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Krystal's Comment: This is for Delaney, she wrote this and will be writing this. I think you should read and comment....you know you want to(: *Still in Delaney’s POV * “You don’t know how long I’ve been wanting to do that” “ I think I have an idea” I smiled He smiled and said, “This isn’t all your surprise” “What else?” “I’ll show you “ he smiled taking my hand and leading me back inside “HAPPY 16TH BIRTHDAY !” everyone yelled I stood there in awe. “Surprise” I didn’t reply I just jumped on Nick and gave him another kiss. He pulled away smiling. “I figured you were planning something “ He smiled and took my hand. The party began and I was having the time of my life Nick and I sat on the couch talking with Krystal and Joe actually more like watching them make out. Nick pulled me onto his lap even though we had only been dating for a few hours it felt like I was meant to be held in his muscular, protective arms.
Krystal's Comment: This is for Delaney, she wrote this and will be writing this. I think you should read and comment....you know you want to(:
*Still in Delaney’s POV *
“You don’t know how long I’ve been wanting to do that” “ I think I have an idea” I smiled He smiled and said, “This isn’t all your surprise” “What else?” “I’ll show you “ he smiled taking my hand and leading me back inside “HAPPY 16TH BIRTHDAY !” everyone yelled I stood there in awe. “Surprise” I didn’t reply I just jumped on Nick and gave him another kiss. He pulled away smiling. “I figured you were planning something “ He smiled and took my hand. The party began and I was having the time of my life Nick and I sat on the couch talking with Krystal and Joe actually more like watching them make out. Nick pulled me onto his lap even though we had only been dating for a few hours it felt like I was meant to be held in his muscular, protective arms.
thanks for posting this for me :)
no problem.(:
now, i think you should get to posting/writing or whatever?
yeah, i have four pages but i kind of running out of ideas for it
any1 want an update?
UPDATE! Ooo, can I be in the story?? :P (Hint: I like Kevin!)
-Bee-
sry i already have someone for Kevin but your in my other story as Kevin's gf
Nick pulled me onto his lap even though we had only been dating for a few hours it felt like I was meant to be held in his muscular, protective arms. “You having fun, baby?” he asked looking deep into my eyes “More than you’ll ever know “ I smiled as he kissed me delicately “I l--- ---’”before he could finish his sentence his mom called us for cake “Make a wish, Delaney “ “I don’t need to , it already came true “ I smiled “Just wish for something , I want to eat cake “ Joe whined “You’ll eat cake all right “said Nick reaching his hand towards my cake I slapped his hand away and said “ Let me do the honors “ He nodded I grabbed a chunk of cake and threw it in Joe’s face. “MMM, that’s good but you’re going to get it “ said Joe picking up another chunk of cake and throwing it at me but Nick blocked it “It’s on “ Nick said picking up another piece of cake and throwing it at Joe but this time Krystal blocked it Krystal picked another piece and threw it at Nick but it hit me instead. “You guys are so immature “ said Kevin “Come on , live a little Kevi” said Shayla as a piece of cake hit him in the face Shayla laughed. “Someone’s going to pay,” said Kevin picking up a piece of cake and throwing it We continued to have our cake fight.
“How are we going to wash this off?” “Let’s go jump in the pool “ suggested Nick “That sounds good “ I said, “Race you guys to the pool “ Nick said to everyone We all raced to the pool and the guys jumped in.
CAKE FIGHT !!!!
pms(:
one more review and i'll update
