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New Post 11/27/2007 9:08 PM
User is offline playmeachordx3
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11:11 

YO! new story :] by me.

comment if you read it please, even if u think its horrible times a bijjioin. <33

-sorry for the mistakes im pretty sure im gonna make. and the title will make sense more into the story.

Marcie went into her bedroom, clicked on the comptuer and waited for it to load. While she waited she reached under her bed and pulled out last year's yearbook. She hadn't looked at it since right before the summer and it was now mid October. She wiped off the dust on the cover and turned to her picture. She had braces, long curly blonde hair and was overweight. During the summer she had the ultimate makeover for her first year of high school. She has since dyed and cut her hair brown, chemically straightened it. She got her braces of right before her first week of high school and learned how to dress and apply makeup. But most of the transformation was in how she had lost 50 pounds by excersizing and yoga and other healthy methods. No one recongizes her now, no one has noticed her up until now. That is expcept her best friend Luna. Luna was perfection in a bottle. Long blond hair and eyes that changed colors almost everyday. Marcie thought it was so ironic that Luna had been her best friend before the makeover, sure plenty of girls want to be her friend now, but Luna was there when she needed her. When the stick thin girls and gorgeous jerks  called her a "cow" and threw food at her at lunch. Everyone loved Luna so she could get them to stop, but having food thrown at you once, shows you how much you never want it to happen again. Marcie was determined to lose the weight during the summer although Luna didn't approve she helped her anyway. Well now the change has shown and same guys who called Marcie fat, are begging for her number.

BLEEP BLEEP! The computer had loaded and AIM had auto signed her in. 

Marcie left the yearbook on top of her bed and went to the computer. Luna was iming her.

itsLUNA!:MARCIE MARCIE MARCIE!! wee neeeeeeeeeeeeeddd to have a sleepover, these stupid high school schedules have left me unmarcieloved. u should come over right now-izzle.

xomarcieox: pfft, u knoe i love me sum luna. but yeah we should have the sleepover. im free tonights.

itsLUNA!: yeahhhhhhhhhhh boi, just bring stuff for tonight and tommorw and call ur dad at work. he lets u do watever.

xomarcieox: haha otay. brb ill call him.

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xomarcieox: UGH!! my dad said that tommorw i have to go to sum blood drive at this hospital. i can go, but well have to wake up early and go to it.

itsLUNA!: pffttttttttttt u knoe me. whut time is it? ill sleep in till it finishes.

xomarcieox: its at 11:00. i feel horriblez, but my dad sed theres gunna be sum band perfroming. called the jonas brothers. lmao who are they. probably sum old geezer band lmao. if my dad said he likes them, then their horrible x)

itsLUNA!: rofl. then we have to go, we can act all retarted and like scream when they play. oh and we should ride our bikes from like 3rd grade there. the diabetes hospitals like 2 blocks away from my el casa. sleepovers on :]

xomarcieox: and this is why i love you. :] ima go get my stuff ready.

itsLUNA!: ighht, ill go clean my room real fast. just walk right in. see u in a lil bitt

xomarcieox: yesshirrrrrrrrrrrr.

xomarcieox has signed off.

Marcie got all her stuff and rode her way to small way to childish hot pink and purple bike to Luna's.  She walked in and kicked off her black converse by the door. Luna yelled from her room upstairs, "OMG GET IN HERE! YOU HAVE TO SEE AND HERE THIS!!" Marcie ran upstairs into Luna's teal room and then jumped and landed on her bed. Luna was on the computer jumping up and down on her computer chair. "Come look at this."  Marcie laughed, "Ha, hello to ya too Luna." Marcie walked over to the computer and became wide eyed. Luna had looked up the Jonas Brothers on Youtube and was watching their S.O.S video. Marcie put two and two togther and realized that this was the band her dad was talking about and that they were famous and incredbly hott. Not to mention that they could sing. Marcie fell in love with the curly haired one on the spot. They watched some more videos and

Marcie-"But I thought-" Luna read her mind. She was thinking the exact same thing.Luna-"I know. This changes everything for tommorw." Marcie thought the same but different. "No, we still have to kinda act crazy and do our own thing to, I mean we'll listen to their songs and stuff but look at the comments. You can tell people obsess over them everday." Luna understood, half the comments were either 'ILOVEYOU!' or 'Marry me. your hott'. "Okay but promise me one thing." Luna said holding out her pinky, "We have to look cutex692854382." Marcie and her were cracking up. They spent the rest of the night obsessing over JB and picking our wat they were going to were and stuff. Marcie liked Nick and Luna thought Kevin was the cutest but liked Joe's personality the most. They both fell asleep and dreamed of how tommorw was going to change their lives.

 end of chapter 1!!

Sorry it was short, im not shure if anyone liked it it was kinda boring. but the next chapter is verrrrrrrrrrry eventful!!

comments comments comments.

 
New Post 11/27/2007 9:13 PM
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haha great start, you should update soon!


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New Post 11/27/2007 9:16 PM
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awhh thanks yous! :]

i will as soon as i get a few more commentos. your supa dupa nice :)

 
New Post 11/27/2007 9:17 PM
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This is Short?!! Whatev. PMS!! And read my fan fic called: "So bored with these...games, lies, and well with you!!" It's pretty interesting!!


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New Post 11/27/2007 9:18 PM
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i like it so far
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New Post 11/27/2007 10:31 PM
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awhhh you guys are sooooo sweet.

heres chapter twahh :]

Marcie put on a red t shirt and sum skinny jeans. She wore her angel wing necklace and her peace sign long necklace.Luna put on normal jeans and a hollister shirt and wore a big red anchor pendant. By the time they finished getting ready, it was 10 minutes to 11:00. They looked outside and it was raining so Marcie grabbed her white sweatshirt. Even though it was raining they were still going to ride the bikes there and act goofy, Marcie and Luna loved the rain.

Marcie- http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=user.viewprofile&friendid=39906890 PLEASE DONT ADD or CONTACT HER. SHE IS MY FRIEND'S FRIEND. PLEASEEEEE!!!

Luna's shirt-(i couldnt find a Luna that matched who I wrote about so until i get it ill post links to her outfits and such. sorry) http://www.hollisterco.com/webapp/wcs/stores/servlet/product_10251_10201_377220_-1_12628_12552

Luna brought her camera in a ziplock bag so it wouldnt get wet and put it in her bike basket. From then Marcie and Luna rode their bikes and laughed their way to the hospital. The Jonas Brothers were playing wiffle ball in the rain by their huge silver tour bus that was parked by the little kids playground. Luna spotted them and made a plan with Marcie to ride up to the grass right by them, get out of their too-small-bikes laughing and cracking up and to dance in the rain. Marcie agreed and they pulled up to the playground and parked their bikes laughing and giggling and then ran on the swings while the Jonas brothers were about 30 feet away playing wiffle ball in the grass. They turned their heads as soon as they saw Marcie and Luna jump on the swings. Marcie saw them look and turned away quickly in a low voice she squealed to Luna, "Did you see that, they LOOKED at us. Oh my god, Oh my god, act natural like we dont even know who they are."

Luna had another plan, since they couldnt dance in the rain without making it look planned besides it didnt feel natural at the point so she decided they should go on the merry-go-round and ask Jb to come help turn it for them.

They sat down and then Luna being the more outgoing one called out, "Uhm, hey. Could you help spin us?".

Jonas Brother P.O.V

"Uhm, hey. Could you help spin us?" said two random yet cute girls.

"Ha; Of course." Joe Jonas answered while throwing the bat down and leaving Nick and Kevin just standing there about to pitch the ball to nothing but thin air. Then they realized her left and follwed him.

"You don't have to if you don't want to though." The brown haired girl said, while the blonde one nudged her in the elbow.

"Haha. No problem." Nick said, the girl who had just spoken was about the prettyest girl he had seen.

Nick stood next to where Marcie was sitting on the merry-go-round and decided that this is where he would push it.

Joe stood by Luna and helped push and Kevin spoke the girls and introuduced themselves while Joe and Nick pushed.

"Well I'm Kevin. The taller one pushing you is Joe and the curly haired one is Nick."

Luna spoke first, "Nice to meet you, I'm Luna." Marcie spoke next but while she was trying to turn her head to Kevin and was spinning at the same time she lost her balance and toppled over Nick and fell right on top of him.

While on top of Nick, she mustered. "I'm Marcie."

Nick thought Wow, shes pretty and I kinda-ish caught her before she fell.

"Nice to meet you, Marcie." Nick didn't move and neither did Marcie. They just lay on the woodchips on the playground until they heard snickering coming from Joe Luna and Kevin. Marcie blushed, and Nick thought it was the cutest thing ever as she got off of him and brushed herself off and folded her arms saying sorry over and over again.

Back to Normal P.O.V.

By this time it was pouring and Marcie and Luna and the Jonas Brothers had been playing on the playground and getting to know each other for an hour now. Joe and Luna kept flirting and Marcie couldn't help but get butterflys everytime Nick looked at her, which he did alot.

A man in a black shirt that had the word 'bodyguard' on it with jeans and an earbud came over and told the Jonas Brothers they had to go in and setup. This was good timing because Luna and Marcie where ready to exploded with screams of joy and had been holding it in for over an hour. They hugged goodbye and when Joe got to Luna he gave her a playful barehug and then winked her goodbye. Joe gave a normal hug to Marcie and told her he liked her necklaces. Kevin waved goodbye and was super nice to them. When Nick came to hug Marcie he had his hands in his pockets and then took one out and rubbed his head and then looked up at her. When the hug came it was close and they both held on for a little while and the bodyguard called for Nick to come in.  He gave Luna a wave in his hurry and ran inside. As soon as they were out of site Marcie and Luna screamed at the top of their lungs.

"Oh my god, did that just really happen, Marcie? Pimp slap me to make sure!" Marcie jokingly went to slap her when Luna screamed,"Pfft, are yu kuku-bananas, I dont know where your hand has been. In Nick Jonas's maybe!?" Luna teased. "Oh, you wanna go?" Marcie pretended to take off her earrings. "YEAH!" Luna screamed. They both burst out laughing but mostly where just all jittery from the JB meeting that just happened.

By then they were soaked and forgot that Marcie was supposed to give blood. They ran inside through a strange door. Marcie ran in without looking and ran completey into Nick. Not twice in one day she thought.

 :] Ill post more with more commentos :D

 

 

 

 
New Post 11/27/2007 10:38 PM
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haha another great chapter! keep the updates coming!


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New Post 11/27/2007 10:45 PM
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awh. ur such a nice person :D

ill update soon.

 
New Post 11/27/2007 10:47 PM
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hah great! I'll be waiting! you're a great writer!!!


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New Post 11/27/2007 10:58 PM
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ill update after 3 commentes every single chapter but if im super excited i probably wont mind lol. but yeah so thats 2 more :]

 
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