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New Post 11/24/2007 10:30 AM
User is offline AbbeytheDino
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Promises Break, Its Life.  
Modified By AbbeytheDino  on 11/24/2007 9:31:51 AM)

New story, YAY! Well.. Yeah. This is the extremely short first chapter.

 

I stood at the airport nervously. I know they haven't changed, well... they haven't MUCH, it seems. Other than looks. But I've changed looks and personality. They wont like the new either. Thats just because they look at me like older brothers. I've actually gotten attractive. But of course if I told them that, Nick would say, "You've always been gorgeous." And it will be a major lie.

I used to wear glasses, and braces. And I was chubby. Not fat, just had some extra weight. I wasn't the prettiest girl ever. But now, I've grown up. I'm seventeen, have contacts, very straight teeth and stick skinny because I worked out all summer a couple years ago, and now I can eat whatever and stay skinny. How strange. And personality... Well, I still have my old one. Times ten.

But... well. I feel like a major liar right now. I glanced down at my finger one last time. No ring. I bit my bottom lip. It was a mistake, and as much as I would like to be honest with my favorite boys, who I haven't seen in three years. I can't. I know the second they ask, I'll try to say the truth, but some loser lie will come out. Something like, "Oh, it fell down the shower drain. I'm getting a new one."

But the thing about old best friends, as much time goes by, they still always know if you telling the truth or not.

Sometimes I wish I didn't used to be best friends with the Jonas Brothers.

 
New Post 11/24/2007 10:36 AM
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Re: Promises Break, Its Life.  

LOVE IT ABBEY!
Keep writing!

xoxo
Taylor

 
New Post 11/24/2007 11:01 AM
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Re: Promises Break, Its Life.  

I shzall write the first real chaper later.

 
New Post 11/24/2007 11:12 AM
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Re: Promises Break, Its Life.  

 Abbey[: wrote

I shzall write the first real chaper later.

Okay cool =]

 
New Post 11/24/2007 11:43 AM
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Re: Promises Break, Its Life.  

awesome so far (=

PMS!

-Rain


 
New Post 11/24/2007 12:04 PM
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Re: Promises Break, Its Life.  

omg, i loooove it. PMS!



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New Post 11/24/2007 1:02 PM
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Re: Promises Break, Its Life.  

The flight landed, and Mimi found herself even more nervous. This isn't one of those things you can mention then quickly than drop the subject. They'd never talk to her again. Thats a lie, they'd be supportive. But they'd never look at her the same way. They were not touring for the summer, and their tour mate, Miley Cyrus, was coming along too.

That made her nervous.

Miley is gorgeous, and there are tons of rumors that she's dating Nick. Even if they aren't dating, she obviously likes him. Mimi is way to old for Nick anyway. But they've always had a special something, that no one could explain. Same with her and Joe. Its just how they are. Soon, the boys exited the airplane, Miley Cyrus strolling along next to them.

No matter how nervous she thought she'd be when they're here... now that she see's them, its ten times worse. They didn't know she'd be waiting for them, so they just walked right past her. If she said she was disappionted, it'd be a lie. She was glad they didn't look at her and see her old self.

She picked up her cell and dialed "4" soon, Kevin answered. She could still see them, with their back to her. Mama and Papa Jonas saw her already, and winked. They talked to her Dad everyday on the phone, so they know how different she looks by what he says. "Hey Mi." Kevin spoke into his cell phone. Mimi noticed Nick and Joe turn their attention to the phone.

"HI MIMI!" Joe yelled into the speaker of the phone. Kevin put it on loud speaker. The airport wasn't busy whatsoever today.

"Hey, how are you? WHERE are you? ARE YOU HERE YET!?" Mimi asked into her phone, wincing when it echoed. Nick was the only one to notice that.

"Good, we just landed, So... yes, we're here. Where are you?" Kevin spoke, giving Joe a look for yelling into the speaker. Nick glanced around. Not many young people, except a girl around 17 with pretty blonde hair and blue eyes. He frowned looking at the girls features. Familure is the word that came to mind.

"Ohh, I'm... in the car." Mimi lied, not noticing Nick staring at her. Nick on the other hand, read her moving lips. His jaw dropped. Now he saw her in a different light, not some stranger, his best friend. Her hair and eyes were the same, you could just see the eyes better when they aren't stuck under glasses. She had shiney white teeth, that were braces free and straight. She was wearing a dark blue dress with ended above her knees but not in a slutty way. Last, she was wearing converse. Dirty and black. At least that didn't change.

He walked from the group, catching everyones attention, and went over to her and hugged her. She laughed and hugged him ten times harder. It was about time one of them noticed her standing there. Joe and Kevins look of curiosity turned to joy after a minute, and engolfed her in a hug aswell.

They wouldn't be that happy for long.

 

 

 

 

BTW, this is a short story. It'll only be about 4 or 5 chapter long.

 
New Post 11/24/2007 1:24 PM
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Re: Promises Break, Its Life.  

oh i love this so far!!  Can't wait to hear more!!!
pmasap!



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New Post 11/24/2007 1:28 PM
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Re: Promises Break, Its Life.  

AMAZING!

 
New Post 11/24/2007 1:42 PM
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Re: Promises Break, Its Life.  

Hahahaha.... Too cute!  <3  PMS.  I love it so far.


Thankies Allison for the siggy!

Clicky for the FF~

 
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