel.  A seesaw, some swings, an empty soccer goal (I never did play goalie!).  I was coming up on it, the shot.  ‘Why did I only take one?’  I asked myself, but then I remembered that taking pictures of people without their knowledge was creepy and once I had their consent and informed them of my presence, the photograph would have looked too posed.  It popped free of the spool and I quietly let out a breath.  It looked okay, I guessed.
    Their backs were to me, and I could just make out an arm pointing at the street sign while another was pointing the opposite way.  The one in the middle, Joe I think his name was, had his head tilted at a jaunty angle and seemed completely confused as to what his companions were doing.  Either that or he was immensely interested in the statue.  Personally, I never found looking at the idealized likeness of an old, dead man particularly interesting, but I guess some people roll that way.
    I hung my negatives in the dryer and rinsed out the tank, graduated cylinders, and organized the chemicals into their proper order.  My pocket began to buzz.  Pockets on principal shouldn’t buzz, but I had my phone tucked into mine so I supposed it was okay.  I walked into the hallway: Mr. Gales hated cell phones.   He even had a sign saying: “Got a call?  Take it outside.”  Luckily it was after hours and he wasn’t there, but I sometimes felt like he had eyes in the walls.
    “Hello?”  I asked after flipping my phone open.
    “Lisa Ann!  Where have you been?!?”  My mother’s shrill voice came in crystal clear over the cell phone.  There was no question of “Can you hear me now?”  She had pulled out the double first name too.  Lisa Ann.  She must have been quite upset.  “You were supposed to have been home 30 minutes ago to meet me and go shopping for Shelly’s birthday present!”  I groaned.
    “Sorry!  I completely forgot…I got caught up in photo, developing my film, but I can be home in 15 minutes!”  The line went dead.  Word of advice: don’t mess with mothers when they’re stressed and upset with you.
Shelly is my soon to be 7-year-old cousin.  She loves all things pink, pretty ponies, and belting out Disney songs at the top of her lungs.  Don’t get me wrong; I love Shelly.  I baby-sit her a lot and according to my Aunt I’m her favorite cousin.  I believe that this year’s party features a princess bounce-house, a lot of second grader’s hyped up on sugar, and some sort of magician. But at least it’s a family affair so I’ll have other cousins lurking around.






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