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New Post 7/10/2007 6:20 AM
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Tell me what you think. PART 2. 
Hey guys! well this is what you've been waiting for! CHAPTER 1!!!

   

Chapter 1

 

          Two months later…

 

          Nick introduced Carla to the family, including Katie. At first Kevin and Joe weren’t too keen because they thought that she was just like Stephanie. But as time went by they started to get to know Carla and liked her.

 

          Meanwhile.

 

“I have to go away again.” Nick told Carla. They were in the park sitting on a bench.

 

          “What? Didn’t you just go away last week? What is it that you do Nick?” Carla asked.

 

          (Wow she still doesn’t know.)

 

          “Well… Joe, Kevin and I are in a band. You’ve never heard of us? The Jonas Brothers?” Nick said.

 

          Carla shook her head.

 

          “Well we’re sort of on tour right now to promote our new album.” Nick said.

 

          “Oh.” Carla said.

 

          “But you can come if you want.” Nick offered.

 

          “No, it’s ok I still have to do some things here.” Carla said, sounding depressed.

 

          At the Mall.

 

          “Mhm…” Joe said. Spacing out.

 

          “Joe? Are you ok?!” I asked.

 

          “Yeah. Sure whatever.” Joe said.

 

          These past days, even weeks. Joe seemed so different. He wasn’t like the Joe I used to know. It seems like he doesn’t care anymore. Like he wants to break up with me. I thought. But I shook my head and ignored my thoughts.

 

          “So you’re going to Alabama right?” I asked.

 

          “Yeah, you know the tour.” Joe said.

 

          We were holding hands. But I got really annoyed that I let go of his and started to walk faster than him.

 

 

Comment make me REALLY happy. so you better comment and i would continue writing! :P

 
New Post 7/10/2007 8:01 AM
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Re: Tell me what you think. PART 2. 

whats wrong with joe??! lol

post more soon!!!!!!!

 
New Post 7/10/2007 8:44 AM
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Re: Tell me what you think. PART 2. 
somethings wrong with joe.i miss him!!!!post more soon...i am so excited to see what happens next!!!!post a new chapter soon!!!!i wonder what's going to happen between them?hmmm....post more this is a really good fan fic.i am not really into joe fan fic's..but this one made me interested into them!!post more soon!!
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New Post 7/10/2007 9:54 AM
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Re: Tell me what you think. PART 2. 
NOOO! oh man! More Pleaz!!
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New Post 7/10/2007 6:36 PM
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Re: Tell me what you think. PART 2. 
    Yo guys! so i hope you're liking it so far. :) So here is Chapter 2! and nickbabe4life POST! :)) have fun.

   

Chapter 2

 

          Joe noticed alright. He caught up with me and pulled me to stop.

 

          “What’s wrong with you?” He asked.

 

          “What’s wrong with me?! What’s wrong with you, Joe?” I said practically screaming.

 

          “What did I do wrong?!” He asked.

 

          “Why are you acting this way?!” I asked him.

 

          “I’m not doing anything!” He said.

 

          “Forget it.” I said and walked away. Tears streaming down my face.

 

          In the Park.

 

          Carla was really happy for Nick. She was just sort of depressed because he had to go away so often.

 

          “So, what do you want to do?” Nick asked.

 

          “You can take me home. I have loads of homework to do. You are so lucky you are Home-Study! Argh.” Carla said trying to lighten things up.

 

          “Haha.” Nick laughed and held Carla’s hand.

 

          So they walked to the car.

 

          (Ok, so Nick is too young to drive. Haha. But let’s just say he can here. Ok? :P)

 

          In the Mall.

 

          I rushed to the bathroom and looked at myself in the mirror. I looked like a wreck.

 

          I can’t believe it. Tomorrow is my birthday and he’s acting this way. I thought to myself.

 

          I fixed myself up and went out of the bathroom I saw Joe there, waiting for me.

 

          “You ready?” He asked. Like he didn’t care that we just had a fight.

 

          “Whatever.” I said.

         

          Then we left the mall.


You know how much i love comments, so COMMENT! then i will be happy to write moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. :)

 
New Post 7/10/2007 7:20 PM
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Re: Tell me what you think. PART 2. 
You should definatly post more soon.
 
New Post 7/10/2007 9:06 PM
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Re: Tell me what you think. PART 2. 
post more soon!!i am about to post the next chapter on my fan fic.stay updated.post more soon.it's very interesting!!
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New Post 7/11/2007 12:09 AM
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more plz
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New Post 7/11/2007 12:34 AM
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Re: Tell me what you think. PART 2. 
Whoa What's with Joe and Katie? But mostly Joe. Kinda weird ,but I want more please.
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New Post 7/11/2007 6:07 AM
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Re: Tell me what you think. PART 2. 
    Hello Guys! :)) well i'm liking the comments so far! just keep going kay? SO here is Chapter 3! :P

   

Chapter 3

 

          I woke up with a negative thought. I checked my sidekick for any messages but there were none.

 

          “He didn’t remember.” I said to myself.

 

          I got up and took a quick shower. Then I called Carla, she’s sort of a sister to me. Ever since Nick introduced her to us. I’ve been close to her ever since.

 

          Carla was still asleep when her phone rang. She couldn’t open her eyes so she just waved her hand till she reached her phone.

 

          “Hello?” Carla said.

 

          “Hey Carla!” I said.

 

          “Hey! Oh. HEY! HAPPY BIRTHDAY!” Carla said.

 

          I moved the phone away from my ear a little.

 

          “Thanks!” I said. “So want to have lunch?” I continued.

 

          “Sure. But aren’t you going to hang out with Joe today, Katie?” Carla asked.

 

          “Uhm… I’ll tell you about it later.” I said in a depressed tone.

 

          “Ok.” Carla said.

 

          So after 20 minutes I picked up Carla from her house and we went to the mall.

 

          We were just looking around and shopped a little. After awhile we were getting really hungry so we decided to look for a Mexican Restaurant.

 

          “So Katie, why didn’t you hang out with Joe today?” Carla asked.

 

          “It’s because…” I said.

 

          “Yeah?” Carla asked.

 

          We got to the restaurant and went inside. Not too far away, I saw Joe eating with a girl with blonde hair. They were laughing away and Joe was holding her hand.

 

          “It’s because of that.” I said, practically speechless.

 

          “Oh… My… God.” was all Carla could say.


    Comment make Me happy as you all know SO COMMENT! and on the 13th is my Brithday so i might post two chapter then! SO COMMENT!!! :P

 
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